Dec. 10, 2019
for some reason the page gave me the tittle "maze craze" and it happens it's a word or phrase I don't know, I guess it has something to do with mazes?.
I want to get better at writing in english but also in general, I can type fast, but meaning slips aways as I keep on writing, I can multi tax, or more like, I have to, becasuse I can focus on writing, right now I'm "watching" a movie in a small window next to this one, I'm bad at reading webpages, so if I completely missed the point let me know.
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fFor some reason theis page gave me the tittle "maze craze" and itwhich happens it'sto be a word or phrase I don't know,. I guess it has something to do with mazes?.
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Question marks ("?") and exclamation marks ("!") end sentences too, so they don't use a full stop (".")
"The page" is vague. Which page? It's not wrong on it's own, but in this context you would use "this page" (if you're talking about this page.)
"and it happens" isn't wrong exactly. Since you're talking about a specific thing, "which" works better.
I want to get better at writing in eEnglish but also in general,. I can type fast, but the meanings slips aways as I keep on writing,. I can multi taxsk, or more like, I have to, b. Becasuse I can focus on writing, right now I'm "watching" a movie right now in a small window next to this one,. I'm bad at reading webpages, so if I completely missed the point let me know.
"Meaning slips aways" there's multiple meanings, so meanings. "The meanings" because you're talking about certain things.
If you want to use "right now" it would be better to say "I'm "watching" a movie right now" because each part is connected to what it's next to: Because I can focus on writing > I'm "watching" a movie > right now.
The full stops are hard to explain. If what comes after what you want to say isn't strongly connected, or is a suggestion/command, you should use full stops. Otherwise, your sentences will be run on sentences.
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You're good. Some of the things I pointed out natives get wrong (such as full stop) usage, so don't worry if I pointed out a lot.
As for Maze Craze, it seems to be the title of a game. If you saw it here, maybe it was a username?
MAZE CRAZE
for some reason the page gave me the tittle "maze craze" and it happens it'sto be either a word or phrase that I don't know,. I guess that it has something to do with mazes?.
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Just a few spelling errors, gave a different way to word it. Watch the punctuation: you had both a question mark (?) and a period (.)
I want to get better at writing in eEnglish but also in general,. I can type fast, but meaning slips aways as I keep on writing,. I can multi taxsk, or more like, I have to, becasuse I can focus on writing, r. Right now, I'm "watching" a movie in a small window next to this one,. I'm bad at reading webpages, so if I completely missed the point then let me know.
Run-on sentence: it's better to write many shorter sentences than one long one. Easier to read and understand. "Multitask" is one word.
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You have a good grasp of grammar! Just be careful of spelling mistakes (probably from writing too quickly).
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fFor some reason the page gave me the tittle "maze craze" and as it happens it's a word or phrase I don't know, I guess it has something to do with mazes?.
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I added the word as for readability
I want to get better at writing in eEnglish but also in general, I can type fast, but meaning slips aways as I keep on writing, I can multi taxsk, or more like, I have to, becasuse I can focus on writing, right now I'm "watching" a movie in a small window next to this one, I'm bad at reading webpages, so if I completely missed the point let me know.
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You write well!
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for some reason the page gave me the tittle "maze craze" and it happens it's a word or phrase I don't know, I guess it has something to do with mazes?.
I added the word as for readability for some reason the page gave me the tit Just a few spelling errors, gave a different way to word it. Watch the punctuation: you had both a question mark (?) and a period (.)
Question marks ("?") and exclamation marks ("!") end sentences too, so they don't use a full stop (".") "The page" is vague. Which page? It's not wrong on it's own, but in this context you would use "this page" (if you're talking about this page.) "and it happens" isn't wrong exactly. Since you're talking about a specific thing, "which" works better. |
I want to get better at writing in english but also in general, I can type fast, but meaning slips aways as I keep on writing, I can multi tax, or more like, I have to, becasuse I can focus on writing, right now I'm "watching" a movie in a small window next to this one, I'm bad at reading webpages, so if I completely missed the point let me know. I want to get better at writing in I want to get better at writing in Run-on sentence: it's better to write many shorter sentences than one long one. Easier to read and understand. "Multitask" is one word. I want to get better at writing in "Meaning slips aways" there's multiple meanings, so meanings. "The meanings" because you're talking about certain things. If you want to use "right now" it would be better to say "I'm "watching" a movie right now" because each part is connected to what it's next to: Because I can focus on writing > I'm "watching" a movie > right now. The full stops are hard to explain. If what comes after what you want to say isn't strongly connected, or is a suggestion/command, you should use full stops. Otherwise, your sentences will be run on sentences. |
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