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A Brief Review to Flipped

Films have been playing an important role in people's life nowadays, providing emotional support or revealing societal problems. I watched an old film called Flipped several weeks ago.

Generally speaking, it is an extrordinary film to enjoy. First of all, actors' and actresses's performances are excellent. I could feel their emotions through their words, actions and facial expressions, such as lingering frustration, simmering angry and explosive ecstacy. It seemed that they were presenting their daily lives to audiences instead of acting merely. I even cried at the end of this film, where Bryce and julianna planted a tiny sycamore in the garden together. Secondly, this film reveals a vital virtue to us, which is being kind and respectful to others and never looking down on others. In this film, Bryce's father has been looking down uopn his neighbours since he moved to the new community, because he foster an egregious and unfair impression which is based on the shabby outer appearance of Julianna's home. It not only tells a fanscinating story, but also promote behavioural righteous to people.

When it comes to its drawback, in my opinion, it is that this film neglected part of details from the same-title novel which is written by Wendelin Van Draanen. People will be a bit disappointed if they watch this film after reading that novel at first. Please ingore this drawback if you are going to jump into this film directly.

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I watched an old film called Flipped several weeks ago.

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Thank you very much for your elaborate corrections and explanations. Hope you have a good day :)

Generally speaking, it is an extrordinary film to enjoy.

First of all, actors' and actresses's performances are excellent.

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A Brief Review to Flipped


A Brief Review tof Flipped A Brief Review of Flipped

Films have been playing an important role in people's life nowadays, providing emotional support or revealing societal problems.


Films have been playing an important role in many people's life nowadays, providing emotional support or revealing societal problems. Films have been playing an important role in many people's life nowadays, providing emotional support or revealing societal problems.

SUGGESTION: Hedge the word "people's" with adding "many" not all people are influenced by films. (Some poor people can't even see movies.)

Films have been playing an important role in people's lifeves nowadays, providing emotional support or revealing societal problems. Films play an important role in people's lives nowadays, providing emotional support or revealing societal problems.

"Have been playing" is not wrong, but using the simple present tense with "nowadays" is simpler and shorter. "Highlighting" or "critiquing" might be a better choice of word than "revealing".

I watched an old film called Flipped several weeks ago.


BETTER: I watched an old film called the 2010 American romantic-comedy "Flipped" several weeks ago. BETTER: I watched the 2010 American romantic-comedy "Flipped" several weeks ago.

SUGGESTION: Specify the date this film was produced (See https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flipped_(2010_film). Also, I recommend indicating this is a "American romantic-comedy" since different genres are often very different. (Also, American films tend to be different from French, Japanese, or Korean films.)

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Generally speaking, it is an extrordinary film to enjoy.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Generally speaking, it is an extraordinary film to enjoy. Generally speaking, it is an extraordinary film.

Or: "Overall, it is an extraordinary film."

First of all, actors' and actresses's performances are excellent.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

First of all, the actors' and actresses's performances are excellent. First of all, the actors' and actresses' performances are excellent.

Also possible, and maybe more natural: "the actors and actresses gave excellent performances." Or simply: "the acting was excellent".

I could feel their emotions through their words, actions and facial expressions, such as lingering frustration, simmering angry and explosive ecstacy.


I could feel their emotions through their words, actions and facial expressions, such as lingering frustration, simmering angery and explosive ecstacsy. I could feel their emotions through their words, actions and facial expressions, such as lingering frustration, simmering anger and explosive ecstasy.

SPELLING: X ecstacy -> O ecstasy

I could feel their emotions through their words, actions and facial expressions, such as lingering frustration, simmering angery and explosive ecstacsy. I could feel their emotions through their words, actions and facial expressions, such as lingering frustration, simmering anger and explosive ecstasy.

Since you are listing nouns ("frustration" and "ecstasy"), all items of the list must be nouns, and "angry" is an adjective (the corresponding noun is "anger").

It seemed that they were presenting their daily lives to audiences instead of acting merely.


It seemed that they were presentvealing their daily lives to audiences instead of acting merelymerely acting. It seemed that they were revealing their daily lives to audiences instead of merely acting.

It seemed that they were presenting their daily lives to the audiences instead of acting merelymerely acting. It seemed that they were presenting their daily lives to the audience instead of merely acting.

Or: "It felt as if they were..." or "It felt like they were..."

I even cried at the end of this film, where Bryce and julianna planted a tiny sycamore in the garden together.


I even cried at the end of this film, wheren Bryce and jJulianna planted a tiny sycamore in their garden together. I even cried at the end of this film, when Bryce and Julianna planted a tiny sycamore in their garden together.

