Oct. 24, 2023
Marijuana Issue
Just around a year ago, the government of Thailand legalized the consumption of marijuana.
For me, I am from a country that strictly prohibits such drugs, and marijuana has been labeled as an evil product for decades. So it's a bit challenging for me to view this policy as reasonable. I also met one person from Thailand, and we discussed about it. He said many local Thai farmers have been switching to marijuana-related plants; it's also a nightmare for local society. He said one of his relatives had been jailed many times due to the trade of this product in the past 10 years. However, his relative is now preparing to make a big fortune from his old friends.
I once watched a video in which a young couple from England highly praised the Thai government, saying the legalization would bring a huge amount of money to this country. He also posted a video showing how he sucked this product in public and said the quality was the most cost-effective for him.
Considering Thai is a developing country and the education there can not compare to that of Western countries like Canada and the Netherlands, I personally think Thai might will meet more trouble than the latter two countries, which also have legalized marijuana.
The Marijuana Issue
Just around a year ago, the Thai government of Thailand legalized the consumption of marijuana.
For me, I am from a country that strictly prohibits suchrecreational drugs use, and marijuana has been labeled as an evil product for decades, so it's a bit challenging for me to view this policy as reasonable.
So it's a bit challenging for me to view this policy as reasonable.
I also met onea person from Thailand, and we discussed about it.
He said many local Thai farmers have been switching to marijuana-related plants; it's also a nightmare for local society.
He said one of his relatives had been jailed many times due to the trade of this productselling marijuana in the past 10 years.
However, his relative is now preparing to make a big fortune from his old friends.
I once watched a video in whichof a young couple from England highly praiseding the Thai government, saying theat legalization would bring a huge amount of money to thise country.
He also posted a video showing how he sucmoked this product in public and said the quality was the most cost-effective for him.
Considering Thaithat Thailand is a developing country and the education there can not compare to that of Western countries like Canada and the Netherlands, I personally think Thailand might will meet more trouble than the latter two countries, which also have legalized marijuana.
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Nice work!
Oct. 25, 2023
Thank you for your correction and it's good to clarify as "creational drug".
Marijuana Issue
Just around a year ago, the government of Thailand legalized the consumption of marijuana.
For me, I am from a country that strictly prohibits such drugs, and marijuana has been labeled as an evil product for decades.
So it's a bit challenging for me to view this policy as reasonable.
I also met onea person from Thailand, and we [discussed it | talked about it].
He said many (local) Thai farmers have been switching to marijuana-related plants; it's also a nightmare for local society.
“Local Thai” is redundant and unnatural.
He said one of his relatives had been jailed many times [due to the trade of | for trading] this product in the past 10 years.
It would be better to move “many times” and “the past 10 years” together:
- “…jailed [many times in the past 10 years] for trading this product.”
- “…jailed for trading this product [many times in the past 10 years].”
However, his relative is now preparing to make a big fortune from his old friends.
I once watched a video in which a young couple from England highly praised the Thai government, saying the legalization would bring a huge amount of money to this country.
He also posted a video showing how he sucmoked this product in public and said the quality was the most cost-effective for him.
“The quality was the most cost-effective” sounds odd. I’m not sure what you mean.
Considering Thailand is a developing country and the education there can not compare to that of Western countries like Canada and the Netherlands, I personally think Thailand might will meet more trouble than the latter two countries, which also have legalized marijuana.
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Marijuana became legal in my state, too. I have mixed feelings about it: I think it was a waste of government resources and was harmful to society to put many people in jail just for using a product that doesn’t harm anyone but themselves, but I also think it’s wrong that so many kids have now started smoking it.
Oct. 24, 2023
I should say, "the marijuana made in Thailand is cost-effective." Thank you for your corrections!
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