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Dec. 29, 2020

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Journal 29/12/20

I originally planned to cycle to work, but when I went downstairs, I saw that it was raining and snowing. I suddenly remembered that the weather forecast said yesterday that it would be snowing today. I had to call DiDi express. It was just around several minutes before I got one. The traffic was not too bad and the whole trip was all the best. The weather forecast is really accurate nowadays. It was 16 degrees Celsius yesterday, but it snowed today. Today is December 29th. This year will be over in two days. Time flies, I will be one more year old. I don’t want to grow up anymore.

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Dec. 29, 2020

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Journal 29/12/20


I originally planned to cycle to work, but when I went downstairs, I saw that it was raining and snowing.


I suddenly remembered that the weather forecast said yesterday that it would be snowing today.


I suddenly remembered that yesterday, the weather forecast said yesterday that it would be snowing today. I suddenly remembered that yesterday, the weather forecast said it would be snowing today.

I had to call DiDi express.


It was just around several minutes before I got one.


It was just aroundtook several minutes before I got oneone arrived. It took several minutes before one arrived.

"got" is very informal and not good in writing

The traffic was not too bad and the whole trip was all the best.


The traffic was not too bad and the whole trip was all the best.... good? efficient ? fast? cheap? " all the best is not very clear? best at what The traffic was not too bad and the whole trip was ... good? efficient ? fast? cheap? " all the best is not very clear? best at what

The weather forecast is really accurate nowadays.


The weather forecast is really accurate nowadaysometimes. The weather forecast is really accurate sometimes.

It was 16 degrees Celsius yesterday, but it snowed today.


Today is December 29th.


This year will be over in two days.


Time flies, I will be one more year old.


Time flies, I will be one more year older. Time flies, I will be one year older.

If you are one year older, "more' is assumed.

I don’t want to grow up anymore.


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