I even cried at the end of thise film, wheren Bryce and jJulianna planted a tiny sycamore in the garden together. I even cried at the end of the film, when Bryce and Julianna planted a tiny sycamore in the garden together.

Secondly, this film reveals a vital virtue to us, which is being kind and respectful to others and never looking down on others.


Secondly, this film reveals a vital virtue to us, which isunderscores of being kind and respectful to others and never looking down on others. Secondly, this film underscores of being kind and respectful to others and never looking down on others.

Secondly, this film reveals a vital virtue to us, which is being kind and respectful to others and never looking down on others. Secondly, this film reveals a vital virtue to us, which is being kind and respectful and never looking down on others.

Again, "reveals" might not be the best choice of verb here. The word "reveal" suggests that something new or unknown is being uncovered, but I don't think kindness/respect is a very novel idea! Instead, you might use "highlights" or "emphasizes".

In this film, Bryce's father has been looking down uopn his neighbours since he moved to the new community, because he foster an egregious and unfair impression which is based on the shabby outer appearance of Julianna's home.


BRITISH SPELLING: In this film, Bryce's father hwas been looking down uopon his neighbours s. Since he moved to the new community, because he foster an egregious and unfair impression which is based on the Julianna's home had a shabby outer appearance of Julianna's home., he mistakenly thought Julianna was a shabby character. BRITISH SPELLING: In this film, Bryce's father was looking down upon his neighbours. Since Julianna's home had a shabby appearance, he mistakenly thought Julianna was a shabby character.

AMERICAN SPELLING: . . . his neighbors . . .

In thise film, Bryce's father has been lookinged down uopon his neighbours since he moved into the new community, because he foster an egregioused and unfair impression which isjudgment based on the shabby outer appearance of Julianna's home. In the film, Bryce's father looked down on his neighbours since he moved into the new community because he fostered an unfair judgment based on the shabby outer appearance of Julianna's home.

"Egregious" sounds strange in this context. It's hard to explain exactly why, but I think generally "egregious" is used to refer to something that is outwardly glaringly bad in a way that is plain to see, in particular in reference to someone's behavior. For that reason, using "egregious" to describe someone's inner thoughts or biases isn't a very good fit. (If Bryce did something outwardly rude to his neighbors in the movie because of his bad impression, then it would be more appropriate to call that action "egregious".)

It not only tells a fanscinating story, but also promote behavioural righteous to people.


It not onlyMY GUESS: Not only does this movie tells a fanscinating story, buit also promote behavioural righteous to people.shows ethical behaviour in action. MY GUESS: Not only does this movie tell a fascinating story, it also shows ethical behaviour in action.

It not only tells a fanscinating story, but also promote behavioural righteous to peopls righteous behavior to the audience. It not only tells a fascinating story, but also promotes righteous behavior to the audience.

When it comes to its drawback, in my opinion, it is that this film neglected part of details from the same-title novel which is written by Wendelin Van Draanen.


When it comes to its drawback, iIn my opinion, it is that this film neglected part of details from the same-title novel which is written by Wendelin Van Draanenunfortunately glossed over some details from the book by Wendelin Van Draanen that inspired this film. In my opinion, this film unfortunately glossed over some details from the book by Wendelin Van Draanen that inspired this film.

When it comes to its drawbackHowever, a drawback of this film, in my opinion, it is that this film neglected part of details from the same-title novel which isit omitted some details from the novel of the same title written by Wendelin Van Draanen. However, a drawback of this film, in my opinion, is that it omitted some details from the novel of the same title written by Wendelin Van Draanen.

People will be a bit disappointed if they watch this film after reading that novel at first.


Perhaps some people will be a bit disappointed if they watch this film after reading that novel at first. Perhaps some people will be disappointed if they watch this film after reading that novel.

People willho read the novel first may be a bit disappointed if they watch this film after reading that novel at firstwards. People who read the novel first may be a bit disappointed if they watch this film afterwards.

Please ingore this drawback if you are going to jump into this film directly.


Please ingore this drawback if you are going to jump intoHowever, if you have not read the book chances are you will enjoy this film directly. However, if you have not read the book chances are you will enjoy this film.

Please ingnore this drawbackcaveat if you are going to [jump into this film directly]. Please ignore this caveat if you are going to [jump into this film directly].

I haven't heard people say "jump into [a film]". In this sentence, I think it would be better to say what you mean directly: "...if you are going to watch the movie first [without reading the book]."

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