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adichira

June 26, 2025

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Medicine

Good afternoon! With the time, I learned how valuable is to sleep well. I hate a lot when I am exhausted or with headache during my day. So, to take Melatonina during sleepless nights helps me a lot. But, I need to be careful with the quantity, or if not I can obtain the contrary effect.

Thank you for reading. Have a good day!

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Medicine

Good afternoon!

With the time, I learned how valuable it is to sleep well.

No article with "time"

I hate a lot when I am exhausted or with headache during my day.

"my" could also be replaced with "the"

So, to take Melatonina during sleepless nights helps me a lot.

But, I need to be careful with the quantity, or if not I can obtain the contrary effect.

Thank you for reading.

Have a good day!

With theOver time, I learned how valuable is to sleep well.

I hate it a lot when I am exhausted or with headache during my day.

If you have a modifier (like "a lot") between "I hate" and the thing that you hate, then you need to put in an "it" as a stand in for the subject of hatred.

So, to takeaking Melatonina during sleepless nights helps me a lot.

But, I need to be careful with the quantity, or if nottherwise I can obtain the contraryopposite effect.

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adichira

June 26, 2025

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Thank you for reading.


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Have a good day!


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With the time, I learned how valuable is to sleep well.


With theOver time, I learned how valuable is to sleep well.

With the time, I learned how valuable it is to sleep well.

No article with "time"

I hate a lot when I am exhausted or with headache during my day.


I hate it a lot when I am exhausted or with headache during my day.

If you have a modifier (like "a lot") between "I hate" and the thing that you hate, then you need to put in an "it" as a stand in for the subject of hatred.

I hate a lot when I am exhausted or with headache during my day.

"my" could also be replaced with "the"

So, to take Melatonina during sleepless nights helps me a lot.


So, to takeaking Melatonina during sleepless nights helps me a lot.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But, I need to be careful with the quantity, or if not I can obtain the contrary effect.


But, I need to be careful with the quantity, or if nottherwise I can obtain the contraryopposite effect.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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