Feb. 18, 2023
MEETINGS
I had been sitting in a coffee shop for half an hour, when I heard a familiar voice. I looked around me in surprise, but I could not see anyone that I knew so I carried on drinking my coffee. I was in the process of decorating my new flat, and it would have been unlikely that I knew anyone around here. I heard the voice again and I realised that the speaker was an old school friend of mine. I had already seen this glamourous woman near the counter but did not recognise her at all. She was wearing a well-fitting suit and matching bell trousers. Poor village girl that she was would not even say boo to a goose when I went to class with her, now the luxury she must have been living in has turned her into a distinguished liones.
I went to my old primary school last week. I had been invited to visit to talk to a group of children about the work I am currently doing. The building is about 50 years old, and although it has been modernised, much of the building looks the same as it did when I attended it every day. They have just built a new sports centre which looks very impressive and CCTV cameras have recently been installed in the school's gatehouse. I had not been looking forward to the visit before I crossed the school's doorstep, however it was quite enjoyable. The kids sang a lovely song to greet me. But it was meeting my old teacher, Mr. Hopkins, that had put me in a great mood for days and a photo with Mr. Hopkins and the kids was the icing on the cake.
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I had been sitting in a coffee shop for half an hour, when I heard a familiar voice.
I looked around me in surprise, but I could not see anyone that(whom) I knew so I carried on drinking my coffee.
I was in the process of decorating my new flat, and so it would have been unlikely that I knew anyone around here.
I heard the voice again and I realiszed that the speaker was an old school friend of mine.
We spell "realize" with a "z" in the US.
I had already seen this glamourous woman near the counter but did not recognisze her at all.
We spell "glamorous" with only one "u" in the US. We spell "recognize" with a "z" in the US.
She was wearing a well-fitting suit and matching bell trousers.
PThe poor village girl that she was would not even say boo to a goose when I went to classschool with her, n. Now the luxury she must have been living in has turned her into a distinguished lioness.
I went to my old primary school last week.
I had been invited to visit to talk to a group of children about the work I am currently doing.
The building is about 50 years old, and, although it has been moderniszed, much of the building looks the same as it did when I attended it every dayused to attend classes here.
We spell "modernize" with a "z" in the US.
They have just built a new sports centre which looks very impressive and CCTV cameras have recently been installed in the school's gatehouse.
I hadwas not been looking forward to the visit before I crossed the school's doorstepthreshold, however, it was quite enjoyable.
The kids sang a lovely song to greet me.
But it was meeting my old teacher, Mr. Hopkins, that had put me in a great mood for days and a photo with Mr. Hopkins and the kids was the icing on the cake.
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I had been sitting in a coffee shop for half an hour, when I heard a familiar voice.
I looked around me in surprise, but I could not see anyone that I knew so I carried on drinking my coffee.
I was in the process of decorating my new flat, and it would have been unlikely that I knew anyone around here.
I heard the voice again and I realised that the speaker was an old school friend of mine.
I had already seen this glamourous woman near the counter but did not recognise her at all.
She was wearing a well-fitting suit and matching bell trousers.
Poor village girl that she was would not even say boo to a goose when I went to class with her, now the luxury she must have been living in has turned her into a distinguished lioness.
I went to my old primary school last week.
The building is about 50 years old, and although it has been modernised, much of the building looks the same as it did when I attended it every day.
They have just built a new sports centre which looks very impressive and CCTV cameras have recently been installed in the school's gatehouse.
I had not been looking forward to the visit before I crossed the school's doorstep, however it was quite enjoyable.
The kids sang a lovely song to greet me.
But it was meeting my old teacher, Mr. Hopkins, that had put me in a great mood for days and a photo with Mr. Hopkins and the kids was the icing on the cake.
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I had already seen this glamourous woman near the counter but did not recognise her at all. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I had already seen this glamo We spell "glamorous" with only one "u" in the US. We spell "recognize" with a "z" in the US. |
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Poor village girl that she was would not even say boo to a goose when I went to class with her, now the luxury she must have been living in has turned her into a distinguished liones. Poor village girl that she was would not even say boo to a goose when I went to class with her, now the luxury she must have been living in has turned her into a distinguished lioness.
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I went to my old primary school last week. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I had been invited to visit to talk to a group of children about the work I am currently doing. I had been invited to |
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The building is about 50 years old, and although it has been modernised, much of the building looks the same as it did when I attended it every day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The building is about 50 years old We spell "modernize" with a "z" in the US. |
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They have just built a new sports centre which looks very impressive and CCTV cameras have recently been installed in the school's gatehouse. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I had not been looking forward to the visit before I crossed the school's doorstep, however it was quite enjoyable. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I |
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The kids sang a lovely song to greet me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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