July 22, 2025
Me
Hello dear listeners
I‘m Jason, 20 years old and live in the Beautiful old town of Bern located in Switzerland.
My favorit activity in my free time is going to the Gym, because I work in a office Where i only sit. After the Shift i Need to move my joints.
When I dont work i Like to Travel the world.
I really Like to see someday Hawaii or make a Safari tour in Kenia
I wish you all a good day.
Kind regards
Jason
Hallo liebe Hörer
Ich bin Jason, 20 Jahre alt und wohne in der schönen alten Stadt Bern in der Schweiz.
Meine Lieblingsbeschäftigung in meiner Freizeit ist es, ins Fitnessstudio zu gehen, weil ich in einem Büro arbeite, wo ich nur sitze. Nach der Schicht brauche ich Bewegung für meine Gelenke.
Wenn ich nicht arbeite, reise ich gerne um die Welt.
Ich würde gerne einmal Hawaii sehen oder eine Safari-Tour in Kenia machen.
Ich wünsche Ihnen allen einen guten Tag.
Mit freundlichen Grüssen
Me
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Feedback
Great job.
A lot of words here were capitalized where they shouldn't be. There are rules for when words should be capitalized; they are not done based on you wanting to emphasize a word for importance.
July 22, 2025
Thanks Nefare you helped me a lot!
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Hello dear listeners I‘m Jason, 20 years old and live in the Beautiful old town of Bern located in Switzerland. Hello, dear We can't hear this so we wouldn't be described as listeners. Hello, dear listeners |
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My favorit activity in my free time is going to the Gym, because I work in a office Where i only sit. My favorite activity in my free time is going to the My favorite activity (to do) in my free time is going to the More idiomatic: "all I do is sit" |
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When I dont work i Like to Travel the world. When I don't work When I don't work |
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I really Like to see someday Hawaii or make a Safari tour in Kenia I wish you all a good day. I would really I really Correct phrase: "go on a tour/safari" |
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