March 31, 2020
Make Amends
I had a quarel with my wife over the weekend. I was falsely accused by her but later it turned out to be her misunderstanding. She appologized and handed over three masks hand-made by her to me on Monday.
One of them has a big HELLO KITTY and KITTY's character mark in the center of it.
Another has also a mark of HELLO KITTY and its character in another color.
The other is SNOOPY-printed mask.
I am a middle-aged man and go to work with staggered working hours every day.
I feel that wearing these masks is a torture.
週末、妻とケンカしました。私は濡れ衣を着せられましたが、後で、妻の勘違いだったと発覚しました。
月曜日、妻は私に謝り、妻お手製のマスクを３つ私に手渡しました。
１つは、マスクの真ん中にハローキティとそのキャラクターが大きく描かれており、もう１つは、同じくハローキティとそのキャラクターが色違いで描かれておりました。
最後のもう１つは、スヌーピー柄のマスクです。
私は中年おじさんで、毎日、時差出勤してます。
拷問か...
I had a quarreled with my wife over the weekend.
This sounds more natural.
I was falsely accused by her but laterShe accused me of something but in the end it turned out to be hera misunderstanding.
Again, this sounds more natural to me.
I feel that wWearing these masks is alike torture.
Again, this sounds more natural to me. The reader knows this is your opinion. It sounds stronger if you make this statement without writing "I feel."
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Very nice job.
April 2, 2020
Thank you so much!
Makeing Amends
タイトルに関して、ーingを付けるのはもっと自然な感じ
I had a quarrel with my wife over the weekend.
She appologized and handed over, on Monday, gave me three masks hand-made by her to me on Monday.
One of them has a big d "HELLO KITTY and KITTY's character mark" written on it in large letters and Hello Kitty's image in the center of it.
この話はかこで行うですから、過去形を使います。
Another has also a mark of had "HELLO KITTY" written on it and its character in another color.
The other is SNOOPY-was a Snoopy printed mask.
I am a middle-aged man and go to work with staggered workivery long hours every day.
I feel that wearing these masks is a torture.
I feel that wearing these masks is torture.でOK. これはどう思いますか？I feel like these masks are punishment. 「punishment」のニュアンスがちょっと違います。
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とても面白い話！i really enjoyed reading it!
April 1, 2020
Thank you so much! Your explanations are very easy to understand for me.
I like "I feel like these masks are punishment. "
昔の罰ゲームを思い出します(笑)
April 1, 2020
Haha, this made me laugh, as I pictured a salaryman wearing a Hello Kitty mask. I guess it's better than no mask but probably embarrassing! You expressed yourself well.
April 2, 2020
Hi, Qirien-san, Thank you for the kind message! I am going to use them turning back.
Makeing Amends
"Make Amends" is correct, but it's in the imperative. That would make more sense if you were trying to encourage people to make amends, not just talking about yourself.
I had a quarrel with my wife over the weekend.
I wasShe falsely accused by herme of something, but later it turned out to be her misunderstanding.
One has to be accused of something, so it needs to either be directly stated or clear from the context what it is. The original wording would have been okay if we knew what you were accused of, but since we don't and need to add "of something," it sounds slightly awkward.
She appologized and handed over three masks hand-made by her to me on Monday.
One of them has a big HELLO KITTY and KITTY's character mark in the center of it.
Another has also a mark of HELLO KITTY and its character in another, but in a different color.
This was grammatically correct but sounded redundant (and, somehow, also unclear) with the repetition of "other."
The other is a SNOOPY-printed mask.
I am a middle-aged man and go to work with staggered working hours every day.
I feel that wearing these masks is a torture.
April 1, 2020
Thank you so much for modifying and explanations!
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I was falsely accused by her but later it turned out to be her misunderstanding.
One has to be accused of something, so it needs to either be directly stated or clear from the context what it is. The original wording would have been okay if we knew what you were accused of, but since we don't and need to add "of something," it sounds slightly awkward.
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I am a middle-aged man and go to work with staggered working hours every day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I am a middle-aged man and go to work with |
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I feel that wearing these masks is a torture. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I feel that wearing these masks is I feel that wearing these masks is torture.でOK. これはどう思いますか？I feel like these masks are punishment. 「punishment」のニュアンスがちょっと違います。
Again, this sounds more natural to me. The reader knows this is your opinion. It sounds stronger if you make this statement without writing "I feel." |
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