Jan. 15, 2020
Making a Forky
Today my son and I tried to make a Forky from Toy Story 4.
He chose a yellow pipe cleaner for Forky’s hands, and blue clay for its foot.
He really enjoyed playing with clay.
I noticed he had never played with clay at home before!
So I’ll get more clay for him tomorrow.
今日、息子とトイ・ストーリー4のフォーキーを作ってみました。
黄色のモールをフォーキーの手に、青い粘土を足に選びました。息子は粘土遊びをとても楽しんでいました。
今まで一度も家で粘土遊びをしてなかったことに気づきました！なので、明日息子のために粘土を買ってこようと思います。
Making a Forky
Today, my son and I tried to make a Forky from Toy Story 4.
He chose a yellow pipe cleaner for Forky’s hands, and blue clay for its fooeet.
He really enjoyed playing with the clay.
I noticrealized he had never played with clay at home before!
So I’ll get more clay for him tomorrow.
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Nice job. Cute story.
Jan. 16, 2020
Thank you for the correction!
I was not sure to put “a”, “the”, or nothing.
Your correction really helps me!
Making a Forky
Today my son and I tried to make a Forky from Toy Story 4.
He chose a yellow pipe cleaner for Forky’s hands, and blue clay for its foot.
He really enjoyed playing with clay.
I noticrealized he had never played with clay at home before!
notice = "I saw it happen" (which doesn't make sense because you can't "see him never playing with clay at home"). This is a fairly small, subtle mistake though.
So I’ll get more clay for him tomorrow.
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Great job! I'm sure a lot of kids made their own versions of Forky after seeing Toy Story 4 :D
Jan. 15, 2020
Thank you for the correction!
I understood the difference between notice and realize!
Yeah, I can imagine kids all over the world created their own Forky after watching Toy Story 4! Soooo many Forkies! How cute.💕
Jan. 15, 2020
Today my son and I tried to make a Forky from Toy Story 4.
"Today my son and I tried to make Forky from Toy Story 4."
I don't think "a" is needed since you're talking about a character, but I don't think it's that big of a deal if it is :)
Jan. 16, 2020
Thank you for teaching me about it!
It’s still difficult to put a/the or not...
I’ll rewrite that way later! :)
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Making a Forky This sentence has been marked as perfect! Making |
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Today my son and I tried to make a Forky from Toy Story 4. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Today, my son and I tried to make |
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He chose a yellow pipe cleaner for Forky’s hands, and blue clay for its foot. This sentence has been marked as perfect! He chose |
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He really enjoyed playing with clay. This sentence has been marked as perfect! He really enjoyed playing with the clay. |
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I noticed he had never played with clay at home before! I notice = "I saw it happen" (which doesn't make sense because you can't "see him never playing with clay at home"). This is a fairly small, subtle mistake though. I |
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So I’ll get more clay for him tomorrow. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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