Jan. 30, 2023
Many People are Moving From Rural Areas to Big Cities.
Many people living in the countryside want to migrate to urban areas, especially in today’s competitive world. They think big cities can provide more benefits for them. From my perspective, however, although there are some advantages, this trend indeed brings some adverse effects.
As for the reason of this trend, on the one hand, big cities are able to provide colorful job opportunities for people with different backgrounds. People are easier to hunt for a suitable job and make a relatively ideal profit. Conversely, the kinds of jobs in rural areas are single, like farmers, and vendors. Most importantly, their income is much lower than working in big cities. On the other hand, city dwellers have more responsibilities to enjoy a sound social welfare program which is indispensable to bring convenient services to people. For example, metropolises usually have top-class teaching resources, including experienced and specialized teachers, colorful outdoor activities, excellent teaching environments and so on. If people have an accident and need first aid, they would obtain an all-round injury assessment and professional medical treatment. Apart from that, it is public facilities that help people get away from the hustle and bustle of daily work, which I think is the biggest benefit for having such places in big cities.
As I see it, there is no dying that people moving to megacities bring fresh blood to the urban labor market. They have the ability to contribute to the development of cities through their hard work, which has a positive effect on boosting economic growth. Conversely, with rural people leaving their hometowns, the rural-urban income disparity will be much wider rather than lower. Young people who are talented, energic, and created will flock to cities in search of educational and employment opportunities, leaving rural area’s local economy gradually becoming sluggish. As time goes by, it is more difficult for rural areas to break the cycle of poverty. For example, if the majority of labors are leaving their home and migrating to cities, there is no one left to farm at home, leading to no crops to supply for cities in the long run, which will be a thorny problem to be solved.
In conclusion, more and more people going to cities to search for better living conditions or job opportunities is more likely to be an irreversible trend, which has some benefits for people while bring more drawbacks for the whole society or individuals.
Many People are Moving From Rural Areas to Big Cities.
Many people living in the countryside want to migrate to urban areas, especially in today’s competitive world.
They think big cities can provide more benefits for them.
From my perspective, however, although there are some advantages, this trend indeed brings some adverse effects.
As for the reason of this trend, on the one hand, big cities are able to provide colorful job opportunities for people with different backgrounds.
People arefind it easier to hunt for a suitable job and make a relatively ideal profitdecent income.
Something can't be "relatively ideal", but "ideal" means there are no flaws.
Profit is the income of a business. Income, salary or wage all mean the money you make in
Conversely, the kinds of jobs in rural areas are singleunvaried, like farmers, and vendoshop owners.
I'm not sure what you mean by "single", but I have guessed that you meant that there are not many types of job.
"Vendor" means seller, but it is not a job. Someone who works in a grocery shop would technically be a vendor of fruits and vegetables, but they would describe themselves and a "greengrocer" or "shop owner"
Most importantly, their income is much lower than that of those working in big cities.
On the other hand, city dwellers have more responsibilopportunities to enjoy a sound social welfare program which is indispensablenecessary to bring convenient services to people.
For example, metropolises usually have top-class teaching resources, including experienced and specialized teachers, colorful outdoor activities, excellent teaching environments and so on.
If people have an accident and need first aid, they would obtain an all-round injury assessment and professional medical treatment.
Apart from that, it is public facilities that help people get away from the hustle and bustle of daily work, which I think is the biggest benefit for having such places in big cities.
What do you mean by public facilities in this context? Not all public facilities help you escape the city.
As I see it, there is no dying? that people moving to megacities bring fresh blood to the urban labor market.
I don't know what you mean by dying here
They have the ability to contribute to the development of cities through their hard work, which has a positive effect on boosting economic growth.
Conversely, with rural people leaving their hometowns, the rural-urban income disparity will be much wider rather than lower.
Young people who are talented, energetic, and creatived will flock to cities in search of educational and employment opportunities, leaving the rural area’s' local economyies to gradually becominge sluggish.
As time goes by, it is more difficult for rural areas to break the cycle of poverty.
For example, if the majority of laborers are leaving their homes and migrating to cities, there is no one left to farm at home, leading to no crops to supply for cities in the long run, which will be a thorny problem to be solved.
In conclusion, more and more people going to cities to search for better living conditions or job opportunities is more likely to be an irreversible trend, which has some benefits for people while bringing more drawbacks for the whole of society or individuals.
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Very well written! This is a very important topic as people all the over the world continue to move into urban centres and away from the countryside.
Jan. 30, 2023
People arefind it easier to hunt for a suitable job and make a relatively ideal profitdecent income.
Thanks for your explanation!
Jan. 30, 2023
Conversely, the kinds of jobs in rural areas are singleunvaried, like farmers, and vendoshop owners.
