Oct. 24, 2022
Meditation
Meditation is an efficient stress reduction for people working in the high-pressure industry. The US has seen an increase in mental illness in recent years, and meditation has been proven to be an effective way to improve mental health. More and more people, including those from the tech industry, have joined the meditation world. What on earth is meditation, and why does it attract so many elites from the high-tech sector?
To answer these questions, we invited ABC to our Thursday meetup this week for a spiritual retreat. ABC has been meditating for two decades and will share his understanding of meditation — what kind of meditation can benefit mental health and why it works. ABC hopes to convey the correct concept of meditation and debunk myths about it. If you are interested in meditation or have questions about it, please come and join our Thursday talk.
Meditation
Meditation is an efficient stress reductioner for people working in the high-pressure industryies.
The US has seen an increase in mental illness in recent years, and meditation has been proven to be an effective way to improve mental health.
More and more people, including thosemany from the tech industry, have joined the meditation world.
“Those” doesn’t make sense because this is the first time you’ve mentioned them.
What on earth is meditation, and why does it attract so many elites from the high-tech sector?
To answer these questions, we invited ABC to our Thursday meetup this week for a spiritual retreat.
A “retreat” usually last for at least a few days, maybe even a couple of weeks.
ABC has been meditating for two decades and will share his understanding of meditation — what kind of meditation can benefit mental health and why it works.
If you are interested in meditation or have questions about it, please come and join our Thursday talk.
Meditation
Meditation is an efficient stress reduction technique for people working in the high-pressure industryies.
"High-pressure industries" unless you have a specific industry in mind.
The US has seen an increase in mental illness in recent years, and meditation has been proven to be an effective way to improve mental health.
This is more idiomatic ("prove [itself]").
More and more people, including those from the tech industry, have joined the meditation world.
What on earth is meditation, and why does it attract so many elites from the high-tech sector?
To answer these questions, we invited ABC to our Thursday meetup this week for a spiritual retreat.
ABC has been meditating for two decades and will share his understanding of meditation — what kind of meditation can benefit mental health and why it works.
ABC hopes to convey the correct concept ofshare the right way to understand meditation and debunk myths about it.
"Convey" isn't strictly wrong but it sounds strange here.
If you are interested in meditation or have questions about it, please come and join our Thursday talk.
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Meditation is an efficient stress reduction for people working in the high-pressure industry. Meditation is an efficient stress reduction technique for people working in "High-pressure industries" unless you have a specific industry in mind. Meditation is an efficient stress reduc |
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The US has seen an increase in mental illness in recent years, and meditation has been proven to be an effective way to improve mental health. The US has seen an increase in mental illness in recent years, and meditation has This is more idiomatic ("prove [itself]"). This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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More and more people, including those from the tech industry, have joined the meditation world. This sentence has been marked as perfect! More and more people, including “Those” doesn’t make sense because this is the first time you’ve mentioned them. |
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What on earth is meditation, and why does it attract so many elites from the high-tech sector? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To answer these questions, we invited ABC to our Thursday meetup this week for a spiritual retreat. This sentence has been marked as perfect! To answer these questions, we invited ABC to our Thursday meetup this week for a spiritual retreat. A “retreat” usually last for at least a few days, maybe even a couple of weeks. |
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ABC has been meditating for two decades and will share his understanding of meditation — what kind of meditation can benefit mental health and why it works. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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ABC hopes to convey the correct concept of meditation and debunk myths about it. ABC hopes to "Convey" isn't strictly wrong but it sounds strange here. |
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