May 21, 2025
I come from taiwan.
I always watch Youtube to catch some information.
I saw the trip channel of Youtube,the channel introduce Malaysia trip is so funny.
I go to japan many times,and I go to China many times too.
Now I very want to go to Malaysia with my wife,but I can't.
Because my wife's tummy has a baby,so we can't take flight go to Malaysia.
Sorry, Malaysia sorry
I come from tTaiwan.
The names of countries are proper nouns, and should always be capitalised.
I always watch YoutTube to catch some information.
(1) Strictly speaking, "YouTube" should be the proper capitalisation.
I saw the tripa travel channel ofn YoutTube,the channel introduce it introduced their trip to Malaysia trip iand it was so funny.
(1) This is your first time introducing the channel, so "a" is expected instead of "the".
(2) "Trip channel" is the wrong expression. "Trip" refers to the excursion itself, while "travel" refers to the act of going on trips.
(3) You can consider replacing "the channel" with it (to avoid repetition), since it is clear that "it" would refer to the channel.
(4) It should be "introduced" instead of "introduce", since you're writing in the past tense.
I gohave been to jJapan many times, and I gohave been to China many times too.
(1) Your going to Japan and China occurred in the past, and have consequences in the present (that being that you now have the experience of going to Japan and China), so "have been" (the present perfect) is expected.
(2) Again, "Japan", being the name of a country, should be capitalised.
Now I verreally want to go to Malaysia with my wife, but I can't.
"Very" is not used this way, in this particular position in a sentence. If you wish to use it, you can write: "Now I want to go to Malaysia very much with my wife..." I know the fact that one is okay while the other is not might not seem very logical, but I suppose that's just how it is.
Because my wife's tummy has a baby, so we can't take flight gofly to Malaysia.
(1) Colloquially, "tummy" is okay, but biologists won't be very happy, because the baby's not actually in the stomach! You can consider just writing "My wife is pregnant..."
(2) "Take flight" is not appropriate in this sentence, and is subtly different from "fly". Alternatively: "...so we can't take a flight to Malaysia."
Sorry, Malaysia sorry.
I come from tTaiwan.
Countries are always capitalized.
I always watch Youtube to catch/ get some information.
I saw the tripa travel channel ofn Youtube, the channel introduced their trip to Malaysia trip iand it was so funny.
I gohave been to jJapan many/ several times, and I gohave been to China many times too.
Now, I verreally want to go to Malaysia with my wife, but I can't.
Because my wife's tummy has a baby, (in it), so we can't take a flight to go to Malaysia.
You could also simply say "My wife is pregnant."
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Great work! Congratulations for the baby! Hope your wife has a safe delivery and hopefully, later, your family can go to Malaysia.
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I come from taiwan. I come from Countries are always capitalized. I come from The names of countries are proper nouns, and should always be capitalised. |
I always watch Youtube to catch some information. I always watch Youtube to catch/ get some information. I always watch You (1) Strictly speaking, "YouTube" should be the proper capitalisation. |
I saw the trip channel of Youtube,the channel introduce Malaysia trip is so funny. I saw I saw (1) This is your first time introducing the channel, so "a" is expected instead of "the". (2) "Trip channel" is the wrong expression. "Trip" refers to the excursion itself, while "travel" refers to the act of going on trips. (3) You can consider replacing "the channel" with it (to avoid repetition), since it is clear that "it" would refer to the channel. (4) It should be "introduced" instead of "introduce", since you're writing in the past tense. |
I go to japan many times,and I go to China many times too. I I (1) Your going to Japan and China occurred in the past, and have consequences in the present (that being that you now have the experience of going to Japan and China), so "have been" (the present perfect) is expected. (2) Again, "Japan", being the name of a country, should be capitalised. |
Now I very want to go to Malaysia with my wife,but I can't. Now, I Now I "Very" is not used this way, in this particular position in a sentence. If you wish to use it, you can write: "Now I want to go to Malaysia very much with my wife..." I know the fact that one is okay while the other is not might not seem very logical, but I suppose that's just how it is. |
Because my wife's tummy has a baby,so we can't take flight go to Malaysia. Because my wife's tummy has a baby You could also simply say "My wife is pregnant." Because my wife's tummy has a baby, so we can't (1) Colloquially, "tummy" is okay, but biologists won't be very happy, because the baby's not actually in the stomach! You can consider just writing "My wife is pregnant..." (2) "Take flight" is not appropriate in this sentence, and is subtly different from "fly". Alternatively: "...so we can't take a flight to Malaysia." |
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