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Limiting tourism to historical cities and towns

Lately politicians are arguing about the necessity to limit tourist quantity in the cities in someway. I support the limitation of tourism for several reasons:
Firstly, massive tourism have enormous affectation in the local citizens way of living, especially in small cities, because city businesses tends to focus on tourist necessities leaving aside local people ones.
As a result, housing market exclusively offer small houses for seasonal stay with very high prices. By the same token small local shops with daily basis goods are replaced for restaurants and night clubs and bars.
Another important point is that tourists in large quantities usually produce environmental issues, standing out the ones related with noise and dirtiness, since tourists tend to have a very active nightlife the whole week, not only during the weekends.
In summary, although tourism is the main income of our country we should keep a balance in number between local people and tourists; taking some measures to prevent massive tourism.

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I support the limitation of tourism for several reasons:

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Limiting tourism to historical cities and towns

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Limiting tourism to historical cities and towns


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I support the limitation of tourism for several reasons:


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Lately politicians are arguing about the necessity to limit tourist quantity in the cities in someway.


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Firstly, massive tourism have enormous affectation in the local citizens way of living, especially in small cities, because city businesses tends to focus on tourist necessities leaving aside local people ones.


Firstly, massive tourism haves an enormous aeffectation i on the local citizens way of living, especially in small cities, because city businesses tends to focus on tourist necessities leaving aside those of local people ones. Firstly, massive tourism has an enormous effect on the local citizens way of living, especially in small cities, because city businesses tend to focus on tourist necessities leaving aside those of local people.

Firstly, massive tourism haves enormous affectation iimpact on the local citizens' way of living, especially in small cities, because city businesses tends to focus on tourist necessities leaving aside the needs of the local people ones. Firstly, massive tourism has enormous impact on the local citizens' way of living, especially in small cities, because city businesses tend to focus on tourist necessities leaving aside the needs of the local people.

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As a result, housing market exclusively offer small houses for seasonal stay with very high prices.


As a result, the housing market exclusively offers small houses for seasonal stays with very high prices. As a result, the housing market exclusively offers small houses for seasonal stays with very high prices.

As a result, the housing market exclusively offers small houses for seasonal stay withs at very high prices. As a result, the housing market exclusively offers small houses for seasonal stays at very high prices.

By the same token small local shops with daily basis goods are replaced for restaurants and night clubs and bars.


By the same token small local shops with daily basis goods are replaced forwith restaurants and, night clubs and bars. By the same token small local shops with daily goods are replaced with restaurants, night clubs and bars.

By the same token, small local shops withselling daily basisc goods are replaced forby restaurants and, night clubs and bars. By the same token, small local shops selling daily basic goods are replaced by restaurants, night clubs and bars.

Another important point is that tourists in large quantities usually produce environmental issues, standing out the ones related with noise and dirtiness, since tourists tend to have a very active nightlife the whole week, not only during the weekends.


Another important point is that tourists in large quantities usually produce environmental issues, standing out theespecially ones related withto noise and dirtiness, since tourists tend to have a very active nightlife the whole week, not only during the weekends. Another important point is that tourists in large quantities usually produce environmental issues, especially ones related to noise and dirtiness, since tourists tend to have a very active nightlife the whole week, not only during the weekends.

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In summary, although tourism is the main income of our country we should keep a balance in number between local people and tourists; taking some measures to prevent massive tourism.


In summary, although tourism is the main income of our country we should keep a balance in number between local people and tourists; by taking some measures to prevent massive tourism. In summary, although tourism is the main income of our country we should keep a balance in number between local people and tourists by taking some measures to prevent massive tourism.

In summary, although tourism is the main income ofgenerator for our country, we should keep a balance in number betweenbetween the number of local people and tourists; by taking some measures to prevent massive tourism. In summary, although tourism is the main income generator for our country, we should keep a balance between the number of local people and tourists by taking measures to prevent massive tourism.

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