March 29, 2026
smart phone
Today,I bought new smart phone.It is more improve performance than before own smart phone. And,it only take cost 1 yen monthly. I'm really surprised！ After,I bought earphonrs. I feel today is good day.
今日、私は新しいスマホを買った
それは前持ってたものよりも性能が良かった。
しかも、それは月々1円しかかからない
本当に驚いた。
その後、私はイヤホンを買った。
今日はいい一日になると感じた。
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Today, I bought a new smart phone. Today, I bought a new smart phone.
An indefinite article “a” is used here ^^
It is more improvehas a better performance than before ownmy previous smart phone.
It has a better performance than my previous smart phone.
And, it only take costs 1 yen per monthly.
And it only costs 1 yen per month.
More natural phrasing
I'm really surprised！ I'm really surprised！
After,wards, I bought earphonres.
Afterwards, I bought earphones.
I feel that today is a good day. I feel that today is a good day.
Indefinite article “a” is used here.
Feedback
Nice! 新しいスマホはいいでしょうね。
sSmart phone
Smartphone
Today, I bought a new smart phone.
Today, I bought a new smartphone.
It is more improvehas better performance than before ownmy previous smart phone.
It has better performance than my previous smartphone.
Or you could also say "It has better performance than the smartphone I had before."
And, it only take costs 1 yen per monthly.
And, it only costs 1 yen per month.
I'm really surprised！
After,wards, I bought earphonres.
Afterwards, I bought earphones.
I feel like today is a good day. I feel like today is a good day.
sSmart phone
Smartphone
This is one word
Today, I bought a new smart phone.
Today, I bought a new smartphone.
It is more improvehas better performance than before ownmy old smart phone.
It has better performance than my old smartphone.
Your previous smartphone = "my old smartphone"
And, it only take costs 1 yen per monthly.
And it only costs 1 yen per month.
More natural
I'm really surprised！ I'm really surprised！
Since you're describing a story here, it would be a little better to put this in the past tense, "I was really surprised." Having it in the present tense puts more emphasis that you are still surprised about it as you write your text (which is fine)
After, that, I bought new earphonres.
After that, I bought new earphones.
I feel like today is a good day. I feel like today is a good day.
Feedback
Great job
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smart phone
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Today,I bought new smart phone.
Today, I bought a new smart
Today, I bought a new smart Today, I bought a new smart phone. Today, I bought a new smart phone. An indefinite article “a” is used here ^^ |
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It is more improve performance than before own smart phone.
It Your previous smartphone = "my old smartphone"
It Or you could also say "It has better performance than the smartphone I had before."
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And,it only take cost 1 yen monthly.
And More natural
And, it only
And More natural phrasing |
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I'm really surprised！ I'm really surprised！ I'm really surprised！ Since you're describing a story here, it would be a little better to put this in the past tense, "I was really surprised." Having it in the present tense puts more emphasis that you are still surprised about it as you write your text (which is fine) This sentence has been marked as perfect! I'm really surprised！ I'm really surprised！ |
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After,I bought earphonrs.
After
After
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I feel today is good day. I feel like today is a good day. I feel like today is a good day. I feel like today is a good day. I feel like today is a good day. I feel that today is a good day. I feel that today is a good day. Indefinite article “a” is used here. |
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