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SummerTeaWater

Sept. 8, 2021

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Meeting with my friends

Frankly, I don’t have enough time to meet my friends because I take care of my three children.

But I like to participate meetings, so if I have a chance, I always excuse to my wife for the meeting.

At the meeting, we can have interesting talks and share old memories.

Also, we have tasty food and delicious drinks to cheer up the mood.

The big thing is that keeping this relationship helps me boost my life.

Because the pandemic, it is very hard to make gatherings these days.

I hope the pandemic comes to an end soon.

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Meeting with my friends

FrankSadly, I don’t have enough time to mseet my friends because I take care of my three children.

"Frankly" would usually be used in response to something else, or to soften a harsh truth. "Do I look ugly in this hat?" "Frankly, it's not the best look on you."

But I like to participate meetingshang out with them, so, if I have aget the chance, I always make excuses to my wife for the meetingso I can go.

"Meetings" are like business meetings. Also, you only are "making excuses" if you're lying to your wife about where you'll be/trying to justify to her why you need to go. If you just tell her "Hey, I'm going out to hang out with my friends," then that's just letting her know.

At thWhen we meeting up, we can have interesting talkconversations and share old memories.

Also, weWe also have tasty food and delicious drinks to cheer up the moodrinks that everyone loves.

"Cheer up" implies that your friends were sad, and after a drink and some food they became happy.

The big thing is thatMost importantly, keeping thisup these relationships helps me boost myy social life.

Because of the pandemic, it is very hard to make gatheringshang out these days.

I hope the pandemic comes to an end soon.

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SummerTeaWater

Sept. 9, 2021

402

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Meeting with my friends


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Frankly, I don’t have enough time to meet my friends because I take care of my three children.


FrankSadly, I don’t have enough time to mseet my friends because I take care of my three children.

"Frankly" would usually be used in response to something else, or to soften a harsh truth. "Do I look ugly in this hat?" "Frankly, it's not the best look on you."

But I like to participate meetings, so if I have a chance, I always excuse to my wife for the meeting.


But I like to participate meetingshang out with them, so, if I have aget the chance, I always make excuses to my wife for the meetingso I can go.

"Meetings" are like business meetings. Also, you only are "making excuses" if you're lying to your wife about where you'll be/trying to justify to her why you need to go. If you just tell her "Hey, I'm going out to hang out with my friends," then that's just letting her know.

On the meeting, we can have interesting talks and share old memories.


Also, we have tasty food and delicious drinks to cheer up the mood.


Also, weWe also have tasty food and delicious drinks to cheer up the moodrinks that everyone loves.

"Cheer up" implies that your friends were sad, and after a drink and some food they became happy.

The big thing is that keeping this relationship helps me boost my life.


The big thing is thatMost importantly, keeping thisup these relationships helps me boost myy social life.

Because the pandemic, it is very hard to make gatherings these days.


Because of the pandemic, it is very hard to make gatheringshang out these days.

I hope the pandemic comes to an end soon.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At the meeting, we can have interesting talks and share old memories.


At thWhen we meeting up, we can have interesting talkconversations and share old memories.

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