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SummerTeaWater

July 3, 2021

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My room

There are two computers and many books in my room.

I am a programmer, so I always use a computer in my office, even in my home.

I bought one more computer for experiencing the Apple environment.

It is totally different experiences between Window OS and Mack OS, but it is very interesting.

On the left side of my computer desk, there is a five-tier bookshelf which has many books.

I read more than one hundred books a year, so there is not enough place to store books in my room.

For this reason, I am reading e-books rather than paper books these days.

On the corner of my room, there is a shelve which has tea pots and many teas which I love to drink.

Drinking tea is one of my favorite hobbies and I can reduce my stress when drinking it.

All of those items make me feel happy and relax.

So I love my room very much.

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My room

There are two computers and many books in my room.

On the left side of my computer desk, there is a five-tier bookshelf which has many books.

So I love my room very much.

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SummerTeaWater

July 4, 2021

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My room

There are two computers and many books in my room.

On the left side of my computer desk, there is a five-tier bookshelf which has many books.

For this reason, I am reading e-books rather than paper books these days.

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SummerTeaWater

July 3, 2021

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My room


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There are two computers and many books in my room.


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I am a programmer, so I always use a computer in my office, even in my home.


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I bought one more computer for experiencing the Apple environment.


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It is totally different experiences between Window OS and Mack OS, but it is very interesting.


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On the left side of my computer desk, there is a five-tier bookshelf which has many books.


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I read more than one hundred books a year, so there is not enough place to store books in my room.


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For this reason, I am reading e-books rather than paper books these days.


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On the corner of my room, there is a shelve which has tea pots and many teas which I love to drink.


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Drinking tea is one of my favorite hobbies and I can reduce my stress when drinking it.


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All of those items make me feel happy and relax.


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So I love my room very much.


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