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Me and my husband
I argued with my husband last week because he didn't prepare a gift for my birthday. After the quarrel, I didn't talk to him for a long time. Maybe he feel the bad atmosohere between us, he prepared a surprise for me——two tickets for a play. Then he took me to see the play on this Satureday. We had a good time. Then we become good again.
Maybe he feelt the bad atmosohere between us, but he prepared a surprise for me——two tickets for a play.
Must be in pst tense since rest of the story is in past tense.
Maybe… but conjunction needed (FANBOYS connecting two indpendent clauses)
Then he took me to see the play on this Satureday.
No need for on since the word this is already there for the date
Then we become goodwere on good terms again.
We became good again implies moral good not good relationship. I changed it so it fits the context
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Me and my husband |
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I argued with my husband last week because he didn't prepare a gift for my birthday. |
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After the quarrel, I didn't talk to him for a long time. |
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Maybe he feel the bad atmosohere between us, he prepared a surprise for me——two tickets for a play. Maybe he fe Must be in pst tense since rest of the story is in past tense. Maybe… but conjunction needed (FANBOYS connecting two indpendent clauses) |
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Then he took me to see the play on this Satureday. Then he took me to see the play No need for on since the word this is already there for the date |
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We had a good time. |
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Then we become good again. Then we We became good again implies moral good not good relationship. I changed it so it fits the context |
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