March 31, 2021
Ma Tao
University teacher returned home to be a farmer.
After spring rain, Yinghuai land is full of vitality. Wanlian Agricultural Technology Company, which is located in Sanhe town, Yangzhou District, has 10,000 kilograms of fresh vegetables sold out every day. There is no difficulty selling fresh vegetables, but to ensure the vegetable quality, Ma Tao, the head of the company, always goes to the farm to check the vegetable growing situation if he has time.
Ma Tao, who was born in 1985, was admitted to Nankai University in 2004, and worked at the university after graduating. He is always serious about doing things, thus, he gets a good grade no matter in work or studying.
UThe university teacher returned home to be a farmer.
After a spring rain, Yinghuai land is full of vitality.
Wanlian Agricultural Technology Company, which is located in Sanhe town, Yangzhou District, hasells 10,000 kilograms of fresh vegetables sold out every day.
There is no difficulty selling fresh vegetables, but to ensure the vegetable quality, Ma Tao, the head of the company, alwayswill goes to the farm to check the vegetable growing situation if he has time.
“always” and “if he has time” are contradictory
Ma Tao, who was born in 1985, was admitted to Nankai University in 2004, and worked at the university after graduating.
He is always serious about doing things, thus, he gets a good gradewhat he does, therefore, he performs well no matter inwhether he works or is studying.
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University teacher returned home to be a farmer.
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After spring rain, Yinghuai land is full of vitality. After a spring rain, Yinghuai |
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Wanlian Agricultural Technology Company, which is located in Sanhe town, Yangzhou District, has 10,000 kilograms of fresh vegetables sold out every day. Wanlian Agricultural Technology Company, which is located in Sanhe town, Yangzhou District, |
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There is no difficulty selling fresh vegetables, but to ensure the vegetable quality, Ma Tao, the head of the company, always goes to the farm to check the vegetable growing situation if he has time. There is no difficulty selling fresh vegetables, but to ensure the “always” and “if he has time” are contradictory |
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Ma Tao, who was born in 1985, was admitted to Nankai University in 2004, and worked at the university after graduating. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He is always serious about doing things, thus, he gets a good grade no matter in work or studying. He is always serious about “Therefore” is a more common and contemporary synonym for “thus” |
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