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nambatsuyoshi

March 29, 2023

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March 29, 2023

When I take a train, I had used an IC card called ICOCA. A service called Mobile ICOCA started last week. You can use ICOCA using your phone. It's very convenient.
By the way, I went to Sewarite to see the cherry blossoms last weekend. This evening, I went there again. The cherry blossoms were in full bloom and were really beautiful
Here are some photos I uploaded to Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/p/CqXd_zJvS2f/

電車に乗るときはICOCAというICカードを使っていました。先週、モバイルICOCAというサービスが始まりました。ICOCAをスマホで使えるようになりました。とても便利です。
ところで、先週末に背割提に桜を見に行きました。今日の夕方、また行きました。桜は満開でとても綺麗でした。
こちらがインスタにアップした写真です。
https://www.instagram.com/p/CqXd_zJvS2f/


電車に乗るときはICOCAというICカードを使っていました。先週、モバイルICOCAというサービスが始まりました。ICOCAをスマホで使えるようになりました。とても便利です。
ところで、先週末に背割提に桜を見に行きました。今日の夕方、また行きました。桜は満開でとても綺麗でした。
こちらがインスタにアップした写真です。
https://www.instagram.com/p/CqXd_zJvS2f/

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March 29, 2023

When I take a train, I hadI used to used an IC card called ICOCA when I took the train.

ALast week, a service called Mobile ICOCA started last weekwas launched.

You can use ICOCA usingon your phone.

便利そうですね。

It's very convenient.

By the way, I went to Sewarite to see the cherry blossoms last weekend.

This evening, I went there again.

The cherry blossoms were in full bloom and were really beautiful.

oops, typo

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とても上手に書けています!

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nambatsuyoshi

March 30, 2023

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Thank you!

March 29, 2023

When I take aravel by train, I had used an IC card called ICOCA.

If you want to write this sentence in the past tense, you would say: When I took the train, I used an IC card called ICOCA.

A service called Mobile ICOCA started last week.

You can use/access ICOCA usingon your phone.

It's very convenient.

By the way, I went to Sewarite to see the cherry blossoms last weekend.

This evening, I went there again.

The cherry blossoms were in full bloom and were really beautiful.

Here are some photos I uploaded to Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/p/CqXd_zJvS2f/

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The pictures of the cherry blossoms are so lovely! I hope you had a good time :)

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nambatsuyoshi

March 29, 2023

4

Thank you!

March 29, 2023


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When I take a train, I had used an IC card called ICOCA.


When I take aravel by train, I had used an IC card called ICOCA.

If you want to write this sentence in the past tense, you would say: When I took the train, I used an IC card called ICOCA.

When I take a train, I hadI used to used an IC card called ICOCA when I took the train.

A service called Mobile ICOCA started last week.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

ALast week, a service called Mobile ICOCA started last weekwas launched.

You can use ICOCA using your phone.


You can use/access ICOCA usingon your phone.

You can use ICOCA usingon your phone.

便利そうですね。

It's very convenient.


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By the way, I went to Sewarite to see the cherry blossoms last weekend.


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This evening, I went there again.


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The cherry blossoms were in full bloom and were really beautiful


The cherry blossoms were in full bloom and were really beautiful.

The cherry blossoms were in full bloom and were really beautiful.

oops, typo

Here are some photos I uploaded to Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/p/CqXd_zJvS2f/


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電車に乗るときはICOCAというICカードを使っていました。先週、モバイルICOCAというサービスが始まりました。ICOCAをスマホで使えるようになりました。とても便利です。


ところで、先週末に背割提に桜を見に行きました。今日の夕方、また行きました。桜は満開でとても綺麗でした。


こちらがインスタにアップした写真です。


https://www.instagram.com/p/CqXd_zJvS2f/


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