Aug. 16, 2025
joblessness
hi guys! i'm 23 years old, and i'm still a student.. when i finished the highschool, i didn't want to go university. but my mom forced me to go, and i went to university according to their wishes which is finance department. after graduating, i couldn't stand working in this profession. my elder sister found a way about my career that i have started to go english course since december. it's an agreement for a year. i stopped the course two days ago because even if i'm b2, i can't speak english. i need to practice in person, so i have started to look for a job. i'm extremely beginner, i can't pass the interviews or i can't come to even this part because of no experiences. i'm fed up with this situation! i wonder when i can find a job and start to earn my own money.. btw is there anyone who lives in antalya? maybe we may meet and talk
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jJoblessness
Joblessness
« joblessness » is a nous
«jobless » is an adjective
For example, “I am jobless.”
“ Joblessness is a problem for people with no experience.”
hHi gGuys!
Hi Guys!
i'I’m 23 years old, and i'm still a student.. w When iI finished the high school, i didn't want to go to university.,
I’m 23 years old, and i'm still a student When I finished high school i didn't want to go to university,
but my mom forced me to go, and i/so I went to university according to their wishes which is finance departmentwas to study finance.
but my mom forced me to go, and/so I went to university according to her wishes which was to study finance.
“me to go” is not necessary
aAfter graduating, iI couldn't stand working in this profession.
After graduating, I couldn't stand working in this profession.
mMy elder sister found a way about my career that i have started to go english course since december.
My elder sister found a way about my career that i have started to go english course since december.
I don’t understand this sentence. “My elder sister thought knowledge of English would increase my chances of finding a job…so I started attending English classes since December. (?)”
it's an agreement for a year. it's an agreement for a year.
This is not clear. Do you mean, “ I made an agreement with my mom that I would study English for a year. (?)”
iI stopped the course two days ago because even if i'though I’m bB2, iI can't speak english.
I stopped the course two days ago because even though I’m B2, I can't speak english.
i need to practice in person, so iI have started to look for a job.
i need to practice in person, so I have started to look for a job.
i'm extremely beginner, i can't pass the interviews or i can't come to even this part because of no experiences. i'm extremely beginner, i can't pass the interviews or i can't come to even this part because of no experiences.
Not clear. Do you mean , “I don’t receive many interviews because I have no work experience, and when I do have an interview, I don’t perform well. “
i'I’m fed up with this situation!
I’m fed up with this situation!
iI wonder when i can find a job and start to earn my own money.. btw BTW is there anyone who lives in aAntalya?
I wonder when i can find a job and start to earn my own money. BTW is there anyone who lives in Antalya?
mMaybe we may meet and talk.
Maybe we may meet and talk.
Aug. 17, 2025
hi there, thank you! but i don't want to say thanks and skip. so here is my answers according to yours from under to top:
on the last part you said not clear but you wrote exactly what i meant ^^
yes i can say that, too. but actually i meant the agreement between me and course.
i liked your perspective, both. i have never wanted to go to finance department at university or math-physic department at high school. i was wanted to go language department at high school but they didn't give allow me. when i graduated from university and couldn't have a job, they turned to my wish and enroll in the course.
i wrote that headline on purpose because i'm talking about my unemployment problem in the paragraph. your sentence is wonderful, but i just wanted to make it short.
i don't have anything to say about the others. if something isn't still clear or you want to say something to me, feel free. take care!
Aug. 17, 2025
Thank you for your reply.
Regarding the title, “Joblessness,” I agree that a one word title is effective. I would have used “Jobless,” however.
You sound like a nice person. You take care as well.
jJoblessness
Joblessness
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hHi guys!
Hi guys!
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iI'm 23 years old, and iI'm still a student.. when iI finished the high school, iI didn't want to go university.
I'm 23 years old, and I'm still a student.. when I finished high school, I didn't want to go university.
Capitalization. The "the" between finished and high school is not needed. High school is two words, though commonly, it is written as one incorrectly.
bBut my mom forced me to go, and iI went to university according to their wishes which iswas in the finance department.
But my mom forced me to go, and I went to university according to her wishes which was in the finance department.
Capitalization. You say mom at the beginning of the sentence, but use their which is plural. I changed it to her, but if you meant parents instead of mom, their would work here. Is is the wrong tense. It should be past tense along with the rest of the sentence. "in the finance department" flows better. Another way you could write it closer to your original sentence is: "which was in finance". Written this way, department would be understood in the context of talking about university.
aAfter graduating, iI couldn't stand working in this profession.
After graduating, I couldn't stand working in this profession.
Capitalization. I am a little confused about the meaning here. You said you were still a student at the start, but here you say you graduated and couldn't stand working in this profession. Written that way, it sounds like you are already working in a finance career and don't like it. If you are still a university student, you would say "After graduating high school, I couldn't stand studying for this profession."
mMy elder sister found a way about my career that iof this profession and that is why I have started to go eto English courses since dDecember.
My elder sister found a way out of this profession and that is why I have started to go to English courses since December.
Capitalization. Continuing from my comments before, I tweaked this on the assumption that you are in university still.
iIt's an agreement for a year.
