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Hi to all! I did a task to answer the email to some person who is going to come to Moscow and asks about interesting places for sightseeing and shopping. Check the correctness please!

Hi Dieter!

Thanks for your email.

I will try to help you.

I think first you should go to the center of Moscow to visit the Red Square. There are also lots of expensive shops with some luxury brands like Balenciaga and other stuff like this.

But If you want to buy something from local Russian designers you should go to Hlebzavod and Flacon. It is two places which situated very close to each other. It is something like hipster cluster where you can find street wear from local Russian brands and also some bars and street food spots.

Then you should go to the Gorky Park and walk along the Moscow river to Muzeon park. It is cozy park with old monuments from the Soviet Union era and some strange sculptures.

After you can walk to GES 2. It is one of the oldest Hydroelectric Power Station and it is close to the Muzeon. There are lots of arts and activities inside. And it is just an interesting industrial building.

Close to the GAS 2 you can see the Cathedral of Christ the Savior. And also there is the building of the Red October Fabric. There is another typical hipster place with cafes and restaurants.

I think it is enough for the beginning. If you want more or if you prefer some different kind of places just let me know.

There are lots of culture events and spaces in Moscow. But I am actually not into it. I can just give your email my good friend Kira who has more information about it. Hope I could help you.

Best wishes, Maxim

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Hi to all!

I did a task to'm answer theing an email tofrom some persone who is gocoming to come to Moscow and has asksed about interesting places for sightseeing and shopping.

Check the correctness, please!

Hi, Dieter!

Thanks for your email.

I will try to help you.

I think first you should go to the center of Moscow to visit the Red Square.

There are also lots of expensive shops with some luxury brands like Balenciaga and other stuff like this.

But If you want to buy something from local Russian designers, you should go to Hlebzavod and Flacon.

It isThey are two places which situatedare very close to each other.

It is something like a hipster cluster where you can find street wear from local Russian brands and also find some bars and street food spots.

Then you should go to the Gorky Park and walk along the Moscow rRiver to Muzeon pPark.

It is a cozy park with old monuments from the Soviet Union era andlong with some strange sculptures.

Afterwards, you can walk to GES 2.

It is one of the oldest Hydroelectric Power Stations and it is close to the Muzeon.

There are lots of artswork and activities inside.

And it is just an interesting industrial building.

Close to the GAS 2, you can see the Cathedral of Christ the Savior.

And also there is the building ofalso the Red October Fabric building.

Thereis is another typical hipster place with cafes and restaurants.

I think ithis is enough for the beginningnow.

If you want more or if you prefer some different kinds of places, just let me know.

There are lots of cultureal events and spaces in Moscow.

But I am actually not into it, however.

I can just give your email to my good friend Kira who has more information about it.

HI hope I couldthis help yous.

Best wishes,

Maxim

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Sept. 17, 2022

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It isThey are two places which are situated very close to each other.

It is something like a hipster cluster where you can find street wear from local Russian brands and also some bars and street food spots.

It is a cozy park with old monuments from the Soviet Union era and some strange sculptures.

It is one of the oldest Hydroelectric Power Stations and it is close to the Muzeon.

I can just give your email to my good friend Kira who has more information about it.

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maxinabox

Sept. 17, 2022

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I did a task to answer the email to some person who is going to come to Moscow and asks about interesting places for sightseeing and shopping.

I did a task to'm answer theing an email tofrom some persone who is gocoming to come to Moscow and has asksed about interesting places for sightseeing and shopping.

Check the correctness please!

Check the correctness, please!

Hi Dieter!

Hi, Dieter!

Thanks for your email.

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I will try to help you.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think first you should go to the center of Moscow to visit the Red Square.

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There are also lots of expensive shops with some luxury brands like Balenciaga and other stuff like this.

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But If you want to buy something from local Russian designers you should go to Hlebzavod and Flacon.

But If you want to buy something from local Russian designers, you should go to Hlebzavod and Flacon.

It is two places which situated very close to each other.

It isThey are two places which are situated very close to each other.

It isThey are two places which situatedare very close to each other.

It is something like hipster cluster where you can find street wear from local Russian brands and also some bars and street food spots.

It is something like a hipster cluster where you can find street wear from local Russian brands and also some bars and street food spots.

It is something like a hipster cluster where you can find street wear from local Russian brands and also find some bars and street food spots.

Then you should go to the Gorky Park and walk along the Moscow river to Muzeon park.

Then you should go to the Gorky Park and walk along the Moscow rRiver to Muzeon pPark.

It is cozy park with old monuments from the Soviet Union era and some strange sculptures.

It is a cozy park with old monuments from the Soviet Union era and some strange sculptures.

It is a cozy park with old monuments from the Soviet Union era andlong with some strange sculptures.

After you can walk to GES 2.

Afterwards, you can walk to GES 2.

It is one of the oldest Hydroelectric Power Station and it is close to the Muzeon.

It is one of the oldest Hydroelectric Power Stations and it is close to the Muzeon.

It is one of the oldest Hydroelectric Power Stations and it is close to the Muzeon.

There are lots of arts and activities inside.

There are lots of artswork and activities inside.

And it is just an interesting industrial building.

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Close to the GAS 2 you can see the Cathedral of Christ the Savior.

Close to the GAS 2, you can see the Cathedral of Christ the Savior.

And also there is the building of the Red October Fabric.

And also there is the building ofalso the Red October Fabric building.

There is another typical hipster place with cafes and restaurants.

Thereis is another typical hipster place with cafes and restaurants.

I think it is enough for the beginning.

I think ithis is enough for the beginningnow.

If you want more or if you prefer some different kind of places just let me know.

If you want more or if you prefer some different kinds of places, just let me know.

There are lots of culture events and spaces in Moscow.

There are lots of cultureal events and spaces in Moscow.

But I am actually not into it.

But I am actually not into it, however.

I can just give your email my good friend Kira who has more information about it.

I can just give your email to my good friend Kira who has more information about it.

I can just give your email to my good friend Kira who has more information about it.

Hope I could help you.

HI hope I couldthis help yous.

Best wishes, Maxim

Best wishes,

Maxim

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