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heatedcanine

Nov. 23, 2019

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GSOMNIA that brings about the restless nights for Moon.

What is GSOMNIA?
I don't know much, but I imagine that G-somnia is a kind of insomnia that makes Mr. Moon sleepless at night.

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Dec. 9, 2019

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GSOMNIA that brings about the restless nights for Moon.

What is GSOMNIA?

Moon sleepless at night.

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heatedcanine

Nov. 24, 2019

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GSOMNIA that brings about the restless nights for Moon.


GSOMNIA, that brings about thee cause of restless nights for Moon. GSOMNIA, the cause of restless nights for Moon.

GSOMNIA that brings about thegives Moon restless nights. (GSOMNIA: something that gives Moon restless nights for Moon.) GSOMNIA gives Moon restless nights. (GSOMNIA: something that gives Moon restless nights.)

Something can "give" you restless nights (this is the most natural way of expressing this idea in English), or at a push cause or make you to have or experience restless nights (but this is a somewhat awkward formulation, I feel). I don't think "bring about" general has a recepient for the action, i.e. you don't really bring anything about "for" someone.

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I don't know much, but I imagine that G-somnia is a kind of insomnia that makes Mr.


I don't know much about this, but I imagine that G-somnia is a kind of insomnia that makes Mr. I don't know much about this, but I imagine that G-somnia is a kind of insomnia that makes Mr.

This is not technically wrong, and maybe I'm being a bit picky/pedantic, but I don't think it's really coherent to say "I don't know much" here. My immediate reaction is to ask: "don't know much about what?".

I don't know muchreally know, but I imagine that G-somnia is a kind of insomnia that makes Mr. I don't really know, but I imagine that G-somnia is a kind of insomnia that makes Mr.

Moon sleepless at night.


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