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milkyway

March 19, 2024

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Made a Presentation About Godzilla

The movie called “Godzilla Minus One” won Best Visual Effects at the 96th Academy Awards.
A behind-the-scenes footage video introduced ways to get the maximum effect with a small budget, which made me want to see the movie.
However, it is sad to watch movie alone.
So, I showed my parents the footage video and presented them with the great things about “Godzilla Minus One.”
It was worth it, they decided to go to see with me tomorrow.
I’m looking forward of it.

Reference:
A behind-the-scenes footage “Godzilla Minus One” VFX
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tej6GCean34


ゴジラのプレゼンをした

映画『ゴジラ-1.0』が米アカデミー賞の視覚効果賞を受賞したという記事を読んだ。
メイキング動画で、少ない予算で最大限の効果を得るための工夫などを紹介していて、映画を見てみたくなった。
でも、一人で行くのは寂しい。
そこで、両親にもメイキング動画を見せて、『ゴジラ-1.0』のすごいところをプレゼンした。
その甲斐があって、明日一緒に行ってくれることになった。
楽しみ。

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Made a Presentation About Godzilla

The movie called “Godzilla Minus One” won Best Visual Effects at the 96th Academy Awards.

A behind-the-scenes footage video introduced ways to get the maximum effect with a small budget, which made me want to see the movie.

However, it is sad to watch movie alone.

So, I showed my parents the footage video and presented them with the great things about “Godzilla Minus One.”
It was worth it,
as they decided to go to see it with me tomorrow.

I’m looking forward tof it.

Reference: A behind-the-scenes footage “Godzilla Minus One” VFX https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tej6GCean34

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milkyway

March 25, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections.

I Made a Presentation About Godzilla

The movie called “Godzilla Minus One” won Best Visual Effects at the 96th Academy Awards.

A behind-the-scenes footage video introduced ways to get the maximum effect withhey made the most of a small budget, which made me want to see the movie.

"Footage" and "Video" are very similar in meaning, so using them together felt a bit unnatural.
"Make the most of" is a set phrase we can use to mean 最大限の効果を得る.

However, it is sad to's lonely watching movies alone.

I'd say "Lonely" is closer in meaning to the feeling of 寂しい here.

So, I showed my parents the footage video and presented them withgave them a presentation on the great things about “Godzilla Minus One.”
It was worth it,
as they decided to go to see the movie with me tomorrow.

"Give a presentation on 〇" is a commonly used set.

I’m looking forward tof it.

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Hope you enjoy the movie!

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milkyway

March 25, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections.
I enjoyed the movie.

The movie called “Godzilla Minus One” won Best Visual Effects at the 96th Academy Awards.

A behind-the-scenes footage video introduced ways to get the maximum effect with a small budget, which made me want to see the movie.

However, it is sad to watch movies alone.

So, I showed my parents the footage video and presented them with the great things about “Godzilla Minus One.”
It was worth it
, because they decided to go to see it with me tomorrow.

I’m looking forward tof it.

Reference: A behind-the-scenes footage “Godzilla Minus One” VFX https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tej6GCean34

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It sounds like your presentation was very convincing!

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milkyway

March 25, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections.
I enjoyed the movie.

Made a Presentation About Godzilla

The movie called “Godzilla Minus One” won Best Visual Effects at the 96th Academy Awards.

A behind-the-scenes footage video introduced ways to get the maximum effect with a small budget, which made me want to see the movie.

However, it is sad to watch movies alone.

So, I showed my parents the footage video and presented them with the great things about “Godzilla Minus One.”
It was worth it
, because they decided to go to see with me tomorrow.

I’m looking forward tof it.

Feedback

I hope you enjoy the movie!

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milkyway

March 25, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections.
I enjoyed the movie.

Made a Presentation About Godzilla


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The movie called “Godzilla Minus One” won Best Visual Effects at the 96th Academy Awards.


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The movie called “Godzilla Minus One” won Best Visual Effects at the 96th Academy Awards.

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A behind-the-scenes footage video introduced ways to get the maximum effect with a small budget, which made me want to see the movie.


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A behind-the-scenes footage video introduced ways to get the maximum effect withhey made the most of a small budget, which made me want to see the movie.

"Footage" and "Video" are very similar in meaning, so using them together felt a bit unnatural. "Make the most of" is a set phrase we can use to mean 最大限の効果を得る.

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However, it is sad to watch movie alone.


However, it is sad to watch movies alone.

However, it is sad to watch movies alone.

However, it is sad to's lonely watching movies alone.

I'd say "Lonely" is closer in meaning to the feeling of 寂しい here.

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So, I showed my parents the footage video and presented them with the great things about “Godzilla Minus One.” It was worth it, they decided to go to see with me tomorrow.


So, I showed my parents the footage video and presented them with the great things about “Godzilla Minus One.”
It was worth it
, because they decided to go to see with me tomorrow.

So, I showed my parents the footage video and presented them with the great things about “Godzilla Minus One.”
It was worth it
, because they decided to go to see it with me tomorrow.

So, I showed my parents the footage video and presented them withgave them a presentation on the great things about “Godzilla Minus One.”
It was worth it,
as they decided to go to see the movie with me tomorrow.

"Give a presentation on 〇" is a commonly used set.

So, I showed my parents the footage video and presented them with the great things about “Godzilla Minus One.”
It was worth it,
as they decided to go to see it with me tomorrow.

I’m looking forward of it.


I’m looking forward tof it.

I’m looking forward tof it.

I’m looking forward tof it.

I’m looking forward tof it.

Reference: A behind-the-scenes footage “Godzilla Minus One” VFX https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tej6GCean34


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