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We have an attic in our house and it used to hold lots of dust due to a false ceiling that we installed after we bought this homuse.

House is to be used here because it is a building, home is like building + the people in it.

NowRecently, my father and I, contracted a constructor to convert the attic into a normal room, in order to accomplish this, the worker is addingadded more bricks to the wall and also took ofremoved the roof, w. We were anxious due to the weather, since in a moment notice the rain could flood our home anytime.

In 8 days without the roof of hour home there was not a single drop of waterThere wasn't a roof over the attic for eight days and rain didn't fall. We also we managed to move our things since we are living here while the constructor is doing his job, he is almost finisheddone and I'm looking forward to use this new room as an Ooffice/Eentertainment room.

We have an attic in our house and it used to hold lots of dust due to a false ceiling that we installed after we bought thise homuse.

Now my father and I, contracted a constructobuilder to convert the attic into a normal room, i. In order to accomplish this the workbuilder is adding more bricks to the wall and also tookaking off the roof, w. We were anxious due to the weather predictions, since inat a moment notice the rain could flood our home.

In During the8 days without thea roof of hon our homeuse, there was not a single drop of waterrain. We also we managed to move our things out since we are living here while the constructobuilder is doing his job, h. He is almost finished and I'm looking forward to useing this new room as an Office/Entertainment room.

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We have an attic in our house and ithere used to holdbe lots of dust in it due to a false ceiling that we installed after we bought ithis home.

You could also say "...but it used to be very dusty, due to..."

Now my father and I, contract have hired a construactor to convert the attic into a normal room, i. In order to accomplish this, the workecontractor is adding more bricks to the wall and also took off the roof, w. We were anxious due to the weather, since in a moment notice the rain could flood our home at a moment's notice.

Did you mean "contractor" instead of "constructor"?

In 8 daysDuring the 8 days we spent without thea roof of hver our home, there was not a single drop of waterrain. We also we managed to move our things, since we are living here while the construactor is doing his job, he i. He's almost finished and I'm looking to use this new room as an Ooffice/Eentertainment room.

Makeover Renovating my home

"Makeover" is ok but "Renovating" I feel is more appropriate with all the work you had done on your house.

We have an attic in our house and it used to hold lots of dust due to a false ceiling that we installed after we bought thisour home.

This sentence is fine grammatically but it would help with clarity if maybe you described the dust building up on the false ceiling.

Now my father and I, contracted a constructorprofessional to convert the attic into a normal room, i. In order to accomplish this the worker isprofessional addinged more bricks to the wall and also took off the roof, w. We were anxious due to the weather, since in a moment's notice the rain could flood our home.

I don't ever hear "constructor" being used to refer to a person so I replaced it
Worker usually implies a subordinate role so I replaced it. If this guy is doing a one man job I would give him more credit : P
I'm a little confused by the tense with how you originally used two tenses in the same extended sentence but to keep things consistent I changed "adding" to "added".

In 8 days without the roof of hour homeDuring the 8 days that our home was without a roof, there was not a single drop of water also wrain. We managed to move our things since we are living elsewhere while the constructorprofessional is doing his job, h. He is almost finished and I'm looking forward to useing this new room as an Office/Entertainment room.