Marriages and dDivorces in the US

The first bar chart shows a comparison of the number of marriages and divorces in the USA between 1970 and 2000 and t. The second bar chart indicates from 1970 to 2000,exhibits the marital status of mature Americans adults from 1970 to 2000.

A glance at tThe first chart reveals that the number of people who married had a downward trend between 1970 and 2000 but always marriages had a downward trend but the marriage rate was always higher than the divorces and t rate. There were a slight fluctuations in the number of people who divorced atin the same time and tframe but these are within standard deviation. The second bar chart presentdemonstrates that between 1970 and 2000, always the percentage of adult’s married adults was higher than other status in the Americanat of divorced adults.

Be careful of run-on sentences. It's okay to use smaller sentences.

In 1970 and 1980, the number of people who married hit a peak at exactly 2.5 million, while the number of people who divorcesd wereas highest at less thana little below 1.5 million in 1970 and 2000the same period of time.

Try to maintain parallel construction within your sentences.

The number of divorces hit a low at 1 million between 1970 and 2000, neverthelesswhile, in 2000, the number of people who married hit a peak at 2 million.

Try to maintain focus. These two things don't seem to go together to me. When talking about divorce, stick with divorce until you're done with the explaining the data. Then switch to talking about the marriage data points.

The number of adults people that married in 1970 wereas around 70% and decreased slightly until 2000.

At the same time the percentage of adults who never married and and the percentage of those who divorced rose gradually from just more thanabove 10% to about 20% and approximately 3% to below 10%, respectively.

Marriages and divorces

Hard to explain but I think here you're talking about marriage and divorce conceptually (and not specific marriages and divorces), so you should list them in the singular

The first bar chart shows a comparison of the number of marriages and divorces in the USA between 1970 and 2000 and the second bar chart indicates from 1970 to 2000,the marital status of matureadult Americans in the same time period.

A glance at the first chart reveals that the number of people who married had amarriages trended downward trend between 1970 and 2000 but alwaysthe number of marriages was higher thannevertheless always higher than the number of divorces and t. There were also slight fluctuations in the number of people who divorced at the same time and tduring that timespan. The second bar chart presentshows that between 1970 and 2000, always the percentage of adult’s married wain America was always higher than other status in the Americanose not married.

I strongly recommend that you try to stick with shorter sentences.

In 1970 and 1980, the number of people who married hit a peak at exactly 2.5 million, while the divorces were highest at less than 1.5 million in 1970 and 2000 rate was also highest.

It doesn't make sense to say something was highest at less than something. Because "less than" 1.5 million could be 0. So if it's almost 1.5 million, say "...highest at almost 1.5 million"

The divorces rate hit a low at 1 million divorces between 1970 and 2000, n. Nevertheless, in 2000, the number of people who married hit a peak at 2 million.

The number of adults people that married in 1970 wereas around 70% of ??? and decreased slightly until 2000.

This doesn't make sense because 70% is a percentage, so you need to say 70% of what.

At the same time, the percentage of adults who never married and the percentage who never divorced rose gradually from just more than 10% to about 20% and from approximately 3% to below 10% respectively.

I think this sentence is also quite confusing. It would be better to break it into multiple sentences.