my eEnglish is basic, i go me apresent. my English is basic, i go me apresent.

English is capitalized

mMy eEnglish is basic, i go me apresent. I will introduce myself. My English is basic. I will introduce myself.

I believe this is what you were going for.

1. mMy name is Isabelly 2. i haveI am 16 years old 3. iI play volleyboall 4. iI love sports 5. iI want to travel forto the in Estados UnidoUnited States 6. iI love money hahaha 7. iI work online 8. iI live in Brazil, Rio Grande Do Sul 9. i´mI wanted tips forto learning English. 1. My name is Isabelly 2. I am 16 years old 3. I play volleyball 4. I love sports 5. I want to travel to the United States 6. I love money hahaha 7. I work online 8. I live in Brazil, Rio Grande Do Sul 9. I want tips to learn English.

1. mMy name is Isabelly . 2. i haveI'm 16 years old. 3. iI play volleyboall . 4. iI love sports . 5. iI want travel forto the in Estados Unidos United States. 6. iI love money hahaha 7. iI work online . 8. iI live in Brazil, Rio Grande Do Sul . 9. i´mI wanted tips for learning English. 1. My name is Isabelly. 2. I'm 16 years old. 3. I play volleyball. 4. I love sports. 5. I want travel to the United States. 6. I love money hahaha 7. I work online. 8. I live in Brazil, Rio Grande Do Sul. 9. I want tips for learning English.

Periods after each sentence. You could have said "I'm wanting tips..." but that doesn't sound natural.

1. mMy name is Isabelly . 2. i haveI am 16 years old. 3. iI play volleyboall . 4. iI love sports . 5. iI want to travel forto the in Estados Unidos United States. 6. iI love money hahaha . 7. iI work online . 8. iI live in Brazil, Rio Grande Do Sul , Brazil. 9. i´mI wanted tips for learning English. 1. My name is Isabelly. 2. I am 16 years old. 3. I play volleyball. 4. I love sports. 5. I want to travel to the United States. 6. I love money hahaha. 7. I work online. 8. I live in Rio Grande Do Sul, Brazil. 9. I want tips for learning English.

Sentences begin with capital letters, and typically end with a period '.' In English, you don't have the age. You are the age. So, 'I am' and not 'I have'. Also, the state usually comes before the Country.

1. my name is Isabelly 2. i haveI am 16 years 3. iI play volleyboall 4. iI love sports 5. iI want to travel forto the in Estados UnidoUnited States 6. iI love money hahaha 7. iI work online 8. iI live in Brazil, Rio Grande Do Sul 9. i´mI wanted tips for learning English. 1. my name is Isabelly 2. I am 16 years 3. I play volleyball 4. I love sports 5. I want to travel to the United States 6. I love money hahaha 7. I work online 8. I live in Brazil, Rio Grande Do Sul 9. I want tips for learning English.