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tommy

Sept. 6, 2020

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Marriage of a friend

The day before yesterday, I was glad to hear that my friend are going to get married till the end of year.
I feel little embarrassed because she might read this post.
We are really into taking photos enough to host a photography club. So, I plan to taking their wedding photos, having them dressed up before getting married.
I'm looking forward to see how she looks turns out.


友達が年末までに結婚することになってとても嬉しい。
彼女は間違いなくこの投稿を見ることになるだろうから少し恥ずかしく感じる。
私たちは写真クラブを主催するほど写真を撮るのにハマっている。なので、前撮りを撮ってあげるつもりだ。彼女がどんな姿になるか楽しみだ。

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The day before yesterday, I was glad to hear that my friend areis going to get married atill the end of year.

I feel a little embarrassed because she might read this post.

We are really into taking photos, enough to hosthat we started a photography club.

In my experience, I've never really heard anyone say they "host a club" . Usually you hear people say the "started" (or "founded" if you want to be more formal) or "joined" a club.

So, I plan ton taking their wedding photos, havingwith them dressed up before getting married.

I'm looking forward to see how she looks turns out.

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Good job! I hope your friend's wedding goes well. Keep up the good work!

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tommy

Sept. 7, 2020

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Thank you!

Marriage of a friend

The day before yesterday, I was glad to hear that my friends are going to get married atill the end of year.

I feel little embarrassed because she might read this post.

We are really into taking photos enough to, so much so that we host a photography club.

So, I plan to takinge their wedding photos, having them when they are dressed up before getting married.

A more natural way to say this would be:
“So, I plan to take their wedding photos when they are dressed up before the ceremony.”

I'm looking forward to see how she looks turns out.

I’m not entirely sure what if this is what you were trying to say or if you were trying to say “I’m looking forward to see how her look turns out.”

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Congratulations to your friend!

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tommy

Sept. 7, 2020

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Thank you. I'll tell her so.

Marriage of a friend

The day before yesterday, I was glad to hear that my friend areis going to get married tillbefore the end of the year.

If two of your friends are getting married it would be: "my friends are going to get married". I think in this case you are talking about one friend so it is "my friend is going to get married".

I feel a little embarrassed because she might read this post.

We are really into taking photos, enough tohat we host a photography club.

The problem with "enough to" is that in this sentence it could be read as being hypothetical. As in, you like photos "enough to" host a club (but you don't actually). I think you mean to say that you actually do host a club so the correction makes that clear, since "enough that we host" is not hypothetical anymore.

So, I am planning to takinge their pre-wedding photos, havingwith them all dressed up before getting married.

Your original sentence is not clear if you are taking the "wedding photos" or photos "before getting married" so the correction makes it consistent.

I'm looking forward to seeing how she looks turns out.

The grammar is slightly off in this sentence, but there are a few ways to correct it. The correction above is for emphasizing how she looks.

Or: "I'm looking forward to seeing how the photos turn out."
If you want to emphasize how the photo quality will look.

Or: "I'm looking forward to seeing how she looks in the photos."
If you want to emphasize how she looks, specifically in the photos.

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Good job! I hope they have a great wedding and the pictures come out well!

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tommy

Sept. 7, 2020

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We are really into taking photos, enough tohat we host a photography club.

Your comments always make my questions (problems?) clear! Thank you.

Marriage of a friend


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The day before yesterday, I was glad to hear that my friend are going to get married till the end of year.


The day before yesterday, I was glad to hear that my friend areis going to get married tillbefore the end of the year.

If two of your friends are getting married it would be: "my friends are going to get married". I think in this case you are talking about one friend so it is "my friend is going to get married".

The day before yesterday, I was glad to hear that my friends are going to get married atill the end of year.

The day before yesterday, I was glad to hear that my friend areis going to get married atill the end of year.

I feel little embarrassed because she might read this post.


I feel a little embarrassed because she might read this post.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I feel a little embarrassed because she might read this post.

We are really into taking photos enough to host a photography club.


We are really into taking photos, enough tohat we host a photography club.

The problem with "enough to" is that in this sentence it could be read as being hypothetical. As in, you like photos "enough to" host a club (but you don't actually). I think you mean to say that you actually do host a club so the correction makes that clear, since "enough that we host" is not hypothetical anymore.

We are really into taking photos enough to, so much so that we host a photography club.

We are really into taking photos, enough to hosthat we started a photography club.

In my experience, I've never really heard anyone say they "host a club" . Usually you hear people say the "started" (or "founded" if you want to be more formal) or "joined" a club.

So, I plan to taking their wedding photos, having them dressed up before getting married.


So, I am planning to takinge their pre-wedding photos, havingwith them all dressed up before getting married.

Your original sentence is not clear if you are taking the "wedding photos" or photos "before getting married" so the correction makes it consistent.

So, I plan to takinge their wedding photos, having them when they are dressed up before getting married.

A more natural way to say this would be: “So, I plan to take their wedding photos when they are dressed up before the ceremony.”

So, I plan ton taking their wedding photos, havingwith them dressed up before getting married.

I'm looking forward to see how she looks turns out.


I'm looking forward to seeing how she looks turns out.

The grammar is slightly off in this sentence, but there are a few ways to correct it. The correction above is for emphasizing how she looks. Or: "I'm looking forward to seeing how the photos turn out." If you want to emphasize how the photo quality will look. Or: "I'm looking forward to seeing how she looks in the photos." If you want to emphasize how she looks, specifically in the photos.

I'm looking forward to see how she looks turns out.

I’m not entirely sure what if this is what you were trying to say or if you were trying to say “I’m looking forward to see how her look turns out.”

I'm looking forward to see how she looks turns out.

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