Good to know!
Jan. 30, 2023
As I see it, there is no dying? that people moving to megacities bring fresh blood to the urban labor market.
"denying"
Some typos in the original.
Many People are Moving From Rural Areas to Big Cities.
Many people living in the countryside want to migrate to urban areas, especially in today’s competitive world.
They think big cities can provide more benefits for them.
From my perspective, however, although there are some advantages, this trend indeed brings some adverse effects.
As for the reason of this trend, on the one hand, big cities are able to provide colorful job opportunities for people with different backgrounds.
People arecan easier toly hunt for a suitable job and make a relatively ideal profit.
Conversely, the kinds of jobs in rural areas are singleone man jobs, like farmers, and vendors.
I think this is what you meant? single doesn't really make sense here
Most importantly, their income is much lower than if they workinged in big cities.
On the other hand, city dwellers have more responsibilopportunities to enjoy a sound social welfare program which is indispensable to bringing convenient services to people.
For example, metropolises usually have top-class teaching resources, including experienced and specialized teachers, colorful outdoor activities, excellent teaching environments and so on.
If peoplsomeone haves an accident and needs first aid, they would obtain an all-around injury assessment and professional medical treatment.
Apart from that, it is the public facilities that help people get away from the hustle and bustle of daily work, which I think is the biggest benefit ofor having such places in big cities.
As I see it, there is no dying that people moving to megacities which brings fresh blood to the urban labor market.
They have the ability to contribute to the development of cities through their hard work, which has a positive effect on boosting economic growth.
Conversely, with rural people leaving their hometowns, the rural-urban income disparity will be much wider rather than lower.
Young people who are talented, energetic, and created (?) will flock to cities in search of educational and employment opportunities, leaving rural area’s’ local economyies gradually becoming sluggish.
As time goes by, it is more difficult for rural areas to break the cycle of poverty.
For example, if the majority of laborers are leaving their homes and migrating to cities, there is no one left to farm at home, leading to no crops to supply for cities in the long run, which will be a thorny problem to be solved.
In conclusion, more and more people going to cities to search for better living conditions or job opportunities is more likely to be an irreversible trend, which has some benefits for people while bringing more drawbacks for the whole society or individuals.
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fantastic!
Jan. 30, 2023
Thanks for your corrections!
Conversely, the kindre aren't many types of jobs in rural areas are single, like farmers, and vendors.
Most importantly, their income is much lower than those working in big cities.
As I see it, there is no denying that people moving to megacities bring fresh blood to the urban labor market.
Jan. 30, 2023
Thanks!
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Apart from that, it is public facilities that help people get away from the hustle and bustle of daily work, which I think is the biggest benefit for having such places in big cities. Apart from that, it is the public facilities that help people get away from the hustle and bustle of daily work, which I think is the biggest benefit of Apart from that, it is public facilities that help people get away from the hustle and bustle of daily work, which I think is the biggest benefit for having such places in big cities. What do you mean by public facilities in this context? Not all public facilities help you escape the city. |
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As I see it, there is no dying that people moving to megacities bring fresh blood to the urban labor market. As I see it, there is no denying that people moving to megacities bring fresh blood to the urban labor market. As I see it, there is no dying that people moving to megacities which brings fresh blood to the urban labor market. As I see it, there is no I don't know what you mean by dying here |
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They have the ability to contribute to the development of cities through their hard work, which has a positive effect on boosting economic growth. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Conversely, with rural people leaving their hometowns, the rural-urban income disparity will be much wider rather than lower. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Young people who are talented, energic, and created will flock to cities in search of educational and employment opportunities, leaving rural area’s local economy gradually becoming sluggish. Young people who are talented, energetic, and created (?) will flock to cities in search of educational and employment opportunities, leaving rural area Young people who are talented, energetic, and creative |
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For example, if the majority of labors are leaving their home and migrating to cities, there is no one left to farm at home, leading to no crops to supply for cities in the long run, which will be a thorny problem to be solved. For example, if the majority of laborers are leaving their homes and migrating to cities, there is no one left to farm at home, leading to no crops to supply For example, if the majority of laborers are leaving their homes and migrating to cities, there is no one left to farm at home, leading to no crops to supply |
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In conclusion, more and more people going to cities to search for better living conditions or job opportunities is more likely to be an irreversible trend, which has some benefits for people while bring more drawbacks for the whole society or individuals. In conclusion, more and more people going to cities to search for better living conditions or job opportunities is more likely to be an irreversible trend, which has some benefits for people while bringing more drawbacks for the whole society or individuals. In conclusion, more and more people going to cities to search for better living conditions or job opportunities is more likely to be an irreversible trend, which has some benefits for people while bringing more drawbacks for the whole of society or individuals. |
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