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syafira

Oct. 26, 2025

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Hi there! I'm Syafira, you can call me "Fira". I'm from Indonesia. I'm 19. I'm a big fan of listening to music and watching movies. I'm listening to K-pop, especially Boynextdoor and NCT, Pop, and R&B, but I didn't know much about R&B.

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I'm Syafira, but you can call me "Fira".

I'm listening to K-pop, especially Boynextdoor and NCT, P – pop, and R&B, but I didon't know much about R&B.

The ending part is a little unclear. Do you mean it in present tense? Then it makes sense.

Hi there!

I'm Syafira, y. You can call me "Fira"."

Punctuation goes inside the ending quotation mark

I'm from Indonesia.

I'm 19.

I'm a big fan of listening to music and watching movies.

More natural: I love listening to music and watching movies.

I'm currently listening to K-pop, (especially Boynextdoor and NCT), Ppop, and R&B, but I didon't know much about R&B.

I would group the examples of K-pop bands in parentheses like this to look a bit cleaner.

Genres of music are not inherently capitalized (pop, rap, rock). However, the K in "K-pop" is capitalized because it represents "Korean," and nationalities/languages are always capitalized. "R&B" is capitalized because it's an abbreviation. For bands, capitalization of the name is up to the artist. I'm not familiar with this K-pop band, but if they capitalize it as "Boynextdoor," "BoyNextDoor," or "BOYNEXTDOOR," you use the style that they chose.

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Hi there!


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I'm Syafira, you can call me "Fira".


I'm Syafira, y. You can call me "Fira"."

Punctuation goes inside the ending quotation mark

I'm Syafira, but you can call me "Fira".

I'm from Indonesia.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm 19.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm a big fan of listening to music and watching movies.


I'm a big fan of listening to music and watching movies.

More natural: I love listening to music and watching movies.

I'm listening to K-pop, especially Boynextdoor and NCT, Pop, and R&B, but I didn't know much about R&B.


I'm currently listening to K-pop, (especially Boynextdoor and NCT), Ppop, and R&B, but I didon't know much about R&B.

I would group the examples of K-pop bands in parentheses like this to look a bit cleaner. Genres of music are not inherently capitalized (pop, rap, rock). However, the K in "K-pop" is capitalized because it represents "Korean," and nationalities/languages are always capitalized. "R&B" is capitalized because it's an abbreviation. For bands, capitalization of the name is up to the artist. I'm not familiar with this K-pop band, but if they capitalize it as "Boynextdoor," "BoyNextDoor," or "BOYNEXTDOOR," you use the style that they chose.

I'm listening to K-pop, especially Boynextdoor and NCT, P – pop, and R&B, but I didon't know much about R&B.

The ending part is a little unclear. Do you mean it in present tense? Then it makes sense.

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