July 5, 2024
Ma serie prefere quand j'etais une enfant
Lorsque j'etais un enfant, j'ai préfére regarder la série "prank patrol". J'en regarderais chaque soir apres l'école.
C'etais une série original de la Australie et qui on as premiere dans le debut deux mille.
J'ai aime ca parce que je l'ai trouvé episodes très drole. La serie avais les character main s'appelle "Scotty et les ninjas" qu'elles sont alles tous les Australie, en particulière les villes mains. Elles avient un nouveux participant en chaque episode qu'elles voulais fait une blague a leurs amis.
"Scotty et les Ninjas" serais aider les participants qu'elles etais en generalement des enfants. Dans une episode, elles meme avais le Premier Ministre de Australie.
Malheresment, elles ont terminies la series pour longtemps alors je n'ai regarder pas pour longtemps.
J'espere entendre quelque de tes series pereferes.
When I was a child, my favourity show to watch was "prank patrol". I watched it every evening after school.
It originates from Australia and first debuted in the early 2010s.
I liked it because I found the episodes very funny. The series had main characters called "Scotty and the Ninjas", who went all over Australia, but particulraly the main cities. They had a new participant in each episode who wanted to play a prank on their friends.
"Scotty and the Ninjas" would help these participants, who were usually childeren. In one episode, they even had the Prime Minister of Australia.
Unfortunately, they cancelled it a long time ago, so I havent watched it for a long time.
I hope to hear some of your favourite series.
Ma seérie preferéférée quand j'eétais (une) enfant
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You can drop the "une" here, as the standard way to give titles/professions doesn't involve articles
"UN enfant", if you're a male
Lorsque j'eétais un enfant, j'aie préféreais regarder la série "p« Prank pPatrol" ».
Background process, habit = imparfait => je préférAIS
French quotation marks = « »
J'ene la regarderais chaque soir apreès l'école.
LA série = je LA regardais
The conditional is never used to talk about habits, unlike "would" structures in English. The imparfait is used instead
C'eétaist une série original de la Ae australie etnne qui on as premiere dans la démarré/qui a été lancée deébut deux mille.
-s never is a third person singular ending => c'étaiT
Better to have an adjective here => australienne
You don't need "et" if you have a relative clause
to debut, to start = débuter, démarrer; "être lancé" can also be said about TV programs
Or "au début des années deux mille" (this solution would be somehow more formal)
Je l'ai maime cas parce que je l'ai trouvé etrouvais les épisodes très droôles.
Imparfait once again
"je l'ai trouvé épisodes" doesn't work, it would be like saying "I found it episodes" in English, with two contradictory direct objects
Agreement of "drôle" with "les épisodes" (plural) => drôleS
La seérie avais les character main s't des personnages principaux appelle "és Scotty et les ninjas", qu'elles sont alles tous les i parcouraient toute l'Australie, en particulièrement les villes maingrandes villes/les villes principales.
Caution with false friends here: "un caaractère" in French is a nature, a personality; in a show, a character is "un personnage". Also, "une main" means "a hand". The English adjective "main" is "principal"
"parcourir tout [un pays]" would be great to translate "to go all over". "Tout" modifies "Australia" here, and refers to the whole country
Les personnages principaux (subject) parcouraient l'Australie = "qui", subject relative pronoun => des personnages QUI parcouraient
ElleIls avaient un nouveaux participant enà chaque eépisode, qu'ellesi voulaist faitre une blague a leurà ses amis.
LES personnages = ils (masculine plural)
"nouveauX" is a plural form, as indicated by the final -x
À un épisode ("dans" would also be right)
Same observations as above about -s endings and relative pronouns
vouloir FAIRE (infinitive) quelque chose
a = has ; à = on, at (preposition)
UN participant => ses ("his, her, its", one person having several things)
"Scotty et les Nninjas" serais aider aidaient les participants, qu'elles ei étais ent geneénéralement des enfants.
Only titles are given between quotation marks (when they can't be underlined or written in italics), here you're talking about the characters themselves
serait aidé par = would be helped by (passive form, hypothesis)
If you already have a (subject) relative pronoun, you don't need to repeat the pronoun. It's like in English, where you say "the participants who were children" not "the participants who they were children => les participants qui étaient
Dans une e épisode, elles meme avaisils avaient même aidé le Ppremier Mministre de Aaustralien.
"premier ministre" is capitalized only when you directly address him (it's the same with "ambassadeur", "président" and titles as a whole)
Malheuresusement, elles ont terminies la series pourla série est terminée depuis longtemps alors je ne l'ai pas regarder pas pourée depuis longtemps.
