March 7, 2021
First of all, I hate traffic jams. So I'm ready to accept any ideas to prevent it.
So, the best way to get rid of traffic jams and to improve our urban environment is to get rid of cars on roads. There are many ways how to achieve it.
In Amsterdam, for example, in order to decrease number of cars government charge high parking cost. The closer to the city center, the more expensive.
But on official public holidays you can park for free in many of Amsterdam's streets. Another way to decongest roads in the Netherlands is using bicycles.
It's better for our health, the environment is harmed less and roads are freer.
In some countries traffic congestion is controlled by introducing a congestion charge or allow entry to city centries only for residents.
Also government can controls traffic jams using high transport taxes.
At the same time I believe that one of the most important steps to solve traffic problems is to build up a good public transport system and cycling infrastructure.
So people need to think twice if they should go by car or better to use a public transport or bicycle.
How do weto solve the traffic problems in our cities.
How to solve the traffic problems in our cities.
To use "How do we...", add a question mark at the end. "How do we solve the traffic problems in our cities?"
First of all, I hate traffic jams.
So I'm ready to accept any ideas to prevent it.
So, the best way to get rid of traffic jams and to improve our urban environment is to get rid of cars on roads.
There are many ways how to achieve it.this.
There are many ways to achieve this.
"ways to" = noun equivalent of "how to"
In Amsterdam, for example, in order to decrease number of carsthe government charges high parking cost.prices in order to decrease the number of cars.
In Amsterdam, for example, the government charges high parking prices in order to decrease the number of cars.
The closer to the city center, the more expensive.
But on official public holidays you can park for free in many of Amsterdam's streets.
Another way to decongest roads in the Netherlanhe Netherlands is decongesting roads is by using bicycles.
Another way the Netherlands is decongesting roads is by using bicycles.
It's better for our health, the environment is harmed less and the roads are freer. It's better for our health, the environment is harmed less and the roads are freer.
In some countries traffic congestion is controlled by introducing a congestion charge or allow entry to city centries only for residentby only allowing residents entry to city centers.
In some countries traffic congestion is controlled by introducing a congestion charge or by only allowing residents entry to city centers.
Also, governments can controls traffic jams uby imposing high transport taxes.
Also, governments can control traffic jams by imposing high transport taxes.
"governments" for generally referring to governments of the world, or "the government" to refer to the specific government of one country.
At the same timeIn addition, I believe that one of the most important steps to solve traffic problems is to build up a good public transport system and cycling infrastructure.
In addition, I believe that one of the most important steps to solve traffic problems is to build up a good public transport system and cycling infrastructure.
I recommend "in addition" instead of "at the same time", as "at the same time" implies that there is a contradiction. Building a good public transport system and cycling infrastructure is not contradictory to imposing high transport taxes. Therefore, it is more appropriate to use a connective like "in addition".
STo people need to think twice if they should go by car or better toconclude, people should think twice about using their car, and use a public transport or bicycle. instead.
To conclude, people should think twice about using their car, and use public transport or cycle instead.
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It's very good! There were some grammatical errors, and ways to make it sound smoother, but overall the message of the text was well communicated! Good work!
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How do we solve the traffic problems in our cities
How To use "How do we...", add a question mark at the end. "How do we solve the traffic problems in our cities?" |
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First of all, I hate traffic jams. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So I'm ready to accept any ideas to prevent it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So, the best way to get rid of traffic jams and to improve our urban environment is to get rid of cars on roads. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are many ways how to achieve it.
There are many ways "ways to" = noun equivalent of "how to" |
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In Amsterdam, for example, in order to decrease number of cars government charge high parking cost.
In Amsterdam, for example, |
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The closer to the city center, the more expensive. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But on official public holidays you can park for free in many of Amsterdam's streets. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Another way to decongest roads in the Netherlands is using bicycles.
Another way t |
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It's better for our health, the environment is harmed less and roads are freer. It's better for our health, the environment is harmed less and the roads are freer. It's better for our health, the environment is harmed less and the roads are freer. |
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In some countries traffic congestion is controlled by introducing a congestion charge or allow entry to city centries only for residents.
In some countries traffic congestion is controlled by introducing a congestion charge or |
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Also government can controls traffic jams using high transport taxes.
Also, governments can control "governments" for generally referring to governments of the world, or "the government" to refer to the specific government of one country. |
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At the same time I believe that one of the most important steps to solve traffic problems is to build up a good public transport system and cycling infrastructure.
I recommend "in addition" instead of "at the same time", as "at the same time" implies that there is a contradiction. Building a good public transport system and cycling infrastructure is not contradictory to imposing high transport taxes. Therefore, it is more appropriate to use a connective like "in addition". |
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So people need to think twice if they should go by car or better to use a public transport or bicycle.
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