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We entered the monsoon season in April.
Abundant rain is good for the growth of crops.
When I was walking around the river, I heard some frogs croaking.
Frogs usually live near rivers and rice fields.
They are usually most active at night.
On rainy days or when it's about to rain, they make loud croaking sounds.
A number of frogs were croaking by the riverbank.
The croaking sounds just like a charming piece of music.
It's amazing, I like it very much.
四月我们进入了雨季。
充沛的雨水有利於农作物的生长。
当我在河边散步的时候,听到蛙鸣。
青蛙常栖息于河流、稻田附近。
夜间是它们最为活跃的时段。
在下雨天或快下雨时,它们呱呱呱叫得响亮。
河岸边有许多青蛙在呱呱叫。
呱呱的声音就像一段迷人的音乐,太棒了,我喜欢。
They are usually most active at night.
They are most active at night.
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Their croaking sounds just like a charming piece of music. Their croaking sounds just like a charming piece of music.
Try a possessive here for clarity
It's amazing, I like it very much.
I like it very much.
Do you need both statements?
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I like this very much. The English was incredibly readable. Just a couple of small suggestions here. I think you could consider writing this in paragraphs instead of lines, as it would help with the flow. Maybe finish the first paragraph after "I heard some frogs croaking"? It is some very good work!
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Monsoon |
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We entered the monsoon season in April. |
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Abundant rain is good for the growth of crops. |
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When I was walking around the river, I heard some frogs croaking. |
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Frogs usually live near rivers and rice fields. |
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They are usually most active at night.
They are I have deleted a repeated word |
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On rainy days or when it's about to rain, they make loud croaking sounds. |
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A number of frogs were croaking by the riverbank. |
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The croaking sounds just like a charming piece of music. Their croaking sounds just like a charming piece of music. Their croaking sounds just like a charming piece of music. Try a possessive here for clarity |
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It's amazing, I like it very much.
Do you need both statements? |
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