Efeceylqn's avatar
Efeceylqn

July 22, 2025

1
Making Coffee

I love coffee so much that can drink up to 4 in a day. Not only drink I also really love to make it, we have a professinal coffee machine at home so I have mastered to make coffee. When I was a kid my family didnt allow me to drink coffee in order to provide my health, at least it was their opinion. But since I know cofffe I love it so their prevention was only valid for my childhood. My interest had grew up for making and right now I can surely say that I have the almost same knowledge as a Barista.

Corrections

Making Coffee

I love coffee so much that can drink up to 4 in a day.

Not only drinko I love drinking it, I also really love to make it, w. We have a professional coffee machine at home, so I ha've mastered how to make coffee.

When I was a kid, my family didn't allow me to drink coffee in order to provide my health, abecause of health concerns. At least i, that was their opinion.

But since I know cofffe I lovedrink it, I enjoy it, so their prevention was only valid forin my childhood.

My interest had grew up for making and rightfor making coffee has grown, and now I can sureconfidently say that I have the almost the same knowledge as a Barista.

Efeceylqn's avatar
Efeceylqn

July 23, 2025

1

Thankss

I love coffee so much that I can drink up to 4 incups a day.

Even though I know what you mean, the sentence does sound more natural if you specify how much coffee you're drinking. That is, 4 CUPS. But in spoken English you will definitely hear people say things like "Do you want a coffee?" or "I'm going to buy a coffee".

Not only drinko I drink it, but I also really love to make it. At home, we have a professinal coffee machine at homefor professional baristas, and so I have mastered how to make real coffee.

"Professional coffee machine" doesn't sound quite right here.
The word professional is normally used to describe a paid person rather than an amateur. E.G. Amateur actor vs. professional actor.

When I was a kid my family didn't allow me tolet me drink coffee in order to provide my health, at least it was their opinionbecause, in their opinion, it was bad for my health.

In general, it's "improve my health" rather than "provide my health". "Provide my health" doesn't make sense in English.

But since I know cofffe I love it so their prevention was only valid for mythey were only able to prevent me from drinking it while I was a childhood.

Not completely sure what you were trying to say here.

My interest had grew up for making and right now I can surely sayAnd later on, I grew to love to make it. I am confident in my coffee-making skills and believe that I almost have the almost same knowledge as a Bbarista.

Professions aren't capitalised unless they're part of a title or name.
E.g. "I got into a fight with Doctor James." Because "doctor" is part of a title/name, you capitalise it.
But alternatively you could say, "I got into a fight with the doctor," or "I got into a fight with the barista."

Feedback

Good work!
In Australia, we drink a lot of coffee too. But I do try to avoid it after around 3 pm or else it keeps me up.

Efeceylqn's avatar
Efeceylqn

July 23, 2025

1

Thankss!

Making Coffee


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I love coffee so much that can drink up to 4 in a day.


I love coffee so much that I can drink up to 4 incups a day.

Even though I know what you mean, the sentence does sound more natural if you specify how much coffee you're drinking. That is, 4 CUPS. But in spoken English you will definitely hear people say things like "Do you want a coffee?" or "I'm going to buy a coffee".

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Not only drink I also really love to make it, we have a professinal coffee machine at home so I have mastered to make coffee.


Not only drinko I drink it, but I also really love to make it. At home, we have a professinal coffee machine at homefor professional baristas, and so I have mastered how to make real coffee.

"Professional coffee machine" doesn't sound quite right here. The word professional is normally used to describe a paid person rather than an amateur. E.G. Amateur actor vs. professional actor.

Not only drinko I love drinking it, I also really love to make it, w. We have a professional coffee machine at home, so I ha've mastered how to make coffee.

When I was a kid my family didnt allow me to drink coffee in order to provide my health, at least it was their opinion.


When I was a kid my family didn't allow me tolet me drink coffee in order to provide my health, at least it was their opinionbecause, in their opinion, it was bad for my health.

In general, it's "improve my health" rather than "provide my health". "Provide my health" doesn't make sense in English.

When I was a kid, my family didn't allow me to drink coffee in order to provide my health, abecause of health concerns. At least i, that was their opinion.

But since I know cofffe I love it so their prevention was only valid for my childhood.


But since I know cofffe I love it so their prevention was only valid for mythey were only able to prevent me from drinking it while I was a childhood.

Not completely sure what you were trying to say here.

But since I know cofffe I lovedrink it, I enjoy it, so their prevention was only valid forin my childhood.

My interest had grew up for making and right now I can surely say that I have the almost same knowledge as a Barista.


My interest had grew up for making and right now I can surely sayAnd later on, I grew to love to make it. I am confident in my coffee-making skills and believe that I almost have the almost same knowledge as a Bbarista.

Professions aren't capitalised unless they're part of a title or name. E.g. "I got into a fight with Doctor James." Because "doctor" is part of a title/name, you capitalise it. But alternatively you could say, "I got into a fight with the doctor," or "I got into a fight with the barista."

My interest had grew up for making and rightfor making coffee has grown, and now I can sureconfidently say that I have the almost the same knowledge as a Barista.

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium