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Meet a real Willy Wonka
Willy Wonka is the main character of the Roald Dahl's book "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory". His job is to create many taste of chocolate and to sell it. His job can be considered as a dream for a lot of people. Every body would like to visit his chocolate factory and eat his very special chocolates. And, in the world, more specifically in Finland, there is a real Willy Wonka. Her name is Helle Anttila. She's at the head of Fazer, a chocolate brand. Her role is to taste different types of chocolate. When the customer demand is high, they launch the promotion of their new chocolat and it hits the shelves few weeks after. A lot of her chocolate bars are successfull, customers love it and there bags of sells, but sometime it can also be a flop. But as she said, it's important to learn from her flops. Thanks for reading!
Willy Wonka is the main character of the Roald Dahl's book "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory".
His job is to create many tastedifferent types of chocolate and to sell it.
His job canould be considered as a dream for a lot of peoplemy many people as a dream job.
Every body would like to visit his chocolate factory and eat his very specialdelicious chocolates.
Everybody is one word, it is better to describe the chocolates using one adjective that shows advanced vocabulary.
And, in the worldIn real life, more specifically in Finland, there is a real Willy Wonka.
Try not to start sentences with 'and' because it is a conjunction.
In real life is more common than 'in the world.'
Her name is Helle Anttila.
She's at the head of Fazer, a chocolate brand.
Her role is to taste different types of chocolate.
When the customer demand is high, they launch the promotion of their new chocolate and it hits the shelves few weeks after.
Great use of colloquialisms with 'hits the shelves.'
A lot of her chocolate bars are successfull, c. Customers love it and there bags of sells, butsales often boom. However, sometimes it can also be a flop.
You have too many subjects in the sentence. Reduce the sentences so it can be more clear.
But as she said, it's important to learn from her flops.
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Meet a real Willy Wonka |
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Willy Wonka is the main character of the Roald Dahl's book "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory". This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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His job is to create many taste of chocolate and to sell it. His job is to create many |
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His job can be considered as a dream for a lot of people. His job c |
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Every body would like to visit his chocolate factory and eat his very special chocolates. Every Everybody is one word, it is better to describe the chocolates using one adjective that shows advanced vocabulary. |
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And, in the world, more specifically in Finland, there is a real Willy Wonka.
Try not to start sentences with 'and' because it is a conjunction. In real life is more common than 'in the world.' |
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Her name is Helle Anttila. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She's at the head of Fazer, a chocolate brand. She's |
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Her role is to taste different types of chocolate. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When the customer demand is high, they launch the promotion of their new chocolat and it hits the shelves few weeks after. When the customer demand is high, they launch the promotion of their new chocolate and it hits the shelves few weeks after. Great use of colloquialisms with 'hits the shelves.' |
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A lot of her chocolate bars are successfull, customers love it and there bags of sells, but sometime it can also be a flop. A lot of her chocolate bars are successful You have too many subjects in the sentence. Reduce the sentences so it can be more clear. |
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But as she said, it's important to learn from her flops. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Thanks for reading! |
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