sousou's avatar
sousou

May 23, 2024

0
Me and English

It's been a long time that I want to learn english but when I'm,trying to learn it I feel very stress because I don't know where to start , it's lik if my is going to explode , the grammar make me lost my selfconfidence because I m still making a lot of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and at university I never success with my writing because of my bad leve. But despite all those difficulties I will continue to struggle and fight for make my english sounds and be better , as english is aa language a truly love and one day I'm sure I'll feel more at ease with it .
It's take and it's normal , writing in every languages are quite difficult but it's through those difficulties tht we succeed

Corrections

It's been a long time that I want to learn eEnglish but when I'm, trying to learn it I feel very stress because I don't know where to start , it's lik if mye my head is going to explode , the grammar makes me lost my selfconfidence because I 'm still making a lot of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and at university I never have success with my writing because of my bad level.

But despite all those difficulties I will continue to struggle and fight for make my eEnglish to sounds and be better , as eEnglish is aa language aI truly love and one day I'm sure I'll feel more at ease with it .

It's take and it's normal , wWriting in every languages are is quite difficult but it's through those difficulties that we succeed.

Feedback

Always practice, don't be afraid to make mistakes!

It's been a long time that I want to learn english but when I'm,trying to learn it I feel very stressed because I don't know where to start , it's like if my brain/head? is going to explode , the grammar makde me loste my self confidence because I 'm still making a lot of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and at university I never successed with my writing because of my bad level.

But despite all those difficulties I will continue to struggle and fight for make my english to sounds and be better , as english is aa language aI truly love and one day I'm sure I'll feel more at ease with it .

It's take and it's normal? , writing in every languages are quite difficult but it's through those difficulties that we succeed

I'm not sure what you meant at the start

Feedback

You are doing great! Please don't worry, grammar in other languages makes me want to cry I feel like I can never get it right, we're all in the same boat!

It's been a long time that I want've wanted to learn eEnglish for a long time but when I'm, trying to learn it I feel very stressed because I don't know where to start , it's lik if my ise I'm going to explode , the grammar makes me loste my self-confidence because I 'm still making a lot of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and at university I never successed with my writing because of my bad level.

I wasn't sure what "it's like if my is going to explode" was supposed to mean - you need a noun to go with "my", for example "it's like my mind is going to explode".

But despite all those difficulties I will continue to struggle and fight forto make my english sounds and be better , as english is aa language aI truly love and one day I'm sure I'll feel more at ease with it .

It's take and it's normal , writing in every languages are is quite difficult but it's through those difficulties that we succeed

Feedback

Well done! You can say a lot in English, and your grammar will improve with time - maybe try writing shorter sentences.

It's been a long time that I want to learn english but when I'm,trying try to learn it I feel very stressed because I don't know where to start , it's like if my head is going to explode , the grammar makes me loste my self confidence because I m still making ae lots of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and at university I never successed with my writing because of my bad levewriting.

But despite all those difficulties I will continue to struggle and fight fory to make my english sounds and be better , as english is aa language athat I truly love and one day I'm surehope that I'll feel more at easeconfident with it .

It's take and it's normal , wWriting in everyall languages arcan be quite difficult but it's through those difficulties that we can succeed

It's been a long time that I have wanted to learn english for a long time but when I'm,trying to learn it I feel very stressed because I don't know where to start , it's lik ife my head is going to explode , the grammar make me loste my self confidence because I am still making a lot of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and at university I never successeeded with my writing because of my bad level.

I have wanted to learn english for a long time sounds more natural (present perfect tense)
I have never succeeded--> past tense in this situation

But despite all thoese difficulties I will continue to struggle and fight forto make my english sounds and be better , as english is aa language aI truly love and one day I'm sure I'll feel more at ease with it .

these not those
'for make'--> we always say 'to make' for make doesn't exist/doesn't make sense
my english sound

It's take and it's normal , writing in everyach languages are is quite difficult but it's through thoese difficulties that we succeed

be careful with plurals
every languages is not correct---> each language
these not those---> we are talking about difficulties now, not in the future (if the difficulties are far away then we use 'those')

Feedback

Good start! Just be careful of small mistakes and keep practicing. It's easy to get discouraged but take it one step at a time. I would suggest writing shorter sentences as it's easier to have mistakes in longer ones- and be careful of tenses! You're doing great!

sousou's avatar
sousou

May 24, 2024

0

thank you for your feedback , I will keep that in mind

It's been a long time that I want've wanted to learn eEnglish for a long time but when I'm, trying to learn it I feel very stressed because I don't know where to start , i. It's lik ife my head is going to explode , t. The grammar makes me loste my self-confidence because I 'm still making a lot of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and a. At university I never successed with my writing because of my badlow level.

Try to break up your sentences a bit more (using punctuation marks).

