Dec. 14, 2022
Making Online Friends
Hello! I hope you're well. :)
For today's journal I'll be attempting to do this homework task. In this task I need to answer the questions that my peer asked me.
The activity instructions mention that it's necessary to write long answers, to include a farewell and a greeting.
Third participation.
Greetings, Fidel.
I will now answer the questions you hage asked me:
1. What is your hair color?
My hair color is dark brown.
2. What are your hobbies?
My hobbies are sewing, learning languages, reading, and making handcrafts.
3. What is your marital status?
I am single.
4. What is your favorite food?
Russian cheese pasty with spinach.
5. What is the relationship with your relatives?
I am not quite sure what to answer here but I think that I have a good relationship with my family. I am very close with my mother and my grandmother. I consider my relationship with my sister and my brother a little bit distant though.
Goodbye.
Making Online Friends
Hello!
I hope you're well.
:)
For today's journal I'll be attempting to do this homework task.
In this task I need to answer the questions that my peer asked me.
The activity instructions mention that it's necessary to write long answers, to include a farewell and a greeting.
Third, participation.
Greetings, Fidel.
I will now answer the questions you hagve asked me:
1. What is your hair color?
My hair color is dark brown.
My hobbies are sewing, learning languages, reading, and making handcrafts.
3. What is your marital status?
I am single.
4. What is your favorite food?
Russian cheese pastry with spinach.
5. What is theyour relationship with your relatives like?
I just made it sound more natural.
I am not quite sure what to answer here but I think that I have a good relationship with my family.
I am very close with my mother and my grandmother.
I consider my relationship with my sister and my brother to be a little bit distant though.
Goodbye.
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Verrrrry verrrrry good!!
Dec. 15, 2022
Thank you so much! Your corrections helped me a lot.
Making Online Friends
Hello!
I hope you're well.
:)
For today's journal I'll be attempting to do this homework task.
In this task I need to answer the questions that my peer has asked me.
The activity instructions mention that it's necessary to write long answers, to include a farewell and a greeting.
Third participation.
I will now answer the questions you hagve asked me:
1. What is your hair color?
My hair color is dark brown.
2. What are your hobbies?
My hobbies are sewing, learning languages, reading, and makdoing handcrafts.
3. What is your marital status?
I am single.
4. What is your favorite food?
My favorite food is Russian cheese pasty with spinach.
This is an incomplete sentence.
5. What is the relationshipDo you get along with your relatives?
I too think that they are asking about your family but 'your relatives' is stated here in the question which usually means uncles, aunts, cousins etc. I think you answered it properly by declaing in your answer you get along with your family. Well done!
I am not quite sure what to answer here but I think that I have a good relationship with my family.
Excelent response.
I am very close with my mother and my grandmother.
I consider my relationship with my sister and my brother a little bit distant though.
You don't need the second my in this sentence, it is repetitive. You don't really declare your relationship with your sister and brother as being positive or negative. It is a vague declaration and would be better if you stated whether or not you get along with them.
Goodbye.
Dec. 15, 2022
I consider my relationship with my sister and my brother a little bit distant though.
I see, what about: "I get along with my sister and brother but I consider these relationships a little bit distant".
Dec. 15, 2022
Thank you so much for your help, Tim. Your detailed corrections are amazing!
Dec. 16, 2022
I see, what about: "I get along with my sister and brother but I consider these relationships a little bit distant".
Sounds much better.
Dec. 16, 2022
Sounds much better.
Thank you very much!
For today's journal I'll be attempting to do thisa homework task.
In this task I need to answer thespecific questions that my peer has asked me.
I will now answer the questions you hag’ve asked me:
My hobbies arinclude sewing, learning languages, reading, and making handcrafts.
I consider my relationship with my sister and my brother a littleto be a bit distant though, however.
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Bravo !
Dec. 15, 2022
😊 ¡Muchas gracias!
Making Online Friends
Hello!
