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March 24, 2022

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Membership at a sports club

I've joined a sports club not far from my place and the underground station. I badly need to get in shape but I lacked motivation to exercise. Now I have access to experienced and certified trainers and whenever I'm in a slump my new club mates will shout out words of encouragement .
I have signed up for bodysculpting classes and ballroom dancing lessons and I'm going to attend them twice a week.
My first aerobics class consisted in exercises toning buttocks and inner thighs. The instructor turned out to be my across-the-hall neighbour Adam.
The next day my muscles were sore and I could barely walk. However I decided not to give up especially when Adam informed me that my membership included unlimited access to sea water jaccuzi, steam saunas and beauty parlours.

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Membership at a sSports cClub

All content words in a title should be capitalized.

I've joined a sports club not far from my place and the undergroundmetro station.

Your original sentence with "underground" sounded a bit unusual to me, so I changed it to "metro". It isn't technically wrong, however.

I badly need to get in shape, but I have been lackeding motivation to exercise.

Now I have access to experienced and certified trainers, and whenever I'm in a slump my new club mates will shout out words of encouragement .

I have signed up for body-sculpting classes and ballroom dancing lessons, and I'm going to attend them twice a week.

My first aerobics class consisted in of exercises for toning the buttocks and inner thighs.

The instructor turned out to be my neighbor from across- the- hall neighbour, Adam.

The next day my muscles were sore and I could barely walk.

However I decided not to give up especially whenbecause Adam informed me that my membership included unlimited access to the sea water jaccuzi, steam saunas, and beauty parlours.

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orea5

March 24, 2022

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Thank you so much for your help🙂

Membership at a sports club


Membership at a sSports cClub

All content words in a title should be capitalized.

I've joined a sports club not far from my place and the underground station.


I've joined a sports club not far from my place and the undergroundmetro station.

Your original sentence with "underground" sounded a bit unusual to me, so I changed it to "metro". It isn't technically wrong, however.

I badly need to get in shape but I lacked motivation to exercise.


I badly need to get in shape, but I have been lackeding motivation to exercise.

Now I have access to experienced and certified trainers and whenever I'm in a slump my new club mates will shout out words of encouragement .


Now I have access to experienced and certified trainers, and whenever I'm in a slump my new club mates will shout out words of encouragement .

I have signed up for bodysculpting classes and ballroom dancing lessons and I'm going to attend them twice a week.


I have signed up for body-sculpting classes and ballroom dancing lessons, and I'm going to attend them twice a week.

My first aerobics class consisted in exercises toning buttocks and inner thighs.


My first aerobics class consisted in of exercises for toning the buttocks and inner thighs.

The instructor turned out to be my across-the-hall neighbour Adam.


The instructor turned out to be my neighbor from across- the- hall neighbour, Adam.

The next day my muscles were sore and I could barely walk.


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However I decided not to give up especially when Adam informed me that my membership included unlimited access to sea water jaccuzi, steam saunas and beauty parlours.


However I decided not to give up especially whenbecause Adam informed me that my membership included unlimited access to the sea water jaccuzi, steam saunas, and beauty parlours.

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