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MAXIMUM THE HORMONE

MAXIMUM THE HORMONE is a Japanese rock band, their music tune is very loudly and like screaming. This group has four members and the drum is a woman and the vocal is her younger brother. Their songs are written in Japanese but I can't listen to what they sing, and even though I catch the lyrics I can't understand what is the meaning. Mostly, I like their songs due to the melody. The most favorite one is "Buiikikaesu." The title is a coined word, but its meaning is the opposite of "I'll kill you" when translating literally. The song raises me up.

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MAXIMUM THE HORMONE is a Japanese rock band, their whose music tune is very loudly and sounds like screaming.

This group has four members and t. The drummer is a woman and the vocalist is her younger brother.

Their songs are written in Japanese but I can't listen tounderstand what they're sing, anding, even though I catch the lyrics I can't understand what is the meaning.a word here and there.

MI mostly, I like their songs due to the melody melody of their songs.

The mostMy favorite soneg is "Buiikikaesu."

The title is a coined word, but its meaningmeaning of the title is the opposite of "I'll kill you" when translating it literally.

Theis song raisenergizes me up.

I'm only guessing your meaning of "raising me" up. Do you mean that it makes you energetic or do you mean that it lifts your spirit and make you feel hopeful?

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ponta

Nov. 9, 2020

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I meant energizing, so your correction is right. Thank you!

MAXIMUM THE HORMONE

MAXIMUM THE HORMONE is a Japanese rock band, t. Their music tune is veris extremely loudly and likeinvolves lots of screaming.

Not sure what you mean by music tune, so I changed the sentence to something more natural.

This group has four members and t. The drummer is a woman and the vocalist is her younger brother.

Their songs are written in Japanese but I can't listen to what they sing, and even though I catch the lyrics, I can't understand what is they meaning.

"Can't listen" here is a bit ambiguous. Could you write the native text for this line?

Mostly, I like their songs due to the melodymostly because of the beat.

Melody would be a better word for a classical or soft genre. In genres like this one, though, beat is used even though it's meaning is slightly different.

The most favorite one is "Buiikikaesu."

The title is a coined word, but its meaning is the opposite of "I'll kill you" when translating literally.

The song raisfires me up.

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Oh, I know that band! I've heard three songs, two from Death Note and [F] for Frieza. :)

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Ochita

Nov. 8, 2020

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Sorry, I missed a correction. It's not "The most favorite one..." but "My most favorite one.."

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ponta

Nov. 9, 2020

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Thank you for your correction!
I intended that "Can't listen" is "聞き取れない", and the line translated in Japanese is "曲は日本語で書かれているけど、何を歌っているか聞き取れないし、聞き取れても意味がわからない。"

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Ochita

Nov. 9, 2020

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Thank you for your correction! I intended that "Can't listen" is "聞き取れない", and the line translated in Japanese is "曲は日本語で書かれているけど、何を歌っているか聞き取れないし、聞き取れても意味がわからない。"

Ah, ok. "Can't listen" could also mean 聞くに堪えない, so I was confused a bit ^^;
That line in English would be - "Even though the songs are in Japanese, I can't catch what they are saying, and even if I do, I can't understand any of it."

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telegrace

Nov. 9, 2020

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Their songs are written in Japanese but I can't listen to what they sing, and even though I catch the lyrics, I can't understand what is they meaning.

I think i would change this to:
Their songs are in Japanese but I can't understand what they're singing, and even though I catch some words, I can't understand what is the meaning is.

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telegrace

Nov. 9, 2020

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I forgot about this band, thank you so much for reminding me about them!

MAXIMUM THE HORMONE


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MAXIMUM THE HORMONE is a Japanese rock band, their music tune is very loudly and like screaming.


MAXIMUM THE HORMONE is a Japanese rock band, t. Their music tune is veris extremely loudly and likeinvolves lots of screaming.

Not sure what you mean by music tune, so I changed the sentence to something more natural.

MAXIMUM THE HORMONE is a Japanese rock band, their whose music tune is very loudly and sounds like screaming.

This group has four members and the drum is a woman and the vocal is her younger brother.


This group has four members and t. The drummer is a woman and the vocalist is her younger brother.

This group has four members and t. The drummer is a woman and the vocalist is her younger brother.

Their songs are written in Japanese but I can't listen to what they sing, and even though I catch the lyrics I can't understand what is the meaning.


Their songs are written in Japanese but I can't listen to what they sing, and even though I catch the lyrics, I can't understand what is they meaning.

"Can't listen" here is a bit ambiguous. Could you write the native text for this line?

Their songs are written in Japanese but I can't listen tounderstand what they're sing, anding, even though I catch the lyrics I can't understand what is the meaning.a word here and there.

Mostly, I like their songs due to the melody.


Mostly, I like their songs due to the melodymostly because of the beat.

Melody would be a better word for a classical or soft genre. In genres like this one, though, beat is used even though it's meaning is slightly different.

MI mostly, I like their songs due to the melody melody of their songs.

The most favorite one is "Buiikikaesu."


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The mostMy favorite soneg is "Buiikikaesu."

The title is a coined word, but its meaning is the opposite of "I'll kill you" when translating literally.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The title is a coined word, but its meaningmeaning of the title is the opposite of "I'll kill you" when translating it literally.

The song raises me up.


The song raisfires me up.

Theis song raisenergizes me up.

I'm only guessing your meaning of "raising me" up. Do you mean that it makes you energetic or do you mean that it lifts your spirit and make you feel hopeful?

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