But despite all those difficulties, I will continue to struggle and fight for makto improve my eEnglish sounds and be better , as eEnglish is aa language aI truly love and one day I'm sure I'll feel more at ease with it .

It's take and it's normal ,normal to struggle because writing in everany languages are is quite difficult; but it's through those difficulties that we succeed.

Feedback

Well done. I'm sure your English will improve. Keep at it!

sousou's avatar
sousou

May 24, 2024

0

thank you so much*

Me and English


It's been a long time that I want to learn english but when I'm,trying to learn it I feel very stress because I don't know where to start , it's lik if my is going to explode , the grammar make me lost my selfconfidence because I m still making a lot of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and at university I never success with my writing because of my bad leve.


It's been a long time that I want've wanted to learn eEnglish for a long time but when I'm, trying to learn it I feel very stressed because I don't know where to start , i. It's lik ife my head is going to explode , t. The grammar makes me loste my self-confidence because I 'm still making a lot of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and a. At university I never successed with my writing because of my badlow level.

Try to break up your sentences a bit more (using punctuation marks).

It's been a long time that I have wanted to learn english for a long time but when I'm,trying to learn it I feel very stressed because I don't know where to start , it's lik ife my head is going to explode , the grammar make me loste my self confidence because I am still making a lot of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and at university I never successeeded with my writing because of my bad level.

I have wanted to learn english for a long time sounds more natural (present perfect tense) I have never succeeded--> past tense in this situation

It's been a long time that I want to learn english but when I'm,trying try to learn it I feel very stressed because I don't know where to start , it's like if my head is going to explode , the grammar makes me loste my self confidence because I m still making ae lots of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and at university I never successed with my writing because of my bad levewriting.

It's been a long time that I want've wanted to learn eEnglish for a long time but when I'm, trying to learn it I feel very stressed because I don't know where to start , it's lik if my ise I'm going to explode , the grammar makes me loste my self-confidence because I 'm still making a lot of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and at university I never successed with my writing because of my bad level.

I wasn't sure what "it's like if my is going to explode" was supposed to mean - you need a noun to go with "my", for example "it's like my mind is going to explode".

It's been a long time that I want to learn english but when I'm,trying to learn it I feel very stressed because I don't know where to start , it's like if my brain/head? is going to explode , the grammar makde me loste my self confidence because I 'm still making a lot of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and at university I never successed with my writing because of my bad level.

It's been a long time that I want to learn eEnglish but when I'm, trying to learn it I feel very stress because I don't know where to start , it's lik if mye my head is going to explode , the grammar makes me lost my selfconfidence because I 'm still making a lot of mistakes and I don't have enough vocabulary and at university I never have success with my writing because of my bad level.

But despite all those difficulties I will continue to struggle and fight for make my english sounds and be better , as english is aa language a truly love and one day I'm sure I'll feel more at ease with it .


But despite all those difficulties, I will continue to struggle and fight for makto improve my eEnglish sounds and be better , as eEnglish is aa language aI truly love and one day I'm sure I'll feel more at ease with it .

But despite all thoese difficulties I will continue to struggle and fight forto make my english sounds and be better , as english is aa language aI truly love and one day I'm sure I'll feel more at ease with it .

these not those 'for make'--> we always say 'to make' for make doesn't exist/doesn't make sense my english sound

But despite all those difficulties I will continue to struggle and fight fory to make my english sounds and be better , as english is aa language athat I truly love and one day I'm surehope that I'll feel more at easeconfident with it .

But despite all those difficulties I will continue to struggle and fight forto make my english sounds and be better , as english is aa language aI truly love and one day I'm sure I'll feel more at ease with it .

But despite all those difficulties I will continue to struggle and fight for make my english to sounds and be better , as english is aa language aI truly love and one day I'm sure I'll feel more at ease with it .

But despite all those difficulties I will continue to struggle and fight for make my eEnglish to sounds and be better , as eEnglish is aa language aI truly love and one day I'm sure I'll feel more at ease with it .

It's take and it's normal , writing in every languages are quite difficult but it's through those difficulties tht we succeed


It's take and it's normal ,normal to struggle because writing in everany languages are is quite difficult; but it's through those difficulties that we succeed.

It's take and it's normal , writing in everyach languages are is quite difficult but it's through thoese difficulties that we succeed

be careful with plurals every languages is not correct---> each language these not those---> we are talking about difficulties now, not in the future (if the difficulties are far away then we use 'those')

It's take and it's normal , wWriting in everyall languages arcan be quite difficult but it's through those difficulties that we can succeed

It's take and it's normal , writing in every languages are is quite difficult but it's through those difficulties that we succeed

It's take and it's normal? , writing in every languages are quite difficult but it's through those difficulties that we succeed

I'm not sure what you meant at the start

It's take and it's normal , wWriting in every languages are is quite difficult but it's through those difficulties that we succeed.

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium