Reasons for not completingWhy I didn't do my homework Why I didn't do my homework

just a more natural sounding explanation

I was getting really exhausted from the beginningstart of the day. I was getting really exhausted from the start of the day.

I was getting've been really exhausted fromsince the beginning of the day. I've been really exhausted since the beginning of the day.

very good attempt here but incorrect past tense Present Perfect Progressive tense. This is actually a super complicated part of english but its also super important for more examples watch some comedy specials from America or you can look at short stories you can look up "story time" on american youtube for some fantastic and LONG past tense examples in order to get a better grip

As known by all Chinese students, we are required to get to the playground before 6:45 to do Morning Run. As known by all Chinese students, we are required to get to the playground before 6:45 to do Morning Run.

Add a space after each comma and period. This is much more important in English than in Chinese.

As known by all Chinese students, know, we are required to geto to the playground before 6:45 to dgo Mfor a morning Rrun. As all Chinese students know, we are required to go to the playground before 6:45 to go for a morning run.

Active voice not passive sounds better for As all Chinese students know

As I (had) stayed up late the night before, keeping awake becoames a challenge for me. As I (had) stayed up late the night before, keeping awake became a challenge for me.

As I stayed up late the night before,keep staying awake becomewas a challenge for me. As I stayed up late the night before, staying awake was a challenge for me.

哈哈 relatable Stay awake sounds more natural than keep awake

As I had stayed up late the night before,keeping awake becomewas a challenge for me. As I had stayed up late the night before,keeping awake was a challenge for me.

once again wrong tense Past perfect for the first part but past progressive for the next part.

Then, homeworks are was assigned to us and soon ithey piled up into a huge stack. Then, homework was assigned to us and soon it piled up into a huge stack.

“Homework” is uncountable.

Then, homeworks a were assigned to us and soon they piled up into a huge stack. Then homework were assigned to us and soon they piled up into a huge stack.

Homework is a concept on its own so singular is enough

Then, homeworks are is assigned to us and soon they piled up into a huge stack. Then, homework is assigned to us and they pile up into a huge stack.

honestly pretty ok there aren't any direct tense mistakes but the actual flow is not too native i suggest reworking the sentence into "On top of that we had all this homework to the point where it piled up to a huge stack"

I've made all my efforts to respond tocomplete them until finally they amount became uncontrollable. I made all my efforts to complete them until finally the amount became uncontrollable.

It's better to say complete homework, rather than respond, respond it better for calls/messages/emails instead of tasks

I've made all my efforts to respond to them until finally they became uncontrollable. I made all my efforts to respond to them until finally they became uncontrollable.

wrong tense were talking about the past perfect as the homework was already not completed in the past and that time is over saying that it "became" something is a good indicator that the sentence is in the past perfect as it is already transformed

Swainging among the options of "whether to do my homework",… Swinging among the options of "whether to do my homework",…

Merge this with the next sentence.

Swang amongI debated between the options of "whether to dodoing my homework", I debated between the options of doing my homework

I Swang amongbetween the options of "whether to do my homework", I Swang between the options of "whether to do my homework",

overall good sentence however when we say "options" we generally follow or previously state at least 2 different conditionals with it saying "options of 'whether to do my homework'" is just unusual but i don't see a direct error its just very close

I finally surrendered to my inner voice, which tellsold me to relax. I finally surrendered to my inner voice, which told me to relax.

Ior finally surrendereding to my inner voice, which tells me to relax. or finally surrendering to my inner voice, which tells me to relax

I finally surrendered to my inner voice which tellsold me to relax. I finally surrendered to my inner voice which told me to relax.

past perfect tense

So I takeook out my mobile and began to play tetris. So I took out my mobile and began to play tetris.

So I takeook out my mobile and began to play tetris. So I took out my mobile and began to play tetris.

So I takeook out my mobile and began to play tetris. So I took out my mobile and began to play tetris.

Past perfect progressive when reffering to a situation in the past requires that you stick with it for more of the story. i suggest until you have seen the past perfect progressive being done ALOT you should avoid using it until you get it because its super hard and there are alot of verb endings that completly change

The problem lies in the fact that gaming is not a sustainable solution. The problem lies in the fact that gaming is not a sustainable solution.

At least it's not league of legends!

While relieving me from stress caused by study,so pleasurable activity still cannot solve my fatigueAlthough it helps with the stress caused by studying, hobbies still cannot help me to stay awake/solve the problem of me being so tired. Although it helps with the stress caused by studying, hobbies still cannot help me to stay awake/solve the problem of me being so tired.

Hobby is better than pleasurable activity

While relieving me from stress caused by study,so such pleasurable activity still cannot solve my fatigue. While relieving me from stress caused by study, such pleasurable activity still cannot solve my fatigue.

very artistic sentence. good excluding the mistake