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Jan. 14, 2023

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Malwares

Did anybody infect his PC with a malware, because I think I did. This is not a story, so it does not take us back to one specific moment. When I was child I used to download programs and videogames from weird sources... Videogames like Minecraft (T launcher :( ), Counter Strike 1.6, and more were downloaded by me from not official pages. But what can I say, back then I did not know how to download videogames, I was a kid. The thing is, weird things were happening during this time. For example the principal page of the browser was randomly changed, and some programs that I did not know its existence, popped up on my desktop. Cool, my PC magically turned into a pool party of malwares.


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Did anybody infect histheir PCs with a malware, because I think I did.

This is not a story, so it does not take us back to one specific moment.

When I was a child I used to download programs and videogames from weird sources... Videogames like Minecraft (T launcher :( ), Counter Strike 1.6, and more were downloaded by me from not official pages.

But what can I say, back then I did not know how to download videogames; after all, I was a kid.

The thing is, weird things were happening during this time.

For example the principalhome page of the browser was randomly changed, and some programs that I did not know its existence,d popped up on my desktop.

Cool, my PC magically turned into a pool party of malwares.

Malwares

The plural of "malware" is "malware."

Did anybody infect his PC with a malware, because I think I did.

This is not a story, so it does not take us back to one specific moment.

When I was a child I used to download programs and videogames from weird sources... VI downloaded videogames like Minecraft (T launcher :( ), Counter Strike 1.6, and more were downloaded by me from unot official pages.

We tend to use active speech more than passive speech.

But what can I say, back then I did not know how to download videogames,. I was a kid.

or

But what can I say, back then I did not know how to download videogames because I was a kid.

The thing is, weird things were happening during this time.

For example, the principal page of the browser was randomly changed, and some programs that I did not know of its existence, popped up on my desktop.

Cool, my PC magically turned into a pool party of malwares.

Ugh.

Feedback

Good work.

Malwares

Malware is both singular and plural

DidHas anybody infect hised their PC with a malware, before? Because I think I didhave.

This is not a story, so it does not take us back to one specific moment.

When I was child I used to download programs and videogames from weird sources... V; videogames like Minecraft (T launcher :( ), Counter Strike 1.6, and more were downloaded by me from unot official pages.

'By me' is unneeded because you already said you were the one downloading them.

But what can I say, back then I did not know how to download videogames safely, I was just a kid.

The thing is, weird things werestarted to happening during this time.

For example, the principalhome page of the browser was randomly changed, and some programs that I did not know its existence,d popped up on to my desktop.

Cool, my PC magically turned into a pool party of malwares.

Feedback

Great job!

And this is why pirating is a dangerous job for a kid.

Malwares


Malwares

Malware is both singular and plural

Malwares

The plural of "malware" is "malware."

Did anybody infect his PC with a malware, because I think I did.


DidHas anybody infect hised their PC with a malware, before? Because I think I didhave.

Did anybody infect his PC with a malware, because I think I did.

Did anybody infect histheir PCs with a malware, because I think I did.

This is not a story, so it does not take us back to one specific moment.


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When I was child I used to download programs and videogames from weird sources... Videogames like Minecraft (T launcher :( ), Counter Strike 1.6, and more were downloaded by me from not official pages.


When I was child I used to download programs and videogames from weird sources... V; videogames like Minecraft (T launcher :( ), Counter Strike 1.6, and more were downloaded by me from unot official pages.

'By me' is unneeded because you already said you were the one downloading them.

When I was a child I used to download programs and videogames from weird sources... VI downloaded videogames like Minecraft (T launcher :( ), Counter Strike 1.6, and more were downloaded by me from unot official pages.

We tend to use active speech more than passive speech.

When I was a child I used to download programs and videogames from weird sources... Videogames like Minecraft (T launcher :( ), Counter Strike 1.6, and more were downloaded by me from not official pages.

But what can I say, back then I did not know how to download videogames, I was a kid.


But what can I say, back then I did not know how to download videogames safely, I was just a kid.

But what can I say, back then I did not know how to download videogames,. I was a kid.

or But what can I say, back then I did not know how to download videogames because I was a kid.

But what can I say, back then I did not know how to download videogames; after all, I was a kid.

The thing is, weird things were happening during this time.


The thing is, weird things werestarted to happening during this time.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For example the principal page of the browser was randomly changed, and some programs that I did not know its existence, popped up on my desktop.


For example, the principalhome page of the browser was randomly changed, and some programs that I did not know its existence,d popped up on to my desktop.

For example, the principal page of the browser was randomly changed, and some programs that I did not know of its existence, popped up on my desktop.

For example the principalhome page of the browser was randomly changed, and some programs that I did not know its existence,d popped up on my desktop.

Cool, my PC magically turned into a pool party of malwares.


Cool, my PC magically turned into a pool party of malwares.

Cool, my PC magically turned into a pool party of malwares.

Ugh.

Cool, my PC magically turned into a pool party of malwares.

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