Aug. 22, 2022
Ma rédaction premiere
Salute! Merci pour lire ma premiere redaction dans cette forum. Je suis un peu nerveux. Mais je veux vraiment améliorer mon français :)
Ma première rédaction premiere
Better in this order and with a little accent grave
Salute !
"salute" is Italian :)
Merci pourde lire ma premieère reédaction dans cette forumsur ce site.
LG has a forum but this part is just the main site, technically
"merci de" means "thanks for doing smthg", it can express gratitude but also a request. If you want to disambiguate and make it clear it's gratitude, you may say "je vous remercie beaucoup de lire [...]"
Je suis un peu nerveuxse.
"nerveuse" is the feminine form
Mais je veux vraiment améliorer mon français :)
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Nice first shot and welcome!
Aug. 23, 2022
Je suis un peu nerveuxse.
Oh because it's about me and I'm female?
Aug. 23, 2022
Ma première rédaction premiere
Merci beaucoup!
Aug. 23, 2022
Salute !
whoops my bad :) thanks
Aug. 23, 2022
Merci pourde lire ma premieère reédaction dans cette forumsur ce site.
Thank you! Looks like I need to better my precision of accents. Also I often get stumped by "dans" vs "sur" as well as in what contexts to use "de". Thanks for the imput into smoother sounding sentence though ,I never knew "je vous remercie" was another way of saying thank you :)
Aug. 23, 2022
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it
Aug. 23, 2022
Je vous remercie pour ta corrections. C'est tres tres utile!
Aug. 23, 2022
Ma première rédaction premiere
Right! I'm continually tripping up over where to position my adjectives in relation to nouns. Good to know "première" is one of the ones that goes before
Aug. 23, 2022
Je vous remercie pour ta corrections. C'est tres tres utile!
(j'ai supprimé ma comment premiere parce que c'était écrite en anglaise .. je pensais essayer écrite en francaise souvent plus!)
Aug. 26, 2022
(j'ai supprimé ma comment premiere parce que c'était écrite en anglaise .. je pensais essayer écrite en francaise souvent plus!)
You're welcome!
Yes, "nerveuse" is the feminine form.
"Dans vs sur" in French very often matches "in vs on". All apps, softwares etc require "sur", for instance
Adjective position is trickier, though. Some adjectives even mean different things according to their position!
Un musée ancien = an old museum
Un ancien musée= a former museum
But the more French you'll be exposed to, the more natural it will seem!
Aug. 26, 2022
You're welcome! Yes, "nerveuse" is the feminine form. "Dans vs sur" in French very often matches "in vs on". All apps, softwares etc require "sur", for instance Adjective position is trickier, though. Some adjectives even mean different things according to their position! Un musée ancien = an old museum Un ancien musée= a former museum But the more French you'll be exposed to, the more natural it will seem!
Ah thanks again!
I'll try to have more of a look at dans vs sur then
And you're right that is confusing ! Can't complain though English has just as much if not more weirdness and convolution aha
Je vous remercie!
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Ma rédaction premiere Ma première rédaction Better in this order and with a little accent grave |
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Salute! Salut "salute" is Italian :) |
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Merci pour lire ma premiere redaction dans cette forum. Merci LG has a forum but this part is just the main site, technically "merci de" means "thanks for doing smthg", it can express gratitude but also a request. If you want to disambiguate and make it clear it's gratitude, you may say "je vous remercie beaucoup de lire [...]" |
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Je suis un peu nerveux. Je suis un peu nerveu "nerveuse" is the feminine form |
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Mais je veux vraiment améliorer mon français :) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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