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ponta

Dec. 21, 2020

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Matcha

Matcha is one kind of tea, and it's famous in Japanese culture. Matcha flavor is common for sweets, for example, ice cream, chocolate, and cake. I've loved matcha flavor since I was a kid. I thought matcha is sweet and a little bitter. However, real matcha taste is extremely bitter because it doesn't contain any sugar, and when I drunk a real matcha tea I thought it isn't matcha. Now, I've grown up and understood the goodness of bitter matcha taste. I want to enjoy real matcha with Japanese sweets in Kyoto. By the way, matcha includes a large amount of caffeine, which is larger than coffee in the same amount, so it's a little dangerous to drink a lot.

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Matcha is one kind of tea, and it's famous in Japanese culturea famous type of tea in Japan.

MatchaIts flavor is common for sweets, for example,used in making sweets, such as ice cream, chocolate, and cake.

I've loved matchaits flavor since I was a kichildhood.

I thought matchaits taste is sweet and a little bitter.

However, real matchaits true taste is extremelyjust bitter because it doesn't contain any sugar, andt all. This is why when I druank a real matcha tea I thought it isn't matchafor the first time, I didn't think it was matcha at all.

Now, that I've grown up and understood the goodness of, I could really appreciate its bitter matcha taste.

I wcant to enjoy real matcha with Japanese sweets in Kyoto.

I deleted Kyoto, because it implies you would only like real matcha with Japanese sweets if you were in Kyoto.

By the way, matcha includes a large amount of caffeine, which is larger than coffee in the same amount, so it'scontains more caffeine than coffee, so it could be a little dangerous to drink a loconsume a lot of it.

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ponta

Dec. 22, 2020

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Thank you!

Matcha

Matcha is onea kind of tea, and it's famous in Japanese culture.

I feel like “one” more strongly emphasis the singular, while “a” is more showing a part of a group.

Matcha flavor is common for sweeis often flavored like different types of desserts, for example, ice cream, chocolate, and cake.

I've loved matchathe flavor of matcha since I was a kid.

I thought that matcha is sweet and a littlewas bittersweet.

When something is both bitter and sweet, it’s called “bittersweet”. This is also used in some expressions, like a “bittersweet goodbye”, where somebodies leaving to pursue their dreams (job, relationship, etc.), but leaving their loved ones behind.

However, real matcha taste is extremely bitter because it doesn't contain any sugar, and when I drunk ahad real matcha tea I thought it isn'tfor the first time I didn’t think it was matcha.

Now, I've grown up and can understooand the goodness of the bitter matcha tasteflavor.

I’m not sure if “goodness” is correct here. I would replace it with “deliciousness”.

I want to enjoy real matcha with Japanese sweets in Kyoto.

By the way, matcha includes a large amount of caffeine, which iseven larger than a cup of coffee inof the same amount, so it's a little dangerous to drink a lot.

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ato

Dec. 21, 2020

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By the way, matcha includes a large amount of caffeine, which iseven larger than a cup of coffee inof the same amount, so it's a little dangerous to drink a lot.

By the way, matcha includes a large amount of caffeine, even more than is in the same amount of coffee, so it's a little dangerous to drink a lot.

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ponta

Dec. 22, 2020

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Thank you for your correction!

Matcha


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Matcha is one kind of tea, and it's famous in Japanese culture.


Matcha is onea kind of tea, and it's famous in Japanese culture.

I feel like “one” more strongly emphasis the singular, while “a” is more showing a part of a group.

Matcha is one kind of tea, and it's famous in Japanese culturea famous type of tea in Japan.

Matcha flavor is common for sweets, for example, ice cream, chocolate, and cake.


Matcha flavor is common for sweeis often flavored like different types of desserts, for example, ice cream, chocolate, and cake.

MatchaIts flavor is common for sweets, for example,used in making sweets, such as ice cream, chocolate, and cake.

I've loved matcha flavor since I was a kid.


I've loved matchathe flavor of matcha since I was a kid.

I've loved matchaits flavor since I was a kichildhood.

I thought matcha is sweet and a little bitter.


I thought that matcha is sweet and a littlewas bittersweet.

When something is both bitter and sweet, it’s called “bittersweet”. This is also used in some expressions, like a “bittersweet goodbye”, where somebodies leaving to pursue their dreams (job, relationship, etc.), but leaving their loved ones behind.

I thought matchaits taste is sweet and a little bitter.

However, real matcha taste is extremely bitter because it doesn't contain any sugar, and when I drunk a real matcha tea I thought it isn't matcha.


However, real matcha taste is extremely bitter because it doesn't contain any sugar, and when I drunk ahad real matcha tea I thought it isn'tfor the first time I didn’t think it was matcha.

However, real matchaits true taste is extremelyjust bitter because it doesn't contain any sugar, andt all. This is why when I druank a real matcha tea I thought it isn't matchafor the first time, I didn't think it was matcha at all.

Now, I've grown up and understood the goodness of bitter matcha taste.


Now, I've grown up and can understooand the goodness of the bitter matcha tasteflavor.

I’m not sure if “goodness” is correct here. I would replace it with “deliciousness”.

Now, that I've grown up and understood the goodness of, I could really appreciate its bitter matcha taste.

I want to enjoy real matcha with Japanese sweets in Kyoto.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wcant to enjoy real matcha with Japanese sweets in Kyoto.

I deleted Kyoto, because it implies you would only like real matcha with Japanese sweets if you were in Kyoto.

By the way, matcha includes a large amount of caffeine, which is larger than coffee in the same amount, so it's a little dangerous to drink a lot.


By the way, matcha includes a large amount of caffeine, which iseven larger than a cup of coffee inof the same amount, so it's a little dangerous to drink a lot.

By the way, matcha includes a large amount of caffeine, which is larger than coffee in the same amount, so it'scontains more caffeine than coffee, so it could be a little dangerous to drink a loconsume a lot of it.

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