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ruby

Dec. 18, 2019

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Memorizing

Today, I went through the chapter on articles in my text book.

There are a tremendous number of expressions that I have to memorize, if you want to be fluent in English.

Sometimes, I feel like giving up improving my English. This is because if I memorize 10 idioms, there are so many cases where I forget 6 out of 10 a few days later.

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There areis a tremendous number of expressions that Iyou have to memorize, if you want to be fluent in English.

ruby's avatar
ruby

Dec. 19, 2019

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Thank you so much:D

Memorizing

Today, I went through the chapter on articles in my text book.

textbook is one word

There are a tremendous number of expressions that I have to memorize, if youI want to be fluent in English.

Stick with first person (eg "I") instead of switching to "you"

Sometimes, I feel like giving up [on] improving my English.

[Thisat] is because if I memorize 10 idioms, there are so many cases/times where I forget 6 out of 10 a few days later.

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Akihiko

Dec. 18, 2019

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Overall, good job!

I think you don't need to memorize all the idioms at once. In my opinion, the ones you should memorize are the one you use most often, and those idioms come naturally after you use them a lot.

お互いに頑張りましょう! :D

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ruby

Dec. 19, 2019

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Thank you for your nice comments.
The more often I encounter words, the better I can memorize them.
頑張りましょう!:D

Memorizing

Today, I went through the chapter on articles in my text book.

There are a tremendous number of expressions that I have to memorize, if youI want to be fluent in English.

Sometimes, I feel like giving up on improving my English.

This is because if I memorize 10 idioms, there are so many cases where I forget 6 out of 10 a few days later.

ruby's avatar
ruby

Dec. 19, 2019

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Thank you so much:D

There areis a tremendous number of expressions that I will have to memorize, if youI want to be fluent in English.

Sometimes, I feel like giving up improving my English.

ruby's avatar
ruby

Dec. 19, 2019

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Thank you so much:D

Memorizing

Today, I went through the chapter on articles in my text book.

There are a tremendous number of expressions that I have to memorize, if youI want to be fluent in English.

Or: "There are a tremendous number of expressions that you have to memorize if you want to be fluent in English."

Sometimes, I feel like giving up on improving my English.

This is because if I memorize 10 idioms, there are so many cases where Ioften I will forget 6 out of 10 a few days later.

The original sentence is not wrong, but this makes it a little simpler.

Feedback

You're doing great!

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jonm

Dec. 18, 2019

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Just in case it's unclear from the way the corrections show up, in the first sentence, "textbook" should be one word, without a space or a hyphen.

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ruby

Dec. 19, 2019

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I memorized a spelling of "textbook". Thank you so much:D

Memorizing

Today, I went through the chapter on articles in my text book.

There are a tremendous number of expressions that I have to memorize, if youI want to be fluent in English.

Or:

There are a tremendous number of expressions that you have to memorize, if you want to be fluent in English.

Sometimes, I feel like giving up (improving my English).

This is because if I memorize 10 idioms, there are so many casinstances wheren I forget 6 out of 10 a few days later.

Feedback

Very nice job. Don't give up! =]

ruby's avatar
ruby

Dec. 19, 2019

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Thank you so much:D

Memorizing


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Today, I went through the chapter on articles in my text book.

textbook is one word

There are a tremendous number of expressions that I have to memorize, if you want to be fluent in English.


There are a tremendous number of expressions that I have to memorize, if youI want to be fluent in English.

Or: There are a tremendous number of expressions that you have to memorize, if you want to be fluent in English.

There are a tremendous number of expressions that I have to memorize, if youI want to be fluent in English.

Or: "There are a tremendous number of expressions that you have to memorize if you want to be fluent in English."

There areis a tremendous number of expressions that I will have to memorize, if youI want to be fluent in English.

There are a tremendous number of expressions that I have to memorize, if youI want to be fluent in English.

There are a tremendous number of expressions that I have to memorize, if youI want to be fluent in English.

Stick with first person (eg "I") instead of switching to "you"

There areis a tremendous number of expressions that Iyou have to memorize, if you want to be fluent in English.

Sometimes, I feel like giving up improving my English.


Sometimes, I feel like giving up (improving my English).

Sometimes, I feel like giving up on improving my English.

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Sometimes, I feel like giving up on improving my English.

Sometimes, I feel like giving up [on] improving my English.

This is because if I memorize 10 idioms, there are so many cases where I forget 6 out of 10 a few days later.


This is because if I memorize 10 idioms, there are so many casinstances wheren I forget 6 out of 10 a few days later.

This is because if I memorize 10 idioms, there are so many cases where Ioften I will forget 6 out of 10 a few days later.

The original sentence is not wrong, but this makes it a little simpler.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

[Thisat] is because if I memorize 10 idioms, there are so many cases/times where I forget 6 out of 10 a few days later.

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