Nov. 3, 2021
Maple-viewing
As far as I know, people like to go to mountains in fall season.
It is because people can see beautiful maples rather than other places.
By my count, there are more 70% of the areas covered by mountains in Korea.
So people can go mountains for maple-viewing these days.
I think, this week is one of the best days to go maple-viewing .
On this weekend, I am going to go to a mountain with my family to take pictures of leaves
Maple-viewing
As far as I know, people like to go to mountains in fall season.
It's not necessary to say "fall season" since it's understood from context :)
(It is) because people can see beautiful maples rather than other places.
By my count, there are moremore than 70% of the aKorea is covered by mountains in Korea.
This sounds better :)
So people can go to the mountains for maple-viewing these dayto see maple trees.
Maple viewing in english sounds odd, so I'd suggest just saying "to see x" :)
I think, this week is one of the best days to go maple-viewing see the maple trees.
On this weekend, I aI'm going to go to athe mountains this weekend with my family to take pictures of leaves.
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Well done! Thank you so much for your in-depth corrections btw :)
Nov. 5, 2021
Thank you! And I will wait your next diary. :)
Nov. 5, 2021
You did great! Keep it up and you'll do perfectly next time! :)
Maple-viewing
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On tThis weekend, I am going to go to a mountain with my family to take pictures of the leaves.
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Good job! :)
Nov. 4, 2021
Thank you so much. :)
This is the first time to describe about maple leaves, so it was quite difficult.
Nov. 5, 2021
You did great! Keep it up and you'll do perfectly next time! :)
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As far as I know, people like to go to mountains in fall season.
As far as I know, people like to go to mountains in fall It's not necessary to say "fall season" since it's understood from context :) |
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It is because people can see beautiful maples rather than other places.
(It is) because people can see beautiful maples rather than other places. |
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By my count, there are more 70% of the areas covered by mountains in Korea. By my count, By my count, This sounds better :) |
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So people can go mountains for maple-viewing these days.
So people can go to the mountains Maple viewing in english sounds odd, so I'd suggest just saying "to see x" :) |
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I think, this week is one of the best days to go maple-viewing . I think I think |
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On this weekend, I am going to go to a mountain with my family to take pictures of leaves
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