Healing jJourney Healing Journey

Usually words are capitalised in title but there's specific rules that I suggest you look at some time :)

Healing jJourney Healing Journey

We capitalize the first letter of important words in a title.

Healing jJourney Healing Journey

Slightly trembling while writing, I am nervously excited to set a baseline for my future life~. Slightly trembling while writing, I am nervously excited to set a baseline for my future.

baseline isn't used in this context, can you please explain what you mean? future life implies that you will have a different life in the future future implies your current life

Slightly trembling while writing, I am nervously excited to set a baseline for my future life~. Slightly trembling while writing, I am nervously excited to set a baseline for my future life.

SI'm slightly trembling while writing, I aas I write. I'm nervously excited to set a new baseline for my future life ~ I'm slightly trembling as I write. I'm nervously excited to set a new baseline for my future life ~

This sounds more natural in the US.

Slightly trembling while writing, I am nervously and excited to set a baseline for my future life~ Slightly trembling while writing, I am nervous and excited to set a baseline for my future life~

Sounds more natural instead of using nervously excited.

I have struggled with negative thoughts and feelings for the last few years and they've taken a big toll on many aspects of my personality and life. I have struggled with negative thoughts and feelings for the last few years and they've taken a big toll on many aspects of my personality and life.

I have struggled with negative thoughts and feelings for the last few years, and they've taken a big toll on many aspects of my personality and life. I have struggled with negative thoughts and feelings for the last few years, and they've taken a big toll on many aspects of my personality and life.

comma before 'and' when introducing an independent clause.

I have struggled with negative thoughts and feelings for the last few years and they've taken a big toll on msome important aspects of my personality and life. I have struggled with negative thoughts and feelings for the last few years and they've taken a big toll on some important aspects of my personality and life.

This sounds more natural in the US.

I have struggled with negative thoughts and feelings for the last few years and they've taken a big toll on many aspects of my personality and life. I have struggled with negative thoughts and feelings for the last few years and they've taken a toll on many aspects of my personality and life.

Thankfully though, I spent a good amount of time researching psychological factors that ,may have caused those issues, and remedies to dissolvmanage/cure them throughout the years. Thankfully though, I spent a good amount of time researching psychological factors that may have caused those issues, and remedies to manage/cure them throughout the years.

manage = control them but not make them completely go away cure = make them completely go away

Thankfully though, I spent a good amount of time researching psychological factors that ,may have caused those issues and remedies to dissolve them throughout the years. Thankfully though, I spent a good amount of time researching psychological factors that may have caused those issues and remedies to dissolve them throughout the years.

Yours is ok. alt: Thankfully though, I spent a good amount of time throughout the years researching psychological factors that may have caused those issues and remedies to dissolve them.

Thankfully though, I spent a good amount of time researching psychological factors that ,may have caused thoese issues a. I also found remedies to dissolve them throughout the yearsalleviate them for years to come. Thankfully though, I spent a good amount of time researching psychological factors that may have caused these issues. I also found remedies to alleviate them for years to come.

Thankfully though, I spent a good amount of time researching psychological factors that ,may have caused those issues and remedies to dissolve them throughout the years. Thankfully though, I spent a good amount of time researching psychological factors that may have caused those issues and remedies to dissolve them throughout the years.

So much so, this year I have had enough of it and have decided to take action. So much so, this year I have had enough of it and have decided to take action.

So much so, this year I have had enough of it and decided to take action. So much so, this year I have had enough of it and decided to take action.

tense agreement: So much so that this year I have had enough of it and have decided to take action. So much so that this year I had had enough of it and decided to take action.

So much so, that this year I have had enough of it and decided to take action. So much so that this year I have had enough of it and decided to take action.