It's an agreement for a year.
Capitalization. Otherwise grammatically correct. It is a little short to fully convey a message though. Who is it an agreement with? Your sister? That is an easy assumption based on the earlier sentences, but standalone it doesn't add much to what you are saying.
iI stopped the course two days ago because even if iI'm b2, iI can't speak eEnglish.
I stopped the course two days ago because even if I'm b2, I can't speak English.
Capitalization. This sentence is fine, but saying: I quit the course... or: I stopped going to the course... flows a little more naturally.
iI need to practice in person, so iI have started to look for a job.
I need to practice in person, so I have started to look for a job.
Capitalization.
iI'm extremely beginner, ivery inexperienced speaking, so I can't pass the interviews or iI can't come to even this part because of noeven get to that part because of my little speaking experiences.
I'm very inexperienced speaking, so I can't pass the interviews or I can't even get to that part because of my little speaking experience.
I took a little bit of liberty here again. I understood you saying you are struggling because of speaking. "I'm extremely beginner" is not something commonly said.
iI'm fed up with this situation!
I'm fed up with this situation!
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iI wonder when iI can find a job and start to earn my own money.. btw is there anyone who lives in aAntalya?
I wonder when I can find a job and start to earn my own money.. btw is there anyone who lives in Antalya?
Capitalization.
mMaybe we may meet and talk.
Maybe we may meet and talk.
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I think the meaning of your message for the most part was understood. Some tenses of words were wrong and a few spots where I had to guess a little on what you meant, but overall pretty good! I wish you luck and keep it up!
Aug. 17, 2025
hi there, thank you! but i don't want to say thanks and skip. so here is my answers according to yours from under to top
tbh i made up that phrase "extremely beginner"
can i say i freezed the course? because i'm going to continue the course after two months.
That agreement is between me and course, not my sister. my bad
i meant that although i graduated from university i can't find a job and get a part in business. instead of that i'm going to english course, it means i'm still a student, isn't it? hahaha also yes, i worked a bit as an accountant under the guise of an internship while studying at university.
my mom forced me to go to university but i went to my parents and elder sis and elder brother. so, i used mom and their.
yeah you're absolutely right! sometimes i forget that i need to keep all the tenses in a sentence consistent :(
i don't have anything to say about the others. if something isn't still clear or you want to say something to me, feel free. take care!
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« joblessness » is a nous «jobless » is an adjective For example, “I am jobless.” “ Joblessness is a problem for people with no experience.” |
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hi guys!
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i'm 23 years old, and i'm still a student.. when i finished the highschool, i didn't want to go university.
Capitalization. The "the" between finished and high school is not needed. High school is two words, though commonly, it is written as one incorrectly.
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but my mom forced me to go, and i went to university according to their wishes which is finance department.
Capitalization. You say mom at the beginning of the sentence, but use their which is plural. I changed it to her, but if you meant parents instead of mom, their would work here. Is is the wrong tense. It should be past tense along with the rest of the sentence. "in the finance department" flows better. Another way you could write it closer to your original sentence is: "which was in finance". Written this way, department would be understood in the context of talking about university.
but my mom forced me to go, and “me to go” is not necessary |
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after graduating, i couldn't stand working in this profession.
Capitalization. I am a little confused about the meaning here. You said you were still a student at the start, but here you say you graduated and couldn't stand working in this profession. Written that way, it sounds like you are already working in a finance career and don't like it. If you are still a university student, you would say "After graduating high school, I couldn't stand studying for this profession."
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my elder sister found a way about my career that i have started to go english course since december.
I don’t understand this sentence. “My elder sister thought knowledge of English would increase my chances of finding a job…so I started attending English classes since December. (?)”
Capitalization. Continuing from my comments before, I tweaked this on the assumption that you are in university still. |
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it's an agreement for a year. it's an agreement for a year. it's an agreement for a year. This is not clear. Do you mean, “ I made an agreement with my mom that I would study English for a year. (?)”
Capitalization. Otherwise grammatically correct. It is a little short to fully convey a message though. Who is it an agreement with? Your sister? That is an easy assumption based on the earlier sentences, but standalone it doesn't add much to what you are saying. |
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i stopped the course two days ago because even if i'm b2, i can't speak english.
Capitalization. This sentence is fine, but saying: I quit the course... or: I stopped going to the course... flows a little more naturally. |
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i need to practice in person, so i have started to look for a job.
i need to practice in person, so
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i'm extremely beginner, i can't pass the interviews or i can't come to even this part because of no experiences. i'm extremely beginner, i can't pass the interviews or i can't come to even this part because of no experiences. i'm extremely beginner, i can't pass the interviews or i can't come to even this part because of no experiences. Not clear. Do you mean , “I don’t receive many interviews because I have no work experience, and when I do have an interview, I don’t perform well. “
I took a little bit of liberty here again. I understood you saying you are struggling because of speaking. "I'm extremely beginner" is not something commonly said. |
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i'm fed up with this situation!
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i wonder when i can find a job and start to earn my own money.. btw is there anyone who lives in antalya?
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maybe we may meet and talk
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