I hope you're well.
:)
For today's journal I'll be attempting to do this homework task.
Technically correct but feels a little unnatural. I can't put my finger on why. Maybe "For today's journal entry, I'll be attempting this homework assignment."
InFor this task, I need to answer the questions that my peer asked me.
The activity instructions mention that it's necessary to write long answers, to include a farewell and a greeting.
Third participation.
Greetings, Fidel.
I will now answer the questions you hagve asked me:
1. What is your hair color?
My hair color is dark brown.
2. What are your hobbies?
My hobbies are sewing, learning languages, reading, and making handcraftsing.
3. What is your marital status?
I am single.
4. What is your favorite food?
Russian cheese pastry with spinach.
5. What is the relationship with your relatives?
I am not quite sure what to answer here but I think that I have a good relationship with my family.
I am very close with my mother and my grandmother.
I consider my relationship with my sister and my brother a little bit distant though.
Goodbye.
Feedback
Great job!
Dec. 14, 2022
For today's journal I'll be attempting to do this homework task.
Ok. I'll use that in the next journal entry. Thank you!
Dec. 14, 2022
Thank you so much for taking the time to correct me. :)
Dec. 15, 2022
Anytime!
Making Online Friends
Hello!
I hope you're well.
:)
For today's journal I'll be attempting to do thisa homework task.
In this task I need to answer the questions that my peers asked me.
The activity instructions mention that it's necessary to write long answers, to include a farewell and a greeting.
Third participationt.
Third round? I'm not sure what you mean here.
Greetings, Fidel.
I will now answer the questions you hage asked me:
1. What is your hair color?
My hair color is dark brown.
2. What are your hobbies?
My hobbies are sewing, learning languages, reading, and making handcrafted objects.
3. What is your marital status?
I am single.
4. What is your favorite food?
Russian cheese pastry with spinach.
Yum!
5. What is theHow is your relationship with your relatives?
I edited the sentence to make it grammatically correct but this sentence is very direct and even invasive. We wouldn't ask this question of people we hardly know in the US. In fact, we'd really have to know a person well to ask a question like this.
I am not quite sure what to answer here but I think that I have a good relationship with my family.
I am very close with my mother and my grandmother.
I consider my relationship with my sister and my brother a little bit distant though.
Goodbye.
Feedback
You answered very well. Very well done!
Dec. 14, 2022
Third participationt.
I mean that this is my third participation in the learning forum.
Dec. 14, 2022
I think you could say "This is the third time I've participated," to make the sentence more clear.
Dec. 14, 2022
I think you could say "This is the third time I've participated," to make the sentence more clear.
Ok! Thank you so much. :)
Dec. 14, 2022
Thank you very much for your detailed comment. I always appreciate your corrections, Mari.
Dec. 15, 2022
Ok! Thank you so much. :)
Yes, thank you, Eledaria!
Dec. 15, 2022
Thank you very much for your detailed comment. I always appreciate your corrections, Mari.
You're very welcome. I enjoy reading your journal entries.
For today's journal I'll be attempting to do thisa homework task.
In this task I need tomust answer the questions that my peer has asked me.
The activity instructions mention that it's necessary to write long answers, to and include a farewell and a greeting.
I will now answer the questions you hagve asked me:
i'm sure this one was just a typo haha
1. What is your hair color?
My hair color is dark brown.
2. What are your hobbies?
I am single.
Russian cheese pastry with spinach.
5. What is theHow would you describe your relationship with your relatives?
I am not quite sure what to answer here but I think that I have a good relationship with my family.
I am very close with my mother and my grandmother.
However, I consider my relationship with my sister and my brother a little bit distant though.
Goodbye.
Dec. 14, 2022
This was very good! My relationship with my brother is also quite distant :(
Dec. 14, 2022
This was very good! My relationship with my brother is also quite distant :(
Oww 😭 sorry to hear that.
Thank you so much for your corrections, I really appreciate them.
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