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m0llymm

May 15, 2025

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m’aide avec ces mots?

1. l’importance d’école
2. D’autre part, ceux pensent qu’ils ont tort
3. la plupart de/s(?) enfants se sentir à l’aise
4. permet aux enfants de beaucoup apprennent sûr…
5. le système éducation souvent pénurie les compétences essentielles
6. les enfants apprennent à la maison
7. en exposant les enfants à les neuvelles cultures
8. quel donner aux enfants plus possibilités
9. éduquer les enfants à la maison ont les avantages


the importance of school

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m’Pouvez-vous m'aider avec ces mots ?

You'd need a structure like "pouvez-vous..." ("can you"), otherwise the sentence wouldn't make sense
Space before and after ! ? : ; « » %

1. lL’importance de l'école
2.

Definite, since you're talking about school as a general concept => L'école

D’autre part, ceuxrtains pensent qu’ils ont tort
3.
lLa plupart de/s(?)s

I guess you meant "some (people)"? In this case it would be "certains"
la plupart DES [de+les], you're taking a part from a definite group here

enfants se sentirent à l’aise .
4. permet aux enfants de beaucoup appren
nentdre sûur…
5. le système éducati
onf souvent [pénurie ?] les compétences essentielles
6. les enfants apprennent à la maison

7. en
expofaisant lesdécouvrir aux enfants à lesde neouvelles cultures
[8. quel donner aux enfants plus possibilités ?]
9.
éduquer les enfantsfaire l'école à la maison ont la des avantages

You need a conjugated (present form) => les enfants SE SENTENT

permettre d'apprenDRE (infinitive)

I guess you meant "about", so it would be "sur". "sûr" (with accent circonflexe) means "sure" or "safe"

adjective ("éducatif"). "Éducation" is only a noun, so you would need "de" to connect it to the previous noun, but an adjective is better here

"pénurie" is a noun, not a verb, so I don't know what you meant here

I don't know the context of 7, but "faire découvrir" would definitely be more positive than "exposer"

some new cultures => DE nouvelles cultures (indefinite)

I didn't understand 8

If you meant "homeschooling" for 9, "faire l'école à la maison" would be a more accurate pick, since "éduquer" in French has a much broader meaning than just instructing, giving information

You're subject is a verbal phrase ("éduquer les enfants") so a singular agreement applies => A

has some advantages = DES avantages

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It's very hard to grasp what chunks of sentences were supposed to mean in the mind of the person who wrote them, especially when there is no original text, so there are some parts I didn't understand. I did my best for the rest though.

m0llymm's avatar
m0llymm

May 15, 2025

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Thank you very much for your feedback, for 8 i was trying to say “which gives children more possibilities”, I should’ve put full sentences so sorry!

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Monsieur_Elephant

May 15, 2025

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*ce qui donne/qui donne aux enfants plus de possibilités
"ce qui" applies if the repeated subject is a whole verbal group, just "qui" if it is a noun.
And you're welcome!

m’aide avec ces mots?


m’Pouvez-vous m'aider avec ces mots ?

You'd need a structure like "pouvez-vous..." ("can you"), otherwise the sentence wouldn't make sense Space before and after ! ? : ; « » %

1. l’importance d’école 2.


1. lL’importance de l'école
2.

Definite, since you're talking about school as a general concept => L'école

D’autre part, ceux pensent qu’ils ont tort 3. la plupart de/s(?)


D’autre part, ceuxrtains pensent qu’ils ont tort
3.
lLa plupart de/s(?)s

I guess you meant "some (people)"? In this case it would be "certains" la plupart DES [de+les], you're taking a part from a definite group here

enfants se sentir à l’aise 4. permet aux enfants de beaucoup apprennent sûr… 5. le système éducation souvent pénurie les compétences essentielles 6. les enfants apprennent à la maison 7. en exposant les enfants à les neuvelles cultures 8. quel donner aux enfants plus possibilités 9. éduquer les enfants à la maison ont les avantages


enfants se sentirent à l’aise .
4. permet aux enfants de beaucoup appren
nentdre sûur…
5. le système éducati
onf souvent [pénurie ?] les compétences essentielles
6. les enfants apprennent à la maison

7. en
expofaisant lesdécouvrir aux enfants à lesde neouvelles cultures
[8. quel donner aux enfants plus possibilités ?]
9.
éduquer les enfantsfaire l'école à la maison ont la des avantages

You need a conjugated (present form) => les enfants SE SENTENT permettre d'apprenDRE (infinitive) I guess you meant "about", so it would be "sur". "sûr" (with accent circonflexe) means "sure" or "safe" adjective ("éducatif"). "Éducation" is only a noun, so you would need "de" to connect it to the previous noun, but an adjective is better here "pénurie" is a noun, not a verb, so I don't know what you meant here I don't know the context of 7, but "faire découvrir" would definitely be more positive than "exposer" some new cultures => DE nouvelles cultures (indefinite) I didn't understand 8 If you meant "homeschooling" for 9, "faire l'école à la maison" would be a more accurate pick, since "éduquer" in French has a much broader meaning than just instructing, giving information You're subject is a verbal phrase ("éduquer les enfants") so a singular agreement applies => A has some advantages = DES avantages

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