Sept. 10, 2020
Meeting
I attended a meeting this afternoon. The meeting was held in our district meeting center. The content of the meeting is about building a civilized city. Our work unit was required to send four people to take part in this job.
Meeting
The content of the meeting iwas about building a civilized city.
Our work unidepartment was required to send four people to take part in this job.
work unit is not incorrect, but you would generally use a word like department/team/group...
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Nice job. I haven't corrected it, but there's a lot of opportunities in this text where you could use the word "this" instead of "the". It can make writing sound smoother.
For example:
This meeting was held in our district meeting center.
instead of
The meeting was held in our district meeting center.
or:
The content of this meeting is about building a civilized city.
instead of
The content of the meeting is about building a civilized city.
Sept. 10, 2020
谢谢你的修改！
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Meeting This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I attended a meeting this afternoon. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The meeting was held in our district meeting center. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The content of the meeting is about building a civilized city. The content of the meeting The content of the meeting |
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Our work unit was required to send four people to take part in this job. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Our work unit is not incorrect, but you would generally use a word like department/team/group... |
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