My Life in SZ (18) - The Important Man Behind My Boss My Life in SZ (18) - The Important Man Behind My Boss

My Life in SZ (18) - The Important Man Behind My Boss My Life in SZ (18) - The Important Man Behind My Boss

The business was exceeding my boss's expectations, they. It earned a lot. The business was exceeding my boss's expectations. It earned a lot.

The second sentence would sound better if it said it earned a lot of money.

The business was exceeding my boss's expectations, because they earned a lot. The business was exceeding my boss's expectations because they earned a lot.

The business was exceeding my boss's expectations,; they earned a lot. The business was exceeding my boss's expectations; they earned a lot.

They often invited us to take leisurerelax at sea shore in the afternoon, or saing and danced in Disco club at night. They often invited us to relax at sea shore in the afternoon, or sing and dance in Disco club at night.

They often invited us to take leisure at sea shoreparty with them on the beach in the afternoon, or sato sing and danced in D at a disco club at night. They often invited us to party with them on the beach in the afternoon or to sing and dance at a disco club at night.

They often invited us to take leisure at sea shore in the afternoon, or sang and danced in Da day on the beach in the afternoon, or to go singing and dancing at the disco club at night. They often invited us to a day on the beach in the afternoon, or to go singing and dancing at the disco club at night.

"day on the beach" sounds more natural to me this way (US English).

It's not surpriseing that I could dance until two or three o’clock in the morning, h. However, now, I would not go there even if you paid to me. It's not surprising that I could dance until two or three o’clock in the morning. However, now I would not go there even if you paid me.

It's not surpriseing that I could dance until two or three o'clock in the morning, however, now, I would not go there even paid toif they were to pay me. It's not surprising that I could dance until two or three o'clock in the morning, however, now, I would not go there even if they were to pay me.

It's not surpriseing that I could dance until two or three clock in the morning, howeverbut now, I would not go there even paid to meif you paid me to. It's not surprising that I could dance until two or three clock in the morning, but now, I would not go there even if you paid me to.

Sister Wang (one of my bosses) drove a Toyota (car) which iwas expensive for us to buy. Sister Wang (one of my bosses) drove a Toyota (car) which was expensive for us to buy.

Sister Wang (one of my bosses) drove a Toyota (car), which iwas expensive for us. Sister Wang (one of my bosses) drove a Toyota (car), which was expensive for us.

You can remove "car" here if you want. Many people often just say the brand name.

At that time, most of us even didn'tdidn’t even know how to drive. At that time, most of us didn’t even know how to drive.

At that time, most of us even didn't even know how to drive. At that time, most of us didn't even know how to drive.

This is the more natural order in the US.

At that time, most of us even didn't even know how to drive. At that time, most of us didn't even know how to drive.

I remembered an expert once said in a local newspaper predicting China would be a vehicle big country in 20 years. I remembered an expert once said in a local newspaper predicting China would be a vehicle big country in 20 years.

I’m not sure what you are trying to say here. Are you trying to say that China would have a lot of cars in 20 years? The last part might be better “China would have a large number vehicles on the road in 20 years.”

I remembered an expert once saipredicted in a local newspaper predictingthat China would be a big vehicle big country in 20 years. I remembered an expert once predicted in a local newspaper that China would be a big vehicle country in 20 years.

I remembered an expert once said in a local newspaper predictingthat China would be a big vehicle big country / producer in 20 years. I remembered an expert once said in a local newspaper that China would be a big vehicle country / producer in 20 years.

Having both "once said" and "predicted" in the sentence is redundant, so you should choose one or the other. An example with "predicted": "I remember reading in a local newspaper that an expert predicted that China would be a big vehicle country in 20 years."

We didn't believe that, m. Many of us couldn't imagine we canthat we could buy a car one day. We didn't believe that. Many of us couldn't imagine that we could buy a car one day.

We didn't believe that, because many of us couldn't imagine we canthat we could buy a car one day. We didn't believe that because many of us couldn't imagine that we could buy a car one day.

This is subjunctive tense.

We didn't believe that, since many of us couldn't imagine we can'd be able to buy a car one day. We didn't believe that, since many of us couldn't imagine we'd be able to buy a car one day.

In the Disco club room, sometimes we cwould meet some of sSister Wang's friends, and nearly all of them had cars. In the Disco club, sometimes we would meet some of Sister Wang's friends, and nearly all of them had cars.

In the USA disco is more often called a nightclub.

In the Ddisco club room, sometimes we cwould meet some of sSister Wang's friends, and nearly all of them had cars. In the disco club room, sometimes we would meet some of Sister Wang's friends and nearly all of them had cars.

In the Ddisco club room, sometimes we could meet some of sSister Wang's friends, and nearly all of them had cars. In the disco club room, sometimes we could meet some of Sister Wang's friends, and nearly all of them had cars.

She often talked loudly when she promised to delgete their traffic fining letter or record cleared because her husband was a police officer with a high rank. She often talked loudly when she promised to get their traffic fining letter or record cleared because her husband was a police officer with a high rank.

In the USA traffic fining letter probably translates to “ticket”

She often talspoked loudly when she promised to delete their traffic fining letteres or records because her husband was a police officer with a high rank. She often spoke loudly when she promised to delete their traffic fines or records because her husband was a police officer with a high rank.

She often talked loudly when sheand promised to delete their traffic fining lettercitations or record because her husband was a high-ranking police officer with a high rank. She often talked loudly and promised to delete their traffic citations or record because her husband was a high-ranking police officer.

"with a high-rank" is fine, but "high-ranking" sounds more natural.

SIf she made a call to her husband it could solve many problems. If she made a call to her husband it could solve many problems.

She would madke a call to her husband couldto solve many problems. She would make a call to her husband to solve many problems.

She made a calls to her husband couldto solve many problems. She made calls to her husband to solve many problems.

I saw her husband many times, h. He was kind to us since we were his staff too. I saw her husband many times. He was kind to us since we were his staff too.

I saw her husband many times, h. He was kind to us since we were his staff, too. I saw her husband many times. He was kind to us since we were his staff, too.

I saw her husband many times,; he was kind to us since we were his staff too. I saw her husband many times; he was kind to us since we were his staff too.

He once said they had speeded up arranging for many families to migrate to Hong Kong because the handover of Hong Kong in 1997 iwas approaching, and the families were working for them. He once said they had sped up arranging for many families to migrate to Hong Kong because the handover of Hong Kong in 1997 was approaching, and the families were working for them.

He once said they had speeded up arranging for many families to emigrateion to Hong Kong for many families because the handover of Hong Kong in 1997 iwas approaching, and so the families were working for them. He once said they had sped up arranging emigration to Hong Kong for many families because the handover of Hong Kong in 1997 was approaching so the families were working for them.

He once said they had speeded up arranging for many families to migrate to Hong Kong because the handover of Hong Kong in 1997 iwas approaching, and so the families were working for them. He once said they had speeded up arranging for many families to migrate to Hong Kong because the handover of Hong Kong in 1997 was approaching, and so the families were working for them.

I didn't understand his words then, however,but I get his meaning now. I didn't understand his words then, but I get his meaning now.

You can't use "however" in the middle of the sentence. You either need to start a new sentence, or use a semicolon to separate the two clauses.