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hebereke

May 13, 2020

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Memoir of Eastern Europe

I traveled eastern European countries the year before last year, and I was surprised at the fact that old pictures allowed to reconstruct all of historical heritage around a square in a city completely after WWⅡ, which had destroyed them once. I was so impressed by their pride and enthusiasm that I lost my words at that time. I had never realized the importance of the protection of history so much before.


昨年東欧を旅行した時、ある町の広場とそれを取り巻くもろもろの歴史的建造物が、第二次世界大戦で破壊されたのに、古い写真をもとに完全に復元されたと知って驚きました。私は市民の誇りと情熱に胸を強く打たれ、言葉を失いました。この時ほど伝統を守ることの意義を痛切に感じたことはありません。

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I traveled eto some Eastern European countries thewo year before last years ago, and I was surprised atby the fact that old pictures allowed you to reconstruct all of the historical heritage around a square in a city completely after WWⅡ, which had destroyed them onceof city squares that were completely destroyed during WWII.

I was so imprleft speechlessed by their pride and enthusiasm that I lost my words at that time.

I had never before realized the importance of the protection of history so much before.

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hebereke

May 17, 2020

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thank you!!

Memoir of Eastern Europe

I traveled eto Eastern European countries thewo year before last years ago, and I was surprised at the fact that old pictures are allowed to reconstruc. These pictures present all of historical heritage around a square in a city completely after WWⅡ, which had destroyed them once.

This sentence was a little hard for me to understand, so I tried to make it sound smoother.
1) You say you travel "to" somewhere.
2) "the year before last year" is what we call a mouthfull (too much words) - it's smoother to say "two years ago"
3) I split the sentence since it was long, and I rewrote it - I hope I said what you wanted to say? :)

I was so impressed by their pride and enthusiasm that I lost my words at that time.

I had never before realized the importance of the protection of history so much before.

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I loved your text! Nice job :)

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hebereke

May 17, 2020

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thank you!!

Memoir of Eastern Europe


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I traveled eastern European countries the year before last year, and I was surprised at the fact that old pictures allowed to reconstruct all of historical heritage around a square in a city completely after WWⅡ, which had destroyed them once.


I traveled eto Eastern European countries thewo year before last years ago, and I was surprised at the fact that old pictures are allowed to reconstruc. These pictures present all of historical heritage around a square in a city completely after WWⅡ, which had destroyed them once.

This sentence was a little hard for me to understand, so I tried to make it sound smoother. 1) You say you travel "to" somewhere. 2) "the year before last year" is what we call a mouthfull (too much words) - it's smoother to say "two years ago" 3) I split the sentence since it was long, and I rewrote it - I hope I said what you wanted to say? :)

I traveled eto some Eastern European countries thewo year before last years ago, and I was surprised atby the fact that old pictures allowed you to reconstruct all of the historical heritage around a square in a city completely after WWⅡ, which had destroyed them onceof city squares that were completely destroyed during WWII.

I was so impressed by their pride and enthusiasm that I lost my words at that time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was so imprleft speechlessed by their pride and enthusiasm that I lost my words at that time.

I had never realized the importance of the protection of history so much before.


I had never before realized the importance of the protection of history so much before.

I had never before realized the importance of the protection of history so much before.

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