It's one of the rare cases where a passive voice would sound better than an active one here ("terminé" can also be interpreted as an adjective, "the show is over")
Point of origin in time = depuis => depuis longtemps
subject + ne + (object pronoun) + auxiliary verb + pas + past participle => je ne l'ai pas regardée, nous ne t'avons pas vu, vous ne les avez pas appelés...
"ça fait longtemps que je ne l'ai pas regardée", if you want to avoid repetitions
J'espeère entendconnaître quelques unes de tevos seéries pereferréférées.
"entendre" wouldn't really be used here, especially since you're writing (not emitting sound)
"quelques" cannot stand alone as a pronoun, it needs "un(e)" for that (varying in gender in number). "Les séries" (feminine plural) => quelques UNES
You're rather politely addressing all your potential correctors here, so the possessive "vos" (corresponding to "vous") is better IMO
Feedback
Apparently there were quite a lot of Australian TV shows targeting a kid audience that were popular in France in the 90's. I rather grew up during the 2000's so I don't really know them, but I know for a fact they existed.
You may know some shows from the French studio Xilam ("Oggy and the Cockroaches", "Space Goofs") or from Marathon ("Totally Spies!"), these were French as well as internation successes.
July 10, 2024
Merci que tu m'aide
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J'ai aime ca parce que je l'ai trouvé episodes très drole. Je l'ai Imparfait once again "je l'ai trouvé épisodes" doesn't work, it would be like saying "I found it episodes" in English, with two contradictory direct objects Agreement of "drôle" with "les épisodes" (plural) => drôleS |
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Ma serie prefere quand j'etais une enfant Ma s Accents You can drop the "une" here, as the standard way to give titles/professions doesn't involve articles "UN enfant", if you're a male |
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Lorsque j'etais un enfant, j'ai préfére regarder la série "prank patrol". Lorsque j' Background process, habit = imparfait => je préférAIS French quotation marks = « » |
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J'en regarderais chaque soir apres l'école. J LA série = je LA regardais The conditional is never used to talk about habits, unlike "would" structures in English. The imparfait is used instead |
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C'etais une série original de la Australie et qui on as premiere dans le debut deux mille. C' -s never is a third person singular ending => c'étaiT Better to have an adjective here => australienne You don't need "et" if you have a relative clause to debut, to start = débuter, démarrer; "être lancé" can also be said about TV programs Or "au début des années deux mille" (this solution would be somehow more formal) |
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La serie avais les character main s'appelle "Scotty et les ninjas" qu'elles sont alles tous les Australie, en particulière les villes mains. La s Caution with false friends here: "un caaractère" in French is a nature, a personality; in a show, a character is "un personnage". Also, "une main" means "a hand". The English adjective "main" is "principal" "parcourir tout [un pays]" would be great to translate "to go all over". "Tout" modifies "Australia" here, and refers to the whole country Les personnages principaux (subject) parcouraient l'Australie = "qui", subject relative pronoun => des personnages QUI parcouraient |
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Elles avient un nouveux participant en chaque episode qu'elles voulais fait une blague a leurs amis.
LES personnages = ils (masculine plural) "nouveauX" is a plural form, as indicated by the final -x À un épisode ("dans" would also be right) Same observations as above about -s endings and relative pronouns vouloir FAIRE (infinitive) quelque chose a = has ; à = on, at (preposition) UN participant => ses ("his, her, its", one person having several things) |
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"Scotty et les Ninjas" serais aider les participants qu'elles etais en generalement des enfants.
Only titles are given between quotation marks (when they can't be underlined or written in italics), here you're talking about the characters themselves serait aidé par = would be helped by (passive form, hypothesis) If you already have a (subject) relative pronoun, you don't need to repeat the pronoun. It's like in English, where you say "the participants who were children" not "the participants who they were children => les participants qui étaient |
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Dans une episode, elles meme avais le Premier Ministre de Australie. Dans un "premier ministre" is capitalized only when you directly address him (it's the same with "ambassadeur", "président" and titles as a whole) |
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Malheresment, elles ont terminies la series pour longtemps alors je n'ai regarder pas pour longtemps. Malheure It's one of the rare cases where a passive voice would sound better than an active one here ("terminé" can also be interpreted as an adjective, "the show is over") Point of origin in time = depuis => depuis longtemps subject + ne + (object pronoun) + auxiliary verb + pas + past participle => je ne l'ai pas regardée, nous ne t'avons pas vu, vous ne les avez pas appelés... "ça fait longtemps que je ne l'ai pas regardée", if you want to avoid repetitions |
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J'espere entendre quelque de tes series pereferes. J'esp "entendre" wouldn't really be used here, especially since you're writing (not emitting sound) "quelques" cannot stand alone as a pronoun, it needs "un(e)" for that (varying in gender in number). "Les séries" (feminine plural) => quelques UNES You're rather politely addressing all your potential correctors here, so the possessive "vos" (corresponding to "vous") is better IMO |
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