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April 5, 2021

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My preferences regarding TV shows or movies

Actually, I don’t watch TV or films very often. When I am in the mood of entertainment, I use digital platforms to select according to my preferences at that time. Usually, I watch documentaries about science or history. I like them because of the short length and every chapter is independent from the others. But I’m not going to lie, not everything is mental, sometimes I need to watch cartoons or game shows.
I don’t have much time, so I prefer not to be hooked to series.
Regarding to films, I prefer the not commercial ones because generally the dialogues and characters are more interesting. I guess this is because they don’t have a big budget for special effects so the focus must be in the story itself. Unfortunately, this year I have not visited many cinemas, because of the COVID. In my city some of these spaces have closed down. Who knows, maybe outdoors’s cinemas from the seventies will come back.

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Actually, I don’t watch TV or films very often.

Usually, I watch documentaries about science or history.

My preferences regarding TV shows or movies


My preferences in regardings to TV shows orand movies My preferences in regards to TV shows and movies

“Or” is grammatical, but “and” makes more sense to me.

Actually, I don’t watch TV or films very often.


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When I am in the mood of entertainment, I use digital platforms to select according to my preferences at that time.


When I am in the mood ofor entertainment, I use digital platforms to select something according to my preferences at thate time. When I am in the mood for entertainment, I use digital platforms to select something according to my preferences at the time.

Usually, I watch documentaries about science or history.


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I like them because of the short length and every chapter is independent from the others.


I like them because of the short length and every chapterbecause every episode is independent from the others. I like them because of the short length and because every episode is independent from the others.

“Of the short length” and “every chapter is…” have rather different grammatical structure, so the omission of the second “because” doesn’t really work.

But I’m not going to lie, not everything is mental, sometimes I need to watch cartoons or game shows.


But I’m not going to lie, not everything is mentintellectual,; sometimes I need to watch cartoons or game shows. But I’m not going to lie, not everything is intellectual; sometimes I need to watch cartoons or game shows.

“Sometimes I need…” constitutes a complete sentence on its own, so it has to be separated from the part before it with an appropriate conjunction or punctuation mark. A comma is inappropriate because it is not stylistically justified and it creates a run-on sentence.

I don’t have much time, so I prefer not to be hooked to series.


I don’t have much time, so I prefer not to be hooked to seriealized shows. I don’t have much time, so I prefer not to be hooked to serialized shows.

Or maybe “TV series.” The original is understandable and would probably be acceptable in certain informal contexts, but otherwise it should be avoided.

Regarding to films, I prefer the not commercial ones because generally the dialogues and characters are more interesting.


RegardingAs to films, I prefer the not commercialindependent ones because generally the dialogues and characters are more interesting. As to films, I prefer independent ones because generally the dialogue and characters are more interesting.

“Regarding” doesn’t take a preposition.

I guess this is because they don’t have a big budget for special effects so the focus must be in the story itself.


I guess this is because they don’t have a big budget for special effects, so the focus must be ion the story itself. I guess this is because they don’t have a big budget for special effects, so the focus must be on the story itself.

Unfortunately, this year I have not visited many cinemas, because of the COVID.


Unfortunately, this year I have not visited many cinemas, because of the COVID. Unfortunately, this year I have not visited many cinemas, because of COVID.

“Covid” doesn’t take an article in English.

In my city some of these spaces have closed down.


In my city, some of these spaces have closed down. In my city, some of these spaces have closed down.

Who knows, maybe outdoors’s cinemas from the seventies will come back.


Who knows, maybe outdoors’s cinemas from the seventies will come back. Who knows, maybe outdoor cinemas from the seventies will come back.

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