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bananamonkey

June 1, 2025

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Hi , A little bit about myself. I'm Yen ( I'd love to be called Kitty ) and come from Vietnam, an Asian country with variety of
traditions and cultures. My momster, who has a strong passion for English , has been planning to change my whole freaking life. I heard that my family would immigrate to Canada one day not far in the future . As a girl who love steadiness and comforts , I'm afraid of changing. The feeling of subtle just covers my body . Guys, please give me some advises of what to do to prepare for that .

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I'm Yen ( I'd love to be called Kitty ) and come from Vietnam, an Asian country with a rich variety of
traditions and cultures.

My momsterum, who has a strong passion for English , has been planning to change my whole freaking life.

Is 'momster' meant to be a mix-up of mum and monster? Is this a pet name?

I've heard that my family would immight emigrate to Canada one day n. Not far in the future .

You would be emigrating to Canada as you are going to a new country. People coming to Korea would be immigrants from your perspective.

As a girl who love steadiness andability and home comforts , , I'm afraid of changinge.

stability is a better word.

The feeling of subtle just covers my body My whole body is anxious.

I'm guessing here this is what you mean.

Guys, please give me some advisesce ofn what to do toin prepare for that ation.

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I lived in Canada for a while and it's a lovely country, but then I'm sure so is Korea. Life is an adventure. Embrace it and good luck!

Me

Hi , Ahere's a little bit about myself.

I'm Yen ( (I'd love to be called Kitty ) and I come from Vietnam, an Asian country with a variety of
traditions and cultures.

My momsther, who has a strong passion for English , has been planning to change my whole freaking life.

I heard that my family wouldill immigrate to Canada one day, not far in the future .

As a girl who love steadiness and comforts , , I'm afraid of changing.

The subtle feeling of subtle just covers my body .

I'm not sure which adjective you originally wanted but "subtle" doesn't fit here

Guys, please give me some advisesce ofn what to do to prepare for that .

Hi , Aa little bit about myself.

I'mMy name is Yen ( I'd love to be called Kitty ) and I come from Vietnam, an Asian country with a variety of
traditions and cultures.

My momster, who has a strong passion for English , has been planning to change my whole freaking life.

Mom? Sister?

I heard that my family wouldill be immigrateing to Canada one day not far in the future .

Maybe try: "I heard that my family will be immigrating to Canada soon."
Might be more natural sounding.

As a girl who love steadiness and comforts , , I'm afraid of changing.

The feeling of subtle just covers my body .

Not sure what you meant by "subtle" here.

Guys, please give me some advises ofce about what to do to prepare for thatis change .

Or "please give me some advice about how to prepare for this change"

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Hi Kitty! It might help to think of this change as an opportunity to introduce your rich culture to all of the new friends you meet in Canada. If you can't stay in Vietnam, maybe you can take some Vietnam with you to share :)

Hi , Aa little bit about myself.

I'm Yen ( I'd love to also be called Kitty ) and come from Vietnam, an Asian country with variety a of
traditions and cultures.

My momsther, who has a strong passion for English , has been planning to change my whole freaking life.

I am assuming you want to say "mother".

I heard that my family would immigrate to Canada one day not far in the future .

As a girl who loves steadiness and comforts , , I'm afraid of changing/ the change.

The feeling of subtleuncertainty just covers my body .

Guys, please give me some advises of what to do to prepare for that .

Feedback

Good job! As someone who had to move a lot when I was growing up, I would take this as an opportunity to meet people from different backgrounds and perhaps, become friends with them. Just know that you will be able to find people with the same mindset as you everywhere in the world.

Me


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Hi , A little bit about myself.


Hi , Aa little bit about myself.

Hi , Aa little bit about myself.

Hi , Ahere's a little bit about myself.

I'm Yen ( I'd love to be called Kitty ) and come from Vietnam, an Asian country with variety of traditions and cultures.


I'm Yen ( I'd love to also be called Kitty ) and come from Vietnam, an Asian country with variety a of
traditions and cultures.

I'mMy name is Yen ( I'd love to be called Kitty ) and I come from Vietnam, an Asian country with a variety of
traditions and cultures.

I'm Yen ( (I'd love to be called Kitty ) and I come from Vietnam, an Asian country with a variety of
traditions and cultures.

I'm Yen ( I'd love to be called Kitty ) and come from Vietnam, an Asian country with a rich variety of
traditions and cultures.

My momster, who has a strong passion for English , has been planning to change my whole freaking life.


My momsther, who has a strong passion for English , has been planning to change my whole freaking life.

I am assuming you want to say "mother".

My momster, who has a strong passion for English , has been planning to change my whole freaking life.

Mom? Sister?

My momsther, who has a strong passion for English , has been planning to change my whole freaking life.

My momsterum, who has a strong passion for English , has been planning to change my whole freaking life.

Is 'momster' meant to be a mix-up of mum and monster? Is this a pet name?

I heard that my family would immigrate to Canada one day not far in the future .


I heard that my family would immigrate to Canada one day not far in the future .

I heard that my family wouldill be immigrateing to Canada one day not far in the future .

Maybe try: "I heard that my family will be immigrating to Canada soon." Might be more natural sounding.

I heard that my family wouldill immigrate to Canada one day, not far in the future .

I've heard that my family would immight emigrate to Canada one day n. Not far in the future .

You would be emigrating to Canada as you are going to a new country. People coming to Korea would be immigrants from your perspective.

As a girl who love steadiness and comforts , I'm afraid of changing.


As a girl who loves steadiness and comforts , , I'm afraid of changing/ the change.

As a girl who love steadiness and comforts , , I'm afraid of changing.

As a girl who love steadiness and comforts , , I'm afraid of changing.

As a girl who love steadiness andability and home comforts , , I'm afraid of changinge.

stability is a better word.

The feeling of subtle just covers my body .


The feeling of subtleuncertainty just covers my body .

The feeling of subtle just covers my body .

Not sure what you meant by "subtle" here.

The subtle feeling of subtle just covers my body .

I'm not sure which adjective you originally wanted but "subtle" doesn't fit here

The feeling of subtle just covers my body My whole body is anxious.

I'm guessing here this is what you mean.

Guys, please give me some advises of what to do to prepare for that .


Guys, please give me some advises of what to do to prepare for that .

Guys, please give me some advises ofce about what to do to prepare for thatis change .

Or "please give me some advice about how to prepare for this change"

Guys, please give me some advisesce ofn what to do to prepare for that .

Guys, please give me some advisesce ofn what to do toin prepare for